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From the mortuary temple of Amenhotep III, Thebes, Egypt 18th Dynasty, about (1350 BC)

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Outline of the Pharaoh and their reign

Amenhotep III was a successful pharaoh from (1400- 1353BCE). He was well known for being successful and humble and prosperous during his reign. His father was Thutmose IV and his mother was Mutemwiya. He had 4 wifes during his life with Tiye being his favourite wife. Her name appeared on documents alongside the pharaoh. He had 6 siblings.

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Representation of Luxor temple refurbished

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The luxor temple is a prime example of what was established during the reign of amenhotep III. Alongside the colossi of memnon. These monuments are some of many made spread throughout a timeline of when he was pharaoh all the way to the end of his reign. These places were made for worshipping him.

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Amenhotep III primary devotion was Amun-Ra which is the combination of the sun god-Ra, and Amun who is the chief of ancient thebes- God of air. Amun was considered to be the most powerful god after merging with Ra. Amun was one of eight primordial Egyptian deities. His birth name "Amenhotep-Heqawaset" is associated with Amun. His birth name means-(Amun is pleased, the Ruler of Thebes).

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Being the pharaoh, you are in charge of everything. Including making the choices for your civilisation, which amenhotep was in favour of as he was good at diplomacy and devoted himself to the idea of enhancing egypt forever.

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Although amenhotep was not know for being a great fighter or defender like ramsees II or III, he economicially benefitted egypt through trade with other allies. Because of this, Amenhotep was considered to be one of the richest pharaohs in Egypt. To keep strong binds with foreign aliies he married princesses from places such as Babylon, Mitanni and Arzawa.

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