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NÂNG CẤP - BIẾN ĐỔI CÂU

Thay đổi chủ ngữ

Ex: Play video games → skills

S = V-ing (playing videos is important/ essential/ vital/ crucial for self development/ skills development).

It is + adj + for sb to do sth

If S V O, S will V O (If people play video games, they will/ can improve their soft skills)

There is a need for sb to do sth

With N-phr, SVO

By N-phr, SVO

From an educational perspective, SVO

PRACTICE

1. Chính phủ nên khuyến khích người trẻ đi làm sớm

2. Thị trường lao động (job market/ labour market) khó khăn (competitive) khiến nhiều người không có bằng cấp (people without qualifications/ unqualified people) khó có thể tìm được công việc tốt

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PRACTICE: There are several benefits of living in a big city (dưới 120 từ - 15m) \

Firstly.... This is because,... Therefore.... For example

Topic -> Supporting sentences ( reasons or impacts) .... For example (specific)

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1. WH - questions ?

WHAT - WHO - WHEN - WHERE - HOW - WHY

What is favourite type of music ?

What: Vietnam remix music

Why: Strong/ vibrant melody -> boost my energy and my emotion/ wake me up and energize -> So that I can fully relax in my free time

When: Everyday, whenever I feel sleepy and distracted while studying

2. Comparisons

2.1. PAST - PRESENT

In the past, I used to .... But these days, I tend to .....

Ex: How have parks changed compared to the time when you were a kid ?

Past: a lot trees, lakes, few playing materials

Now: recreational facilities, more playground

2.2. PRESENT - FUTURE

Now, I'm... However, probably, in a few years later, I will

3. Adding personal information

Chia theo khía cạnh: Money, Family, Relationship, genre, friends, feelings

Do you like listening to music?

Money: free of charge, countless songs available on the Internet

Family: Run in my family, got me into this passion when I was a little girl

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The skills which make people focus on video games

Playing video games can help people improve their communication skills

-> people/ players can improve their communication/ soft skills by playing video games/ via video games

EXERCISE 2

2. The government should encourage the youth to get the job early

-> The government should PROMOTE YOUNG PEOPLE/ YOUNGSTERS/ INDIVIDUALS TO ENTER THE WORKFORCE FROM (AN EARLY AGE)

-> ENCOURAGING YOUNG PEOPLE TO ENTER THE WORKFORCE SHOULD BE A PRIORITY OF THE GOVERNMENT.

3. The competitive labour market makes some people without qualification has difficultlIES in on finding a good job.

-> An increasingly competitive labour market means fewer job opportunities for unqualified people

WRITING

On the one hand, there are some/ various benefits of living in a big city. Firstly, there are a lot of job opportunities in urban areas. to apply the workforce, so people can have higher salary if they work successfully. For instance, there are more people from living in the countryside move/ migrate to the cities/ metropolises to apply for their desire job.

Topic (One of the biggest advantages of living in big cities/ urban areas is the work opportunities it provides) -> Supporting sentence (When people migrate to metropolises - find job in reputable companies -> higher salary -> higher quality of life) -> Example

LINKING WORDS: Reason (this is because/ this is due to the fact that/ admittedly)

Consequences: Therefore, hence, in this way.. SVO

Secondly, if you live in the urban, it will be essential for you for improve soft skill. For example, there are a lot of people when they have tried for the living in the urban, they have lots of experiences about the life, soft skill and also the meeting for work application.(OFF-TOPIC)

Ideas: Education -> pursue higher education -> higher job prospects/ contribute to the country development.