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my star is that they gave decent information and they had alright punctuation.

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My wishes are 1 that they didn't repeat and repeat what they sad, and 2 that they used capitals.

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-wish they can add more detail to there Story .

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My Star is that he or she gives some detail about his Christmas.

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My Star is that he or she gives some detail about his Christmas.

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They had some details and described what they got and why they loved Christmas.

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WISH:
They didn't have capitals when they need them, for example they would say I like i. They also would spell some words wrong like crismas.

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Wish: Have better punctuation

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One star is that he said what he got from Santa in the presents. Also how he felt and how he had a lot of fun with the family.

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I think that this person did not do well on grammar and was lacking detail

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I think the writer did a good job on what they were going to write about. Also i think they summarized there day without making it to long and complicated.

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A wish that i have for this writing piece is for it to work on having a good size sentence and not one to short.

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i think that they could have spelt a lot of the words better and I also think that they could have had better capitalization and grammar.

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They gave all the important information about what they did and what they got. They also said everything in chronological order. They only talked about Christmas not other things because that was what the text was about

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I think the main wish that I have is to correct their spelling, and grammar, for example they spelled Christmas like "Cristmas" and Carrot like "carot"

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Star post. there were a bunch of mistakes but a main one is that they like to repeat the same words over and over again, they Also missed some capitol I.

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Title
run on sentence
vocab
adjectives
sense and meaning
punctuation

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my wish is the writer it have better spelling because when it is not spelled properly it does not work.

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I think it's good that he or she gave very good examples and said what they got for christmas

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they made many spelling mistakes and they repeated that they loved Christmas a lot. They had run on sentences and they also didn't capitalize Christmas every time.

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I think that this person could do better on their grammar and spelling because they are spelling a lot of words wrong and not using capitals for the start of each sentence.They also are repeating a lot of sentences because they said that they like Christmas 2 or 3 times.

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run on sentence
vocab
punctuation
title
adjectives
sense and meaning

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Wish they could try to spell words correctly

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STAR:
They talked about how they loved Christmas in lots of details and examples.

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-stars  they  told all  the prezents they got

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I think that this person gave very good examples about what they got for Christmas. They clearly stated what they got and that they are happy with it.

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His writing is bad because if he just knew how to spell Christmas and stuffing then his work would mabe make it to the wall of fame.

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Star they at the least they started with a capital.

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Star they at the least they started with a capital.

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They did well but I think they should put capitals at the starting of a sentence and add capitals to I. I think that they should also add punctuation.

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My Wish is that they correct their spelling and that they make their sentence longer.         

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My Wish is that they correct their spelling and that they make their sentence longer.         

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My wish is that they focus on there Spelling because they did not spell everything correctly.

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One thing I think that they did well, is focusing on one specific idea, whoever wrote this only talked about Christmas, and I think that was good, because if they focused on too many things, they would overwhelm us.

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Star: There was good punctuation.

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my star is when the writer put a lot of information and detail they talked about everything they did.

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-  my star is i think this person did a really good job at explaining what they got and they did a really good job at saying what they had for dinner.

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One thing that they did well was that they did well was written in chronological order.

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my star is that the writer gave a lot of information.

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I think spelling would be a wish for me because you can't read it properly. Also grammar. Also when i was reading the paragraph i could understand on what the writer was thinking but they did not communicate it well.

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My stars 1 star is they stayed on their topic of christmas.

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⭐ Knowledge & Understanding⭐

-Tell the reader what happened in your story in chronological order
-Written in the past tense
-Include only relevant details (key events)
-5Ws (who, what, when, where, why)
-structure your writing into paragraphs, each with a main idea

⭐Thinking⭐

-Your brainstorming mind map includes jot notes or simple sentences that describe the main events
-The recount is clear and makes sense
-Good amount of detail, without going into too much detail

⭐Communication⭐

--The writer shares his/her thoughts, feelings or ideas about the events using a variety of adjectives, verbs and adverbs
-Capitals for proper nouns
-Check for run-on or incomplete sentences
-Punctuation (periods at the end of sentences, quotation marks around dialogue and commas to separate items in a list, after transitions, dates, separate unnecessary or extra information in sentences, in front of FANBOY conjunctions)
-Transitions at the beginning of each paragraph and within the paragraph to help ideas flow better
-Sentences types (simple, complex, compound)
-Check for spelling

⭐Application⭐

-I can use tools (thesaurus, dictionary) and anchor charts (writing exemplars) to help me write and revise my writing.
-I can make sure my recount clearly explains an event I've experienced.

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Click on the photo to view the recount writing exemplar.