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I thought the poem was really good but maybe there should be more commas.

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I really liked the poem and I thought the pictures really suited it, but next time watch the capital letters.

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I thought it was a really good poem but that next time watch the spelling and spaces.

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Is a good poem but just watch your punctuation.

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It is a good poem and funny but needs more commas.

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I think this is a good poem just needs more capital letters.

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Good poem but can use more commas

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The pictures suite the poem but it needs more punctuation

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Its a good poem and its funny but the sentences should be more spread out.

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I think this was a good poem and the pictures suited the poem.

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i think it has a really good beat and rhythm. With really clever rhymes plus its really relatable.

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I really like the pictures out with the poem and I think
it finishes really nicely.

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I really like how it compares the heat of the sun to the warm summer lights.

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I really like how it

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I really enjoyed this poem and I think the choice of rhyming words.

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I like this poem and the pictures were a great choice for the poem!

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I like the pictures just need to use a few commas.

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Great poem just need to watch the capital letter

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Yvonne: A week back in Ireland from England

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Yvonne: A week back in Ireland from England

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I think this is a great poem but just need to watch the punctuation

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I like the way the poem rhymes,maybe a few commas are needed

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Maeve:A Week Back In Ireland From England

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Maeve:A Week Back In Ireland From England

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I think this is a good poem but the use of capital letters are needed.

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This poem was very good but  you should of been good for Christmas!!! And yesterday should of got a capital.

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This poem is very good, although,I think commas and full stops are needed.

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This poem is good but why does a  black hair grow back?

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I like the pictures in this story but you should of put an before accent

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I like the way it shows the writer's love of sport.I think more punctuation is needed.

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I liked the pictures as they relate to the poem.I feel the use of more capital letters is necessary.

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I liked the use of rhyme in this poem, however, I think greater usage of punctuation is needed.

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I liked the way he kept saying 'bonjour' to people instead of hello but they could put more  commas or full stops into the story

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It's a good story because he a good bit of detail into it but they could put in different photos

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It's a very good story because that what old people do but I think they could improve on their spellings

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