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1152445 - Utusan Malaysia, 3 October 2017

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1152445 - Utusan Malaysia, 3 October 2017

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I have selected a broadsheet newspaper which is Utusan Malaysia. The main headlines used are short, simple and bold that can attract people’s attention to read the stories. They are also written in hammer style.

Besides, there were good news leads that explain clearly about the headline and the entire news. The cutlines awere placed below each photo, and there are 6 columns of the entire page. The photos used in the story mostly in horizontal style and one of them is in a vertical style.

In my point of view, this story is a bit long that will make readers easy to feel bored but it looks nice because many photos have been used in the story.

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kosmo 21 sep 2017
from my perspective, the news article is interesting. it has fulfilled the 4 basic elements of newspaper which is headline, text, photos and cutline.
the headline of news story is set above the main headline. it's    purpose is to give information about the headline.
the text is writen in L-shaped text bock. it is also written in vertical way.the photo shape in the news story is horizontal. there is also cutline below the photo to explain the photo.
this news story also uses a mugshot . finally the news article is interesting and has succeeded in attracting the people attention to read it

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1152452- Berita Harian, Wednesday, 4 October 2017.

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1152452- Berita Harian, Wednesday, 4 October 2017.

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The news that I have chosen is from Berita Harian and the story that I attached is about motif of murder in Las Vegas,Nevada.

The story design of this story are using one horizontal photo. For my Opinion, using horizontal photo is good because can create the illusion that the stories are shorter and can attract the eyes of reader to read this story. Furthermore, this story have a kicker and a cutline which is related to the photo and easy for reader to understand what happen. This news using 3 columns of lines and 1 in a headline which means that suitable and neat for using. For me, this story is attractive and easy to understand because mystery story and the text is not too long. The reader can read until the end. Besides that, this story have an additional information and dateline to facilitate readers know more about this issue because this story occurs abroad. That’s all from me. Thank You.

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KOSMO,21 September 2017

From my perspective, the news article is interesting and has fulfilled the rules of designing a story. It has the four basic elements of newspaper which are headline, text, photos and cutline to attract the audiences to read it.

As for the headline, it is a good one as it summarizes the content of the story. The number of the line the headline has is one because the story has 4 columns. The news story uses a kicker headline style which is set above the main headline as its supplement.

Besides that, the text is written in L-shaped text block. The headline and its text also move along the page horizontally. It is a good choice as it makes the story looks shorter and pleasant to read.

The photo shape that is used for the article is a horizontal photo which has a cutline below the photo to describe the image.

So, I think that this article is interesting and has succeeded in attracting the audiences’ attention to read it.

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Based on the news entitled “Bukan pendirian anggota ASEAN” from Berita Harian 26 Sept 2017, the editor chooses to use kicker headline which set above the main headline and gives additional information. To make the news look more interesting, the editor makes it horizontal. It has five columns and the photo used is a mugshot which is a close-up photo of someone’s face and only use a very small space. The byline is placed at the top of the news and the dateline is placed after the byline. Furthermore, the editor makes a lift out quote. That’s all I can conclude from the news. Thank you.

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Berita harian, 1 oktober 2017

In this newspaperper section, the headline that has been used in this news was long which it was 4 lines. I think the photo horizontal shape. Then, i think that news that i have selected followed the rules of story design

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I would like to state my opinion about format that have been use at this picture. It using one vertical photo and this is the dominant photo. It using dramatic shape and also putting stories around vertical photo. There is a logo that have been used. Completed with main headline also have byline and an attractive caption using that surely catch eye readers to read this article. The article also provided the dateline to give readers extra information.

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1152850-Nur Fatin Amni Bt Zukri

BERITA HARIAN, Friday , 6 October 2017

First of all, I would like to summarize the article that I have read from Berita Harian’s newspaper page 14. We can see through the headline that will attract all the readers outside including me. This article is about two male apes who specialize and proficient in picking Petai and Durian. These apes were raised by Abdul Malek who was teach them to become a excellent picker of various types of fruit. Overall this article is all about those famous apes include how the guardian teach, where they comes from, how they learn, what they eat and so on.

Beside that, to avoid bias and potentially misleading coverage, it is important to comment and critique the news that reader have read.  The story design in this news are consist of the headline, photo and text.  As we all know usually those apes only famous with their proficient in picking coconut but something different about those apes make them special and became one of the news for reporter. For me, the headline of this article was intriguing and attractive that can attract attention readers. Next, the photo. Photo in this article is so unclear, not relevant, unsuitable to the headline that are given. It is because the headline talk about petai and durian while this photo is about apes picking a coconut The different and special thing about the apes is can pick a various type of fruit. In my opinion, if I be a reporter, I will put the photo of the apes picking durian or another fruit except coconut. It make more impressive for reader to read that story. Last, the text is horizontal, simple but too long  only to describe about those apes. It will make a little boring to reader. Take those apes as a news maybe it could be a quite funny ,seem like a reporter does not have news to cover but the privilege of that apes was highlighted by the reporter. Unfortunately, this article come with inaccurate photo make the reader disappointed. That's all from me.:)

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I would like to state my opinionabout format that have been use at this picture. It using one vertical photo and this is the dominant photo. It using dramatic shape and also putting stories around vertical photo. This one is strong photo to anchor a story. Completed with main headline also have byline and an attractive caption using that surely catch eye readers to read this article.

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BERITA HARIAN, FRIDAY
6 OKTOBER 2017

I choose the news from Berita Harian. This story is about muslims in Malaysia protested the party of wine.
This story reporter by Saharuddin Abdullah. This news have horizontal photo and horizontal story design.
Then, the format that used are headline,dateline,text,quote,cutline and other.
In my opinion, i think the color of photo is unclear but headline and picture in this news is interesting because the picture clearly shows someone pointing to a liquor by breaking a bottle of wine and for me this news make people interested to read.

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BERITA HARIAN
6 Oktober 2017

Based on this news in local newspaper which is latest issue about Tahfiz Center Tragedy, this news used the horizontal story design and also  horizontal photo. There have two photos enough to tell about the story. Furthermore, the format that used are hammer headlines which followed by a traditional secondary headline which gives the pertinent information. Besides that, the designer used text shapes into rectangle. It also have headline, text, photos, cutlines and logo.

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1152451Harian Metro, Thursday, 5 October 2017  The front page of the news show the main issue recently. The news about Neraka Si Bulus may attract the readers in Malaysian to read because Malaysian people so sensitive.  The story design in this news are consist the jumpline. The dominan picture was horizontal and the photo enough to tell the story.

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1152451Harian Metro, Thursday, 5 October 2017  The front page of the news show the main issue recently. The news about Neraka Si Bulus may attract the readers in Malaysian to read because Malaysian people so sensitive.  The story design in this news are consist the jumpline. The dominan picture was horizontal and the photo enough to tell the story.

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This story is about progress in fighting child sex crimes.this design have hammer as explain to the reader.They are rosmah tell New York meeting about Malaysia's experience. this story not put photo to attract the reader interesting for take serious about this issue

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1152456
Harian Metro, Thursday ,5 October 2017 
I choose this news because the singer are related to each other. This news can attract adolescents and Korean fans interest.
  The story design in this news are consist of the headline, photo and text. The headline is in horizontal, the text and the photo are in vertical shape.
  In my opinion, the headline not really interesting to the readers. The text era not clear about the issue.

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BERITA HARIAN
3 Oktober 2017

I would choose a Berita harian newspaper to comment about what is good or bad of story design.This story by Reporter Mohd Aizat Shamsuddin under the 'hiburan'' head. The headline is about 'Tuah Wajah Iras Amani'.The photo shape for this design is vertical shape.The text is clean and attractive but it cannot avoid from 'dumb dummying' .Long vertical legs can get tiring to read but text arranged.The position of photo for this design on the proper side.In this story there is no mugshot .Head;ine anf text more along

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Berita Harian
1 Oktober 2017

I would choose a Berita Harian newspaper in order for me to comment and to make suggestion about the story design of this news.
Based on what I had learned in lecture.This news used horizontal story design that makes the story shorter. The headline catches on reader's eyes. Readers are eager to know about issue in Syria. Then, the reporter puts on deck to make more attractive reading.Otherwise, there is mug shot located on the top right of news which makes people would stay focusing to read the news.The news have some photos that can more colouring and attractive to read. The caption portrays the real situation on the picture. Not to forget, the reporter used the tagline at the end of paragraph news.So that, people keep following the news and know what happened on him.The new values which is conflict between countries. In a conclusion, this news is very interesting and can attract the reader although the news is common place.

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Berita Harian, Sunday, 1 Oktober 2017

The story is an about the two members of TLDM died during training physical. Their family was so shocked about this news and want to know the real cause of death.
The story design in this news are the horizontal style which is contain kickers located above the main headline, cutline beside the photo, byline give information about the writer, quote inside the text and deck which is give an additional information about the news.
In my opinion, the photo that they taken is not suitable because it doesn't show the real story, not proper picture which is didn't show the sadness of their family. But i think the headline is quite interesting and make people attractive to read this story.

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muhammad nur aliffi bin mulyani
Sinar Harian, Wednesday, 6 November 2013

In my opinion I can say that the headline followed by the secondary headline. The photo shape for this design is horizontal shape. In this article use direct quotes. The story design is in L-shaped text block which is wrap the photo. Position the photo on the proper side – whichever side forces the action in the photo to move towards the text. The article use legs   2 inches deep. The design use 5 columns and the caption placed at top-right photo

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Harian Metro, Thursday, 5 October 2017

I have chosen the news from Harian Metro and the issue is about a missing pet, tortoise.

I would like to state my views about the story design that have been used. This news have horizontal picture. In addition, the format that used are headline, byline, dateline, text, photo, quote and cutline and so on.

In my opinion, the headline are so interesting and make people want to read this news.

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Harian Metro,Thursday, 5 October 2017
This story is about a Malaysian citizen who accidentally broke his neck while his trying to weightlifting at the gym.
The story design of this news have the horizontal headline, photo, cutline, mugshot, dateline, quote and the text.
In my opinion, I think the headline not that attractive to pleased the readers but the photo can be eye-catching. Moreover, this stories focused to the athlete or people that hardcore with the gym to be more careful with themselves.

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Harian Metro, Thursday, 5 October 2017

I have selected the newspaper from Harian Metro and the issue about a singer from South Korea who used to be a girl group that cannot adapt to be a solo singer after left the group.
The story design in this news are the headline and the text is in horizontal shape and the photo in a vertical shape.
In my opinion, the text is quite interesting but they not put the dateline and also the cutline under the photo. I think they can select or choose the photo that more dominant to attract the readers.

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Khairun Izyani Binti Abdul Hamid @ Atan 

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Khairun Izyani Binti Abdul Hamid @ Atan 

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1152458 (TBA10)
Berita Harian, Sunday, 1October 2017
the story design in this news are the horizontal headline and photo,the cutline included,photo credit and text's shape
first of all this news is about a disable person could reach his success with his parent's support.
the horizontal headline used in this news was really eye-catching and attract the reader to knows the story
moreover, the horizontal photo was focused on the student holding the certificate alongside with his family. in addition, the cutline under the photo explain the situation of the photo briefly which made the news reader want to explore about the news.
the photo credits used above the photo marked that the photo belong to the right owner.
last but not least, the text used in this news was in the rectangular shape which the edges was aligned together.
the value in this news is human spirit even though a disable person could succeed.

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1152851 (tba10)
Metro ,1 Oktober 2017

I have selected the newspaper from Metro. This issues is about a irresponsible mother who left her son to go to vacation. The format is using horizontal text and also have a liftout quotes. i can tell this news have a fulfill format of designing of issues including headline,hammer,byline, dateline,text, photo and cutline.
in my opinion also, the headline so attracted and make a reader want  to know  even this issues occur in global.

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Khairun Izyani Binti Abdul Hamid @Atan  

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Khairun Izyani Binti Abdul Hamid @Atan  

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1152458 ( TBA 10)
Berita Harian , Sunday, 1 October 2017
The story design in this news are the horizontal headline and photo, the cutlines, photo credit and the shape of text.
The news is about a disable person was succeed with his parent's support.
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Nurul Nadhirah Bt Mior Abdul Rahman, TBA 10, 1152457. Berita Harian, Ahad, 1 Oktober 2017.

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Nurul Nadhirah Bt Mior Abdul Rahman, TBA 10, 1152457. Berita Harian, Ahad, 1 Oktober 2017.

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the news that i chosen is about ethnic Rohingya.
the story design which has been used are , firstly, the dominant photo that they used horizontal photo, under the photo is cutline, than headline, deck, byline and tagline. After that,  they are direct quote, liftout quote, mugshot and name of source.
In my opinion, the headline and photo of news is very clear , appropriate, attractive between of both. Beside that, the photo and headline chosen will make the reader draw and sympathy with ethnic Rohingya. Than, the text are not very longer and easy to understand the contents with the addition of information.  After that, news that can be trusted  with reliable sources that the writer inform briefly about the sources with mugshot. that all, thank you.

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Name : Nur Mirza Zawanah Binti Mohd Kasimi

Matric Number : 1152453

TBA 10

Berita Harian, Tuesday, 3 October 2017

The story is about technical and pollution problems at flat by Mohd Fharkhan Abdul Ghapar.

Based on the article in this local newspaper, its combine pictures and text together. The format that used by the designer is one horizontal photo. In my opinion, yes it is attractive and adhered to the rule of designing a story by using this one horizontal photo as a format of designing. Besides, it looks more pleasing to the eyes of reader. Moreover, it also can help the readers from getting bored while reading because the text is not too much.

There are also a good and bad about published a story design. The good things about story design are can help readers absorb information more easily. Besides, it also can help readers more focus and willing to read the news till the end. Story design is a process of organizing and synthesizing many disparate informational elements. Moreover, story design also gives a newspaper its personality that can make a newspaper a consistent and familiar product to readers.

The bad things that I can say about a published story design is limited spaces for the text. The editor must fit the story to the readers and make the story short. So that they can understand carefully about the news that published.

In my opinion, there are actually pro and cons by published a story design. It’s up to the designer either to use the format of story design wisely or not. For my suggestion, try not to design a big photo than the text. It actually based on issue that the reporter wants to published. If the issue is about the sentiment of public or religion, I think the picture should dominant the page. If not, it just enough to have a picture with a suitable size on it. If the news need quick respond from the government, as a news in my local newspaper, then the picture should not bigger than the text. It is because, many important information that the reporter wants to write in it. With that, it can help the government to understand then take an action from the problems that source faced.
Thank you.

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Hello,
In Week 4, you are required to select a published story design from a national newspaper in the year 2017. What you need to do is:

First,  find an article that combines images and text in your local newspaper, ideally one with two or more images. If possible, identify the format used by the designer, referring to the formats described in the lecture notes.  Take the whole picture of the story (including the headline, byline, text, image, caption).

Second, insert the picture and write your individual opinion right here on the padlet. Give your comments on the story design, whether it is attractive and adhered to the rules of designing a story, or otherwise. Include your suggestion to make it more attractive.

Good luck.