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I don’t agree with the statement that Mergers and Acquisitions are not always a beneficial strategy. My essay will be divided into five parts.
The first paragraph: I will explain my position and give the definition of merger and acquisition.
The second paragraph: Mergers and acquisitions will bring larger market share and new markets. Then I will give some examples about them.
The third paragraph: mergers and acquisitions will lead to fewer costs and higher profits. Analyze from the aspects of company scale, suppliers, employees, etc.
The fourth paragraph: many governments offer tax reductions once M&A are complete.
Conclusion: mergers and acquisitions are beneficial in many aspects.

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Corporate finance:
1.Once a company reaches the mature stage of its growth cycle it will find organic growth difficult. Acquisitions provide a quick solution for a company following a growth strategy that finds itself in this position.
2.Horizontal acquisitions increase market share and hence increase a company’s ability to earn monopoly profits, whereas vertical acquisitions increase a company’s power in raw material or distribution markets.
3.A merger is a friendly reorganisation of assets into a new organisation.

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After my first tutorial I realized that I had to answer to what extent I disagree with this point of view, not disagree at all. At the same time I learned that what I wanted to write was a point-to-point essay. So I'm going to divide the main body of my essay into three paragraphs, demonstrating its advantages and some drawbacks separately, and at the same time proving the advantages outweigh the flaws. The argument in the third paragraph is too simple, so after the tutorial, I decided to change it to government regulation.

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In my first paragraph, the definition of M&A has not been cited correctly, so i will use an accurate website name instead. Besides, I used the subjective statement incorrectly, so I'll state my opinion directly. I also made citation errors in the main paragraph section and forgot how to cite the book. I will also correct it in the second draft. We discussed adding concluding sentences to my body paragraphs that summarise the main idea covered in the paragraph and link back to answer the essay question of “To what extent”? So, I will add these sentences at the end of the two paragraphs I have already written. I haven't written the third paragraph yet, I will finish the third paragraph and the conclusion before the next tutorial.