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Completed by Callum woods

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Storyboard 4

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Storyboard

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Storyboard 2

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Storyboard 1

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Meeting Minutes 12

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Equipment booking form

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Callum Woods Pixilation testing. Phone typing.

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Callum Woods Pixilation testing. Phone typing.

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Edited on final cut with speed of 4

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Samsung GALAXY A5 Unboxing & Hands on Review | 1st Metal Phone

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pixilation testing on final cut with speed of 4

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Callum Woods Pixilation testing. Phone typing

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Callum Woods Pixilation testing. Phone typing

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Edited on final cut with speed of 5

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Samsung GALAXY A5 Unboxing & Hands on Review | 1st Metal Phone

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Pixilation testing with speed of 5 on final cut

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Meeting minutes 11

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Positives
Mentioned what the client wants.
Mentioned good research that we conducted
Good terminology
appealing to the clients demands
well read and projected.

Improvements
More persuasive text, say why our ident is the better one to go for.
More body language

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Started with a group introduction of the team members and listed mission statement which is good, maybe say who the team members are also?

Speak about how it is a positive video and not just talking about peoples problems

Good referencing of questionnaire results
Revise sentences to make sure everything flows for you and makes sense when spoken

Speak about the benefits we took from different research sources and what we decided not to take

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well explained, not too much text on the slides so I'm not distracted away from you talking.
Good spacing while talking
good link of your research with how it changed our ideas
possibly said to much for the first slide
good hyperlink on experiments and resources slide
could use some persuasive language and say why our ident would be better for their company than ours
Good timing between 3:30-4:00

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Pixilation Testing

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Minutes meeting 9

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Contingency set sketch

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shot list

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Minutes of Meeting 8

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Completed by Tom gamble

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completed by Tom gamble

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Completed By Callum.W

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Minutes of meeting 6

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location recce

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Set script

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Helped by Tom.G and Beth.W

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Narrative Outline

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character sketches

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lighting research

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Mind Map on Narrative Ideas

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risk assessment

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Completed by group

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Discussion On initial ideas

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claymation research

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mood board