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ur character sucked. wtf

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You are a talented writer Emily. It was so funny and all the detail was perfect. Wonderful.

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Really good job Emily, great writing and acting. Keep up the good work

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glad you took my notes on diction! it sounded really good. ‘smack’ added a lot to that line lol. great job

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This was written so well, and on top of that, an excellent performance

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That was really good. Obviously you had the character down and the delivery on your lines were perfect. The movements were great and all in all it was a awesome monologue

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That was so funny, Emily! I loved how conversational your monologue felt. Even though you couldn’t Be more wrong about the delicious treat that I call cereal, I was always engaged in your monologue.

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Emily... are you okay? This was way too detailed not to be a real, very specific, moderately traumatic experience

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Emily this was awesome! So well written and I loved how you came b@ck to the fruitloops  at the very end, and everything was so relatable and funny. Great job!

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literally amazing character couldn’t have done it better. can’t think of anyone who could play it better. this is super good and I love how u wrote it. amazing I loved it

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Excellent vocabulary and word choice! This was really funny, and I loved the way you described the whole experience at the bad hotel. Valid reasons to hate cereal👾

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it was so great! i loved the emotion and i felton like you could really see Charles. the only thing i would work on is timing, but not too much, really great job

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You could start off about more sassy, like ha I ate the divorce papers rather than sad. Use it against him almost as a threat

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I liked the commitment you showed in this, and how the monologue was a mix of comedic moments and genuine emotion. You stayed in character well, and didn’t sacrifice any dramatic moments to try to make those moments funny

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That was so good Emily. You had such good timing all the funny parts were so funny. All the serious parts you would naturally pause. Al of the dramatic parts were expressed so well. So good my woman

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babe, sooooo good. very funny. only a little serious. the only thing i would say is that you seem to have a nervous habit of swaying back and forth as you talk but i thought your other actions and your emotions were really good and genuine

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I loved this monologue choice for you, it was really dramatic but fun as well, and the emotion you used when you spoke, and the tears that were shining in your eyes were very authentic and added to the overall performance of the piece.

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That was hallarious and really well executed. I guess there could be some strategically placed pauses but over all it was a really good monologue.

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You did a great job with taking the absolutely ridiculous character very seriously, I never doubted your portrayal for a second.

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That was great your pacing was great on you hit the funny lines perfectly. I really enjoyed your portrayal of the character as a lovable idiot who just wants her husband to love her. I think you could have shown a little more intensity and get a little more desperate as you go along and really spill your heart out at the end

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Really good job. You had a good mix between drama and comedy, and I liked the interpretation you chose. Just one or two spots where it seemed like you were pausing to remember the next word, but very minimal. Good job

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I thought it was really good, the memorization was perfect, the only thing you could do to make it better would be to slow it down a little between certain lines

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I really enjoyed this! It simultaneously had some great comedy and some very real emotion, and I think the two complemented each other really well. You did a good job of showing your character trying to suppress her emotions, which not only made them feel more authentic and compelling, but was also really central to a lot of what made the monologue funny.

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This was so good! You made some very funny choices that made the whole thing very believable. At the beginning, it felt slightly rushed, or like it could use a couple pauses, but you started to add more as the monologue progressed and the ending was hilarious. Amazing job!!

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Really great job! Try to slow down a little bit and when you talk about Paul try and make it a little more natural. I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the character! Again great job!

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this should make you feel something