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Excellent!
**Finish 2 & 3 with glaze and framing

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Very Interesting use of mixed media.
**Figure & bed needs more highlights, as it appears darker in the picture
** Hand- I would bring some wires off the base and onto the table to activate the space.
** Need to upload your third piece

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Good media exploration.
**Plaster piece another media could be attached?
** In piece number 2- maybe wrap the plaster strips around the stones?
**In piece number 3, what do you want the viewer to feel? Faces should be attached to board. Activate area outside the board or active the faces further.

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Very nice use of color

**Consider presentation - How will I best showcase my eq?
**Continue to diversify your approaches and medias

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Nice use of wire.

** Wire bust- need to activate the space under it with some wires made add a base?
** Paint brain
**Resin cast sphere

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Excellent control of diverse media. Some thoughts on completing:
**#1 - ribs as you talked about in your packet
**#2 - Would the addition of a nose or an additional color help add more life to the skull?

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Nice craftsmanship

** Plant sculpture needs a base I think for more hight?
** Finish rodeo piece

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Strong concept. Sculptures need further development.

*Finish 2 and 3 with paint and detail
*Bases?

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Good variety.

*In your work, I want to see HOW they make you feel powerful.
**Complete sculpture piece, and consider adding adding elements/media to communicate that.

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Excellent use of color and strong 3-d design.

#1 Color top of the head or clean up edge
#2 Finish glazing

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Good media explorations.

**Is there another media you might be bale to add to help you synthesize?
**Edge on sculpture # 3 could be cleaner for geometric form

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Very unified.

** I might add some more wires coming out of the eye - maybe thinner green and black?
**On the heart piece, black paint or another color should be added around the entry point of there into the heart
**Do your pieces have a functional/performance aspect?

3 pieces each having 2 angles taken of them!