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I used to be the writer who used the wrong transition words at the wrong parts. Now I know what transition words to use and where.

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I used to be the kind of writer who to capitalize. Now I am the kind of writer who capitalize a little bit.

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1. I used to be a type of writer who,  Doses;t edit much and sometime my story dose not make sense.
2. Now I edit my story and make sense.

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I used to be the writer who would not use commas and I also use to use bad handwriting and i also used no facts and also no quotes.
Now I am the kind of writer that uses commas after listing, breaks, and before but. I have better handwriting so reader can read my work and I use quotes when they are needed.

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I used to be the kind of writer who added more general ideas.
Now I'm the kind of writer that gives more specific and stronger information.

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I used to be the writer who didn't give enough information about the subject.
Now I am a writer who gives even more details to help the reader visualize the subject.

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That would not check over my work and make simple mistakes.

But now I am the kind of writter that adds good detail,checks over work, I used commas in the right places, and no longer make simple mistakes.

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1. I used to be the kind of writer who, had lots of run on sentences and never new how to peace everything together.
2. Now I am the kind of writer who, tells a clear story and gives a lot of dialog to my reader.

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Who didint give specific details.

Now im the kind of writer that checks over my work.

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1. The kind of writer I used to be who just wanted to get it over with.
2. The kind of writer I am now who works hard and gives as much detail as possible and uses punctuation when needed.

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I used to be the kind of writer who forgot to capitalize the eyes.
Now I am the type of writer who gives more information and details.

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wrote stories that made no sense, i didn't add enough detailed.

Now I am the kind of writer who...  adds details

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1. I used to be the kind of writer who could not brainstorm any ideas  to write about.
2. Now I am the kind of writer who already has more ideas for future writing.

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I use to added more general Ideas and did not have enough dialogue.

Now I'm the writer who Gives more specific details.

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1. I used to be the kind of writer who..
didn't give enough information or detail in my writing.
2. Now I am the kind of writing who..
Gives detail in my writing when it's needed and gives enough information when I write.

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I used to not capitalize my I's and I would have a lot of spelling errors.
Now im the kind of writer that capitalizes all my I's and fixes all spelling mistakes. I put all information about the things I knew. I checked all my writing twice to see if it made sense and attracted the reader.

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1. I used to be the kind of writer who... Didn't  put punctuation, dialogue, capitalization, detail.
2. Now I am the kind of writer who... put punctuation, dialogue, capitalization, detail, facts, indents,

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I used to be the kind of writer that didn't have much details and my grammar was pretty bad. I also didn't add visuals and didn't paint a picture in the reader's mind.

Now, I am a little better at grammar and painting pictures in the reader's mind. I also have enough details to support my information. I also understand more about punctuation.

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Reflection                                      I used to be the kind of writer who made stories that didn't make sense.I used to have pretty bad grammar too.Now I am the writer who adds more details and be's specific.   

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Reflection                                      I used to be the kind of writer who made stories that didn't make sense.I used to have pretty bad grammar too.Now I am the writer who adds more details and be's specific.   

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I used to be the kind of writer who didn't balance out my imformation with ideas and it used to be fact, fact, fact thrown at my reader.

Now I am the kind of writer who balances out those ideas so I can get my reader more hooked onto learning more and more about my topic.

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I use to be the writer who use to say stuff and things in my writing. Now I am the writer who adds more detail.

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I used to be the kind of writer who  added less detail to my book  

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I used to be the kind of writer who  added less detail to my book  

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2. Now I am the kind of writer who adds more detail to my stories.

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I used to be the writer of whom did not give enough information, punctuation or capitalization. Now I am the kind of writer that gives enough details, capitalization and gives ideas to balance my facts with.

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Now I am the kind of writer who... adds lots of detail and adds facts and opinions.

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Didn't give enough detail in places that needed more factors of their piece.
But know I always give information where it needs it and gets rid of unimportant facts.

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1. I used to be the kind of writer who...
2. Now I am the kind of writer who...
3. Picture to represent writing.