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Glows: Loved your color scheme and loved how you guys took into account those that may have visual impairments!!!! Super great Plans for your iterations as well!!

Grows: I love the approach you have taken for this project!! That said, it is important to remember our time constraints in camp and to remember our MVP process and that it may be helpful to scale back the goals for the project just a tad.

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Glows: the presentation was absolutely beautiful! I loved how the topic was concise which avoids the loss of interest from the viewers.

Grows: I think on the wireframe slide, there was an excessive amount of wording which I think should be cut a little, but anyway everything is amazing!!!

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Glow: Love love the slides and wireframe design! It looks super cool and professional. I like how you organized the content in your slides and elaborately explained your topic.

Grow: The wireframe does look super cool, but it looks a little bit overwhelming and has a lot of information. Maybe cutting down some of the info or leaving some white space would help it feel less cluttered.

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Glow:

I like how you guys address the problem. I also love your wireframe! It's very detailed and seems like a great start. Your steps for your project look great!

Grows:

I would suggest reducing the amount of words you have on your tableau to make it more concise and clear.

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glows: First of all, LOVE the color pallete and design layout you chose for your data viz. Your topic is super relevant to modern times! Your hook having the interactive feature was amazing!

grows: I love that there is a lot of information that you have gathered with multiple datasets but it might be a little hard to keep up with it all. I recommend dividing up the work among your team!

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Glow: Explanations of the topic were clear and insightful

Grow: It could be a bit broad, and should focus on a specific aspect of the topic.

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Glows:

Beautiful visuals for both presentation and tableau

Good knowledge about the problem which shows in your project

Very detailed!

Grow:

Looks like a lot of wording on tableau which could become very overwhelming for the users

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Glows: Beautiful presentation and I especially liked the layout of your plan and how specific it was!(Don't stress too hard if not all of these goals are accomplished on that exact timeline but always great to have a plan!!)

Grows: I love the broad scope that you have taken for your project, but maybe just try to focus on the happiness data that you have without brining depression statistics as that may not necessarily be co-dependent data.

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Glow: I liked how the hook was interactive and I love the topic. The map idea is very cool and the color scheme is so pretty too.

Grow: I think it would be good if you guys added a overall summary in addition to the datasets you guys are doing!

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Glows: I love how you designed your slides and wireframe. It was visually appealing. Also, your iteration slide was very well planned out and clear.

Grows: The topic is so interesting, but I am wondering how you will be able to measure happiness and depression levels.

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glows: your hook was so engaging & interactive -- nice execution! the color palette is very cute as well.

grows: your topic might a little broad in my opinion, but I can see why you'd choose to focus on certain things for different data vizs! I think adding in some context can help tie all your data vizs together later on

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Glows:

Great topic! I loved your hook and how it encouraged everyone to participate in the chat. The idea your team has for the dashboard sounds super creative to me, especially the icons for each food item.

Grows:

I heard your group mention that you are using three different datasets, which seems a little complicated. The only advice I would give is to make sure to properly clean the data so it is easier to work with, especially as you are working with a lot of data, and remember to designate work equally amongst all team members.

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glows: you guys had an amazing hook & I think your topic is really interesting! the color palette looks very pretty as well.

grows: it would be helpful to add some context into your dashboard later on for each of the graphs and why you think these variables correlate (from a statistics perspective it's important to be careful about mentioning things like correlation/causation!)

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Glows: Wonderful Job delivering your information! I was all very put together so i can definitely see the effort!! And super interesting topic!!

Grows: Your slides had great visuals but maybe try and have less words of the slides to keep the audience to the words you are saying instead of the words they may be looking at!

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Glows

The scheme was great! Very engaging. I liked the steps of iteration slides.

I liked the examples and colors you used!

Grows

I got a little confused in 7.8. I didn't understand what it meant, but great job!

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Glow:

I really liked the topic. I think that you guys have a complete understand of what kind of graphs and charts you want to have on your dashboard.

Grow:

I do think that the wireframe included a lot of information and it can be condensed and you can make the dashboard longer.

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Glows:

I really liked the hook and topic you chose, since that is a topic that can affect our daily lives.

I really also liked how you make the slides short and concise, which can make it easier to understand.

Grows:

I felt like there was a lot of stuff you need to do in order to complete your dashboard, so make sure to split up the work and to make it attainable.

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Glows: I loved your hook. It got me engaged to know more about your project. I also liked your wireframe where you guys talked about the color scheme and details of your project.

Grow: I was a little confused about when you talked about depression levels because your main topic was world happiness levels. So maybe you could further explain how those two topics relate and how depression levels correlate with happiness levels.

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Glows:

Very powerful hook!

I loved how everyone spoke on most slides, it was an excellent way of sharing responsibilities, I can tell you practiced your presentation a lot!

Mentioning SQL cleaning, averages, and Tableau demonstrates you’re connecting your analysis tools to your goals.

I love that you listed out the three iterations of your project!

Grows:

You mention “gender bias in medical research” very broadly; narrowing the scope (e.g., focusing specifically on clinical trials, or maybe just cancer trials, or drug trials etc...) may make analysis sharper.

Your wireframes have a lot of information on them, ensure your finished tableau is easy to read and large enough. It's ok to add vertical containers to make things scrollable.

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Glows:

I love how you laid out your 6 step process, and listed such specific graph choices.

Using reputable datasets and citing them adds credibility.

The inclusion of a wireframe and explanation of the color scheme demonstrates foresight in dashboard layout and user experience.

Grows:

You mention both economic status and depression levels, but it’s not fully clear whether depression/happiness is a main variable in your analysis or just background context. What goes into the measure of "World Happiness Levels?"

Questions:

Have you thought about including interactive features or filters that let users explore data for their own country or region to make it more personally relevant?

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Glows:

The information was presented in a very clear and structured format

The mockups and colour scheme were very nice

The presentation was super interesting!

Grows:

The slides were a bit busy, so it made me not want to read all the text on it. Maybe only put the important text that you want to emphasize on the slides

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glow -> love how you guys focused really specifically on birth/death rates & the color palette!

grow -> I'd love to see what you determine to be the greatest influence (or have the greatest correlation) with birth/death rates.

question -> Have you looked at any datasets already? Which ones are you planning to use?

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Feedback for Group A1 from Annabelle (A5)!

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Feedback for Group A1 from Annabelle (A5)!

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Glows: Really interesting and unique topic choice that hooked me right from the start. The idea was super well thought out and explained very clearly.

Grows: Less words on your slides -> more photos -> more talking will emphasize your points and draw attention to what you're saying instead of the slides. :))

Great job!

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Glows:

Great topic choice, it's very impactful and meaningful for many people all over the globe.

You were very prepared! I can tell you practiced and were careful about how you planned your pitch!

Grows:

I'd love to see information about the the history of polution, and some explanations as to why it's getting so much worse in the recent years.

Consider using less words on your slide deck and avoid reading the slides verbatim, maybe only place key points on the slides, and instead put a script in the speaker notes section.

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⭐️ Glows: Note down positive aspects of the project, things you look forward to seeing on Demo Day

🌱 Grows: Note any potential challenges or edits that could be made to make the project even better

❓ Questions: Any questions you may have about the project or ideas to help