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During my vacation I spent it with my parents, meeting people and having a lot of fun.The first day of my vacation I went to the doctor, because I had a vision problem. My mother accompanied me. I like to go out with her because it is more fun. I spent the other days at home with my grandmother, she is in poor health so I help her cook, I don't really like to cook, I like to make desserts or cakes.On the weekend we went out as a family, we went to a place near Cañete, it was really fun, we played, we walked in the place.The next day I went to the southern mall with my boyfriend, where I met his cousins. We had fun playing electronic games and eating hamburgers.The other days I spent at home with my family, I also spent them with my friends playing online I spent the weekend with my parents, we went out to the ravine for a walk.On the last day of my vacation I went out with my boyfriend and met his family, and at night I was with my parents and they advised
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On my July vacation I was at home helping my family, cooking, cleaning, researching interesting topics, I was also able to go out to some places that I loved.
After I was able to watch my favorite series and do my exercise at the right time, I went out to the park for a run with my mother, grandmother and pet.
At the end, then I returned to my classes, but I can say that I had a beautiful vacation with my family.
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On my July vacation, it was very funny, because I had the opportunity to visi t various diferent places and see my friends again.

First of all, on Jul y 28th, the bicentennial of Peru's independence, we celebrated it with my family by going to Kennedy Park in Miraflores, we parked in a Ripley near the park, there we saw different sculptures, and there was also a book fair. of different authors and finally, in the amphitheater there was a show of typical dancer, it was amazing, I had a lot of fun.

The next day, July 29th, we went out walk with my great-aunt P rimitiva and the family of my best friend, Ismael, to the town an Antioquia, we left at 8 am, then at 10 am, we a rrived to the town of Sisicaya, where we made a stop, there was a church and a bookstore there, plus we had a little snack. Then, at 1 2:30 pm we arrived our destiny, there we ate homemade ice cream with exotic flavors, after we too k a tour of the entire town taking many photos of different places and finally I went together with Ismael and his parents, to clim b the hill close to got to the oriel, it was exhausting, but the views were amazing. I had a lot of fun.

Finally, on the last day of vacation, we coordinated my friends; Ariana, Kimberly, Alexandra and I, are going f or a walk to the Arenales shopping center, we left at 3:30 pm and arrived at 4:15 pm, the shopping center was gigantic, there they sold different products from various  (some / many )well-known animes, then, we went to the top floor for refreshments. Around 6 pm, taking advantage of the time we had left, we decided to go to the Larcomar shopping center, there we went to different stores and took many photos. It was amazing to see my friends again after several months of not seeing each other due to the pandemic and the walked was incredible.

And so was my vacation j uly. Now that I am going to go back to class with a lot of strength in order to get good notes.

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In my last vacations I had a good time with my family and I traveled to Ica and Nazca with my father, my mother, my brother, his girlfriend and my nephew and  was arriving in Ica we went to the Dunes which was an immense desert and great, then we went to Nazca visit my uncle and grandparents, then walk through their vegetable and fruit farms and return to my house, it was an unforgettable experience.

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Ariana vanessa mallqui chuquival 😴😴
On my vacation I went to my dad's house, there I celebrated my 15th, after the party and for two days I got sick, I had the flu and a little fever, they gave me a pill and it didn't happen, they took me to a doctor and They put 3 blisters on me in 3 days and I recovered, my mom came to get me and I went home.
conclusion: I spent my vacation sick, it was horrible
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In my two weeks of vacation , it was a lot of fun because I had the opportunity to go to various places such as: The Barranco district where I had a great time with my family, to the Mall of the SUR where I went with my family to the fifth floor to eat a delicious fried chicken  (they were very tasty), we also went downtown Lima, but on the way I got lost in the metropolitan; in the end I managed to find
then, they were very worried, especially my mother :D .

At the end of the two weeks of vacation, I went with my friends to walk through Larcomar and Arenales to enjoy our last day of vacation.
The hike was super fun.

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During my vacations I could not go on a trip due to the pandemic but I went out to eat, I ate Argentine barbecue with my family, that same day at night I practiced piano.

I went to a hairdresser to accompany my mother, then to ate a cevicheria with my parents.

I visited my sister because, it was my nephew's birthday and we were as a family.

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On my vacation I went on a trip with my dad, my brother and I.
We went to visit my relatives and we had a nice afternoon because we arrived and they welcomed us happily and that same day my grandmother cooked for the whole family.
The next day, I went with my brother to see my aunt and uncle when we arrived they greeted us with great excitement and after talking about how we were doing at school we went to see the vegetables and fruits that they had planted.
After , we went back to my grandmother's house we said goodbye since it was only a visit for my father's work.
And well that was my short but good
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On my vacation I went to the beach and we also went to play soccer with my family. then we went to eat KFC.
on monday we went to pisco for a week, we went for a walk on the sand, of the red beach, we also rode a bike where we had a great time until monday when            school starts again :)

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On my vacations I was with my family in my house, we went to visited my uncles and my grandparents, my mother and I spent time in the kitchen, I learned to cooked more recipes with my mother, we spent in the afternoons in the park with my pet and my brother, we watch movies or series, on my last week of vacation I went to the beach with my aunts and my cousins.

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 Well my vacation started when my mom said we were going to go to Tarapoto, we went to San Martin , we went to the waterfalls, we ate their typical food, we met many animals, we went out to a restaurant where they sang, we returned and well I went to the birthday from my boyfriend, take my puppies to the vet , i went to the park with my mom and sister , I went out with my boyfriend to eat pizza , I finally went out with my friends to eat empanadas , Ididn`t really do much but I liked my vacation

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My vacation went very well, I spent time with my family and friends.
In the mornings it was very cold, sometimes it rained, and I would go outside my house to be in the rain and enjoy it, I would play with my cousin and my nephews.
I went to visit some relatives and spenT the day with them, I have seen relatives that I have not seen in a long time.
I also entertained myself with my pet or played online games with my friends
I went to eat pizza with my mom and my cousin, and we had a very happy time that day

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On my vacations I had a great time , since I went to the beach with a very important person, who is always there for me, I also went to visit the Lipico from there to ride a horse with my cousins ​​on the beach, I really enjoyed it a lot.
then we went to the park of sighs we had a starbucks and everything was fine, and I also passed it next to my best friend brayan, we went for a hamburger to talk, we went for a walk and I spent the whole day with him
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My Vacations, Vacation July <3
On my last vacations I travel to Lunahuana with my family for my birthday .Its was a lot of fun trip .

We took photos in the square and went to the river. We did rafting with my mom , its was so scary because i dont now swin but we have fun .We buy souvenirs too.

The weather was very sunny and there were many beautiful animal trees and rivers. We stayed for three days.

We visit cañete as well. And the food was delicious I eat lomo saltado . We had a great time together. Soon we will go ag
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In the july vacations i was in my home, i relaxed for the two weeks.
Meditate on how it was going up to now in my studies.
I helped my parents with household chores.
The time, I was at home I did things that I wanted to do but I did not comply due to the shortage of time I had for the classes, for example I wanted to train my pets more than anything else to my dogs, I tried to teach them the basics how to give the paw but since I was new to this it cost me at first. At the end of the day only one learned to give the leg and only 1 learned to sit when told.
Also, I did not pick up the cell phone much and the computer wanted to get away from technology during this vacation time and we would continue to return to it until the end of the school year, I spent more time with my family and friends by text message.
I did not do muvh on my vacation, i dedicated myself to relax.
Spents time with my pets.
One Wednesday we went for a walk in the park with my little sister and my dad, we had a lot of fun, mostly my little sister and before we got home we had a cream ice cream.
The half-year holidays helped me a lot in terms of stress that had accumulated with homework and other things.

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During these weeks of vacation, I went to walked to the beach, I went to visited my grandparents and I spent time with they and my cousins.
My cousin and a friend went to the mall, ate ice cream, bought pizza, saw clothes and walked; We also walked with friends, we went to played, we saw them play soccer.
I passed time with my cousins ​​we took photos, listened to music, sang, laughed, watched movies, told each other our things, played video games, went to walked. I met more people ...
In conclusion it was a good vacation, I had a great time with my family.
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Well, on my vacations I went on a trip with my mom, my aunt, my brother, we went to Huaraz, we had a great time, we went to different places, everything was nice the bad thing is that it was very cold, we also went to a part of Huaraz where There was snow and I was too excited, when I got to Lima I had a great time with my mother, we went out to eat and buy clothes, I also saw my grandfather took me to lunch and we bought some things, when I got here to Santa Isabel I went out with my friends to The beach, we had a good time and it was a lot of fun, then I went out with my brother and one more friend to eat, we also went to the park, to the games and we had a good time, I also started playing video games with my friends and well that was my holidays.

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On my vacation, I was very relaxed and happy. In the first days I literally did nothing, I was at home looking at my cell phone watching the LIVE that my favorite singers did.
After a few days I finally went out with my mom to Metro to have a good time, we ate McDonalds and then we bought some things. 7 days passed and I went out with my mother to my uncles' house, they live in Jicamarca, it was a long trip but it was worth it, I played a lot with my cousin, my uncles have their cake shop and that day they taught me to make pizza.

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Finally, one day before classes start it was without a doubt the best day all, I went out with my friends to Arenales and Larcomar, there were many anecdotes, many purchases and many laughs.

In conclusion, my vacations were super fun, I had a good time with the people I appreciate.
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Vacation July

On my last vacation the first thing, I was did new play horror game that I had installed on my computer, also I did exercise twice a week on Tuesdays and Fridays, I was reading a mystery and suspense book. With my friend Christian we went to walk to Antioquia, I took advantage of eating trout    since I have not eaten it in two years, we climbed a mountain and reached the top. I went to the celebration of a traditional festival on August 5th and on August 8th there I found met he my cousin and we talked a lot. I almost forgot that on vacation I helped my mom cooked and we made a dessert, and also I was moving forward with the biology experiment. And I am full energetic to started good with classes.
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During my two weeks of vacation in July, I had an incredible time, despite the fact that most of the time I was at home, it was very fun to be in the company of my family since we did many activities together such as: was playing board games, watching movies in the afternoons, preparing dinner and toll jokes together.
Also, we went out a couple of times to the park with my pet Zeus, and we spent the whole afternoon there.

Also took advantage this time to practic a little drawing and helping my parents with the housework; Also during the afternoons from time to time I entertained myself playing video games with my brother ... ... It was a lot of fun!

But the best thing happened one day before classes started since together with my friends we went to walked around Larcomar and Arenales to enjoyed our last day of vacation, that day I had a great time since we couldn't stop laughing for various funny videos we made.

When the day was about to end and we all returned to our homes, I prepared to organize my things for tomorrow and virtual classes again.

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On my last vacations,it was very funny because  I had the opportunity to visit my relatives.

On Friday morning we traveled to the highland, I went with my mom and with two other friends. We went by bus and tavelled about 6 hours. I was too tired, but when we arrived there everything changed.

The weather was very nice, it was not too cold. I could go outside and meet new and many interesting places in Santo Domingo. I can say that it's a small but nice city of my country too. The people are kindly and you can meet many tourist places too. Over there we  were able to ride and we took a long walk. The food was very good, I loved it!!

Two days later we went to Quito, it is the capital of Ecuador. Quito is a very nice city. The weather was cold, of course we had to use  warm clothes. We visited many other places and we could find funny places there too.

Then we went to the coastal region, and we visited Salinas beach. Near Salinas is Ballenita, Montañita and Santa elena. There are many beautiful places, and food was good. Of course as it was that time, there was not a sunny day, it was a little cold but we went to the sea and we swam and played a lot!!!

Then we went to other many places, we  had a great time. I won't forget those days... it was very funny for us!!!