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Physical features

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Color

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Climate

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Population

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Wildlife

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Climate

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extreme heat

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Volcanologists

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Study volcanoes

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Anders, M. Boys' life. Get geared up for backpacking. Helps people figure out backpacks. There is info on the price of some backpacks and what they are used for and what type of backpack it is. The source can tell you how to use it and the carrying capacity and which backpacks are the best for which people.

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Zipper source. Tells facts about tons of different kinds of zippers. The source can tell you what some certain zippers are good for/ what they are mainly used for. It solves the problem of a bad zipper by talking about the good zippers.

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Moultry, A. Talks about which materials are fireproof. Source talks about the kind of materials that are fireproof. It can solve the problem of a non-fireproof material by telling which materials are fireproof.

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Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--don't repeat words so often like "intense" or "withstand")

Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem--like storage.

More transitions, overall flow, and clarity.

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The Magma pack was developed for the purpose of being able to power through intense heat. The magma pack solves the problem by being able to withstand devastating heat because of the material it is made of it can not be over powered by the intensity of the blazing hot atmosphere. The magma pack was also designed to be able to do more than just that. It was also designed to be able to help the volcanologists with what they needed to do. Such as study volcanoes. Volcanic activity is what they want to know about. The magma pack has a strong structure and it is well organized and along with the sturdy exterior and interior it is exceptionally made. It has a massive  amount storage.