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In everyone's life, must have adversities and difficulties. At that time, in my case, I thought about how to face it, or how to overcome it. I have matured and grown up to now since the day I started leaving my family to join the military environment.

On the first day of the new unit, all were unfamiliar to me from the environment to the comrades. The first day at the unit, strange and strange, I did not talk to anyone, I was sad and missed my family a lot, especially my mother and tears of farewell. But after joining the unit for about 1 month, I have learned a lot of things here. From a boy who couldn't wash dishes or sweep the house, thanks to this I had to do everything. I had to practice cooking, laundry for dozens of people. The time I did wrong was in the middle of the hot summer afternoon. I had to carry heavy things on my shoulders. The times I had to walk dozens of kilometers to evacuate people to avoid storms. Besides, I had to myself hand dig holes to plant dozens of trees in the mountains to protect nature and the environment. Every time I do something, I just need to meet a few obstacles and I can give up, but in the military, it is different, no matter what difficulties I had to try to overcome the work I receive d and complete the task well. I also don't forget to reminisce about the most memorable moments when I was rolling around with my teammates on the field during training sessions, the field trips were tiring but full of laughter, and the birthdays of my teammates were warm, or nights watching with the stars.

It was probably the most difficult time for me. I feel grateful that those hardships have made me a more mature and mature person. I will never forget it-those moments of memories. It will always be imprinted in my heart. You also should try to overcome yourself then you can overcome difficulties in this life.

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In everyone's life, everyone must have adversities and difficulties. At that time, I (“myself”-->quit) thought about how to face it, how to overcome it. (“Finally myself” --> quit)I have matured and grown up to now since the day I started leaving my family to join the military environment.

(“In the past, our ancestors shed their blood to regain peace and there were also people who never returned. After the country was liberated, the young people set out together to fulfill their sacred duty to the Fatherland to maintain and protect the peace together”-->quit it to change to another topic sentence). On the first day of the new unit, all were unfamiliar to me from the environment to the comrades. The first day at the unit, strange and strange, (I-subject) did not talk to anyone, I was sad and missed my family a lot, especially my mother and tears of farewell. But after joining the unit for about 1 month, I have learn(“learned” – V3/ed)  a lot of things here. From a boy who can't (couldn’t- past simple) wash dish (dishes- multiple) or sweep the house, thanks to this I have (had-V3/ed) to do everything. I have (had-V3/ed) to practice cooking, laundry for dozens of people. The times I did wrong (was-past simple) in the middle of the hot summer afternoon. I had to carry heavy things on my shoulder (shoulders-multiple). The times I had to walk dozens of kilometers to evacuate people to avoid storms. Besides, I had to myself hand dig holes to plant dozens of trees in the mountains to protect nature and the environment(.) Every time I do something, I just need to meet a few obstacles and I can give up, but in the military(,)  it is (was-past simple) different, no matter what difficulties I have (had-V3/ed) to try to overcome to (in order to-replaced for “to”)receive and complete the task well. I also don't forget to reminisce about the most memorable moments when I was rolling around with my teammate (teammates-multiple) on the field during training sessions, the field trips were tiring but full of laughter (laughters-multiple) and the birthdays of my teammates were warm or nights watching with the stars... ( “Not yet, before the day of seeing off the soldiers, the unit organized a night to meet and say goodbye to teammates with many meaningful activities. In the cozy atmosphere of the last days of the army, everyone sings and sings, new soldiers and old soldiers together talk about their thoughts, feelings, and messages to each other wherever they are, whatever they do. promoting the tradition and qualities of "Uncle Ho's soldiers"... Particularly, the High Command also organized a meeting with soldiers who had successfully completed their tasks as an encouragement and encouragement for soldiers with typical achievements to play. contributing to the cause of army construction, consolidating national defense and defending the Fatherland, and at the same time creating motivation for active-duty soldiers to continue to follow the example and strive to successfully complete their tasks.”--> quit )

It was probably the most difficult time for me. I feel grateful that those hardships have made me a more mature and mature person. I will never forget it-those moments of memories. It will always be imprinted in my heart. You try to overcome yourself then you can overcome difficulties in this life.

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INTRODUCTION
Hook:

Is difficulty the turning point to success?

Background information

-About 5 years ago when I left school
-I signed up for military service in Gia Lai province, where is my hometown

Thesis statement

For me, maturity is when I conquer difficulties and conquer myself

BODY PARAGRAPH

The first day I joined the unit, I felt very lonely and lost when I was surrounded by strangers.


In the days that followed, I was less homesick as I got used to the environment there.


I have to do the laundry and cook by myself, besides exercising in the field makes me too tired.

The times I was punished for push-ups and marches. I feel my fitness is getting better and better


the picnics are tiring but full of laughter


The scene of helping the people trapped by the storm. The activities to participate with the children are unforgettable

CONCLUSION

Through those experiences I feel that I am more mature from my actions as well as the way I think. I feel full of energy. Learn new things in this life. It makes me erase self-deprecating thoughts. I think no one can change yourself unless you really want to change.