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Some positives were that the advice did help and it was from someone who didn’t see what you wrote and it helps us see what we did a good job on and what we need to improve on.

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The good things about having these media albums are that we can get feedback on our work, so that we know what we should fix and what we could fix. I think we don’t have to change anything on the media album activity because it already does what it’s supposed to do perfectly: we get accurate feedback on our work from other people.

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The positives about this activity is that you get to know what you need to improve on and make corrections.These are some positive things about a media album

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One positive thing from yesterday is that I got to hear someone else’s opinion about my writing, something that I need to work on is my commentary.

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I think some positives of this activity was that we all got to write comments and we all got comments. Also another positive was that we got to get good things and also a comment to improve it.

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Some positives ideas about this activity was we corrected each other’s work and help each other by giving feedback to what they should improve next time and the things that they did well on. Also I think this activity went well so, I think there’s nothing we can do to change it.

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I think this activity was cool and the positive was that we got to tell eachother  on how to get better so next time you wouldn’t make the same mistake as you did last  time

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Something positive is a learned I needed help on my claim. I don’t feel like anything needs to be changed.Another positive was I got to help someone else’s writing.

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Well I was not here yesterday but what I think that the positives of the media album activity that we have to change is to get it well organized and improve on the thing that we need to work on.

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Some positives from yesterday’s activity was we got advice on how to get better on out evidence organizer and what we could do better is be more specific and maybe take less time to do this activity.

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Some positives were telling them if they had a good claim, commentary, conclusion etc. Or you could give them suggestions about what they should do next time.

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Some positives in this activity was other people give a good amount of advice and work on what they need to fix.

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One positive thing about it was that we go to tell eachother  what we did good and what we need to work on becuase when you read your own work you think it’s all right but it’s not so then when another person reads it they could actually see what’s wrong

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Some positives for that activity is that we are learning what we have to do in order to get it right the next time. Something we can fix is the handwriting on some people’s work because when it is sloppy you can’t read anything of what the people are writing.

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Some positive about this activity was the your partner could tell you if you needed to improve something.

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The good thing about this activity was to tell people what the need to work on so they become better writers. This shows that people’s commentary will just be a bit better, their evidence, too. They may just be a journalist one day. You never know. All because they got feedback on what they can work on. It also helped improvement on what you can work on.

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One positive thing about the media album is that your peer give constructive criticism which will help you improve your writing and make it better.Also you practice ''grading'' paper which will help you "grade" your own