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Six Tips for Perfecting Dialogue in Your Narrative

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Six Tips for Perfecting Dialogue in Your Narrative

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Direct dialogue is speech using the character's exact words. In this case, quotation marks are used.

Indirect dialogue is a second-hand report of something that was said or written but NOT the exact words in their original form.

When writing a narrative essay, you are telling a story. That story can become confusing for the reader, though, when dialogue is added, unless it's very clear who is doing the talking. Knowing how to quote someone in an essay can help your reader more easily follow the flow and action of the story.

Let's focus on the writing of direct dialogue by looking at some narrative essay example sentences.

There are some rules to follow when writing direct dialogue in your narratives:

Rule #1: Use quotation marks to indicate the words that are spoken by the characters.
Example: "Help me!" exclaimed the little girl.
Rule #2: Always begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes.
Example:
"I am coming home," Sue announced. "I am really tired and can't work anymore."
"Okay, I think you should do that," her husband agreed.
Rule #3: Make sure the reader knows who is doing the talking.

Rule #4: Use correct punctuation marks and capitalization.
Example:
"May I buy a new pair of shoes?" Lauren asked her mom.
Note that the quotation marks are outside the end punctuation of the quote; the rest of the sentence has its own end punctuation.

If the quote is not a question or exclamation, use a comma and not a period before the second quotation marks.
"I bought a new jacket yesterday," Tammy said.
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Direct dialogue is speech using the character's exact words. In this case, quotation marks are used. Indirect dialogue is a second-hand report of something that was said or written but NOT the exact words in their original form. When writing a narrative essay, you are telling a story.

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Download/view this powerpoint from the lesson, which includes all practice activities. Submit responses via Google classroom.

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Week 6--Session 1--Using and Punctuating Dialogue

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Watch this 3 min video on how to punctuate dialogue.

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Dialogue Tags OR Descriptive Phrases of Action

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Dialogue Tags OR Descriptive Phrases of Action

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This video (although her voice is annoying) covers the importance of descriptive dialogue tags when writing.

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Download this document to practice SHOWING not telling with dialogue. Complete each Blank Comic Strip based on the directions at the top of each page.

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Comic Strip Activity to Practice Dialogue

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Download/view this file to see how dialogue tags help SHOW--not tell--when writing dialogue.

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How to Show with Dialogue--examples and discovery task

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Dialogue Tags/Descriptive Phrases of Action

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Dialogue Tags/Descriptive Phrases of Action

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Snapshot of Synonyms for 'said.'

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Visit this website to learn how to punctuate dialogue.

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Nothing marks a beginning fiction writer faster than improperly punctuated dialogue. Because most academic papers do not use dialogue, many students would benefit from a fiction writing class if they intend to write in this genre.

Before taking on a fiction writing project, be sure to review punctuation and grammar rules to ensure your writing is clearly understood and well-received.

Punctuation Rules for Dialogue

Get ahead of the game! Learn these rules to avoid obvious mistakes:

1. Use a comma between the dialogue and the tagline (the words used to identify the speaker, or "he said/she said"): "I would like to go to the beach this weekend," she told him as they left the apartment.

2. Periods and commas go inside the quotation marks in American writing (the Brits have slightly different rules); other punctuations-semicolons, question marks, dashes, and exclamation points-belong outside unless it directly pertains to the material within the quotes, as in this example from Raymond Carver's short story "Where I'm Calling From": "I don't want any stupid cake," says the guy who goes to Europe and the Middle East. "Where's the champagne?" he says, and laughs. In the next example, the question mark goes outside the quotation marks because it is not part of the material being quoted: Did he say, "We should all go to the movies"? Also note that the sentence ends with only one mark of punctuation: the question mark. In general, don't use double punctuation marks, but go with the stronger punctuation. (Question marks and exclamation points are stronger than commas and periods. Think of it as a game of Rock, Paper, Scissors, if it helps.)

3. When a tagline interrupts a sentence, it should be set off by commas. Note that the first letter of the second half of the sentence is in lower case as in this example from Flannery O'Connor's story "Greenleaf": "That is," Wesley said, "that neither you nor me is her boy."

4. To signal a quotation within a quotation, use single quotes: "Have you read 'Hills Like White Elephants' yet?" he asked her.

5. For interior dialogue, italics are appropriate, just be consistent. Do I really love her? he thought.

6. If a quotation extends to more than one paragraph, do not use end quotes at the close of the first paragraph. Use them only when a character is finished speaking:
"and in the end, I didn't even love her.
I did think of marrying her, though."

Common Mistakes in Dialogue Punctuation

Incorrect dialogue punctuation and formatting is common among beginning fiction writers. The most common mistake is the use of quotations outside of the spoken word. Remember: Only the words that the person says should be inside the quotation. Here are two more common dialogue mistakes to avoid.

Punctuation and Spacing

In this example, the exclamation mark should be inside the quotation, as it's part of the dialogue:

Incorrect: "Surely she has gone mad"! she said.

Correct: "Surely she has gone mad!" she said.

Commas Between Two Sentences of Dialogue

Another way that people incorrectly write dialogue is by putting a comma between two sentences instead of a period.

Incorrect: "I have made up my mind," she said nodding, "I do not want to marry him."

Correct: "I have made up my mind," she said, nodding. "I do not want to marry him."

More Tips on Using Dialogue

Helpful sources to guide you as a fiction writer include:

Also, review the editing checklist to make sure you have covered other aspects of grammar.

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Learn the Rules of Punctuating Dialogue Correctly in Fiction Writing

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Nothing marks a beginning fiction writer faster than improperly punctuated dialogue. Because most academic papers do not use dialogue, many students would benefit from a fiction writing class if they intend to write in this genre. Before taking on a fiction writing project, be sure to review punctuation and grammar rules to ensure your writing is clearly understood and well-received.