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Reading your biography was made especially interesting because you started every paragraph differently.

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I really liked how you compared him to Albert Einstein.

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I really liked your word use
I think it really made the
story really well.

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I loved your biography. I also liked how you opened and closed with a quote

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I really liked that you started with all of the character traits that Patrick has.

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I really enjoyed how you said things and how you compared her childhood to her adulthood. I also just really, really like the introduction paragraph.

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I really enjoyed how you said things and how you compared her childhood to her adulthood. I also just really, really like the introduction paragraph.

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I really liked that you gave an overview of his work before you told his life story.

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It was very interesting you used very powerful word choice. Unique begining

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The word choice was very interesting Oscar. I just really liked your biography!

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The word choice was very interesting Oscar. I just really liked your biography!

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I thought that your intro paragraph was really good,and yes you did mention his name.

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Lily, I really thought that starting with that descriptive language was very strong.            Suddenly I felt like I could see a little girl sinking her feet into the sand.

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I really like your word choice. It was very strong.

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Annabella I love how the story was structured. Also I love all of the descriptive words you used it really brought the story to life.

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