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The explanation of the literal meaning and refering to different parts of the text was a little all over the place.(Criterion A)
Really great connections to literary devices and their impact in the story. (Criterion B)

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very descriptive. good analysis and evaluation

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In-depth commentary on the techniques are well developed!

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In-depth commentary on the techniques are well developed!

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Minor disconnect between features and commentary. Why did they matter?

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Minor disconnect between features and commentary. Why did they matter?

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Extremely detailed, the connections between symbols and they meanings is distinctly drawn

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Use of examples shows a clear understanding of the text

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The only thing that I would suggest is a slightly more in depth synopsis at the beginning of the presentation

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I was really confused at the beginning so you could work on the introduction and context and give more insight into what you're talking about and then go into the analysis and you can also work on your language choice whenever you're explaining.

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The presentation is well spoken and yalls ideas were laid out well. The presentation was easy to follow but I wish yall spent more time on the synopsis and included the story in the presentation.

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I enjoyed the analysis of the short story <3.

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I enjoyed the analysis of the short story <3.

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I think it did demonstrate a thorough understanding of the meaning of the text. Perhaps improve on the analysis by incorporating a few more lit features.

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Could you find any more connections to other texts that we have read? Maybe the ideas of hierarchy and societal structure in Orwell?

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Could you find any more connections to other texts that we have read? Maybe the ideas of hierarchy and societal structure in Orwell?

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Instead of relying on the power point so much, have some mental notes to summarize the main ideas.

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Instead of relying on the power point so much, have some mental notes to summarize the main ideas.

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The ideas could have been better placed for a better understanding. The connection to Earnest was good. 

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The ideas could have been better placed for a better understanding. The connection to Earnest was good. 

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Good interpretation of the short story, but could have used more examples and textual evidence

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I think that this presentation had good ideas concerning the literal perspective of the work with good references to the text, and they have good analysis throughout that stays focused. While they could have talked slower, the grammar and language used was appropriate for the task.

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I think that this presentation had good ideas concerning the literal perspective of the work with good references to the text, and they have good analysis throughout that stays focused. While they could have talked slower, the grammar and language used was appropriate for the task.

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the presentation was very descriptive and well organized. It was very clear on the themes and descritions.

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Demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text
Convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text

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There was an excellent showcase of understanding about the text. Focus was maintained throughout the presentation, and there were very little straying thoughts.

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confident flow of commentary, really good presentation skills, no noticeable pauses, relevant context, insightful analysis, 

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confident flow of commentary, really good presentation skills, no noticeable pauses, relevant context, insightful analysis, 

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very nice explanation of the details of the story (e.g. Hessian) to concrete themes (e.g. anti-German sentiment)

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very nice explanation of the details of the story (e.g. Hessian) to concrete themes (e.g. anti-German sentiment)

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Woah! the context was very insightful and able to tie together a meaningful concept behind a strange fantasy tale!

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Woah! the context was very insightful and able to tie together a meaningful concept behind a strange fantasy tale!

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ichabod is pronounced "ick-a-bod" not eechabod. :(

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ichabod is pronounced "ick-a-bod" not eechabod. :(

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The presentation is a good analysis of the folk nature of the story. I like the mentions of specific details in the story. Presentation of ideas is effective.

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Good Understanding of the Text, context adds to analysis
Themes and techniques were interesting and not obvious
Language was accurate, may want to vary
Organization helped presentation flow

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I really liked how you talked about short stories having value to culture-- it was really insightful and showed your understanding of the deeper meaning of the text.

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I liked the story you chose! I think the analysis was very insightful, and there were good connections made throughout the work with good textual evidence.

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I liked the story you chose! I think the analysis was very insightful, and there were good connections made throughout the work with good textual evidence.

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Very detailed analysis. Multiple examples provided for each connection and detail.

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very good presentaion and ver detailed

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nice theme/presentation, good context and explanations 

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nice theme/presentation, good context and explanations 

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The presentation shows an amazing understanding of the short story chosen. Additionally, it’s very ‘to the point’ and includes more than enough context, commentary and more. It’s organized in a good manner as well. Overall a terrific job

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the theme is so cute! I liked the way that you presented the background, and the literary features that you talked about! It pulled the presentation together well

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the theme is so cute! I liked the way that you presented the background, and the literary features that you talked about! It pulled the presentation together well

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Not only is your presentation very interactive, but it does a great job of clearly, concisely explaining the key aspects of your short story.

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the presentaion is well thought out and very descrptive

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the presentation was very interactive and included many engaging elements.

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you did a good job discussing the themes and relating it back to the social heirarchy at the the time. Also your connection to the imporatance of being ernest made a lot of sense

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good explanation and presentation but a little monotonous 

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good explanation and presentation but a little monotonous 

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(so like 15 on criterion d because "register is mostly appropriate to task" try not to sound bored). otherwise good evidence, interpretation, etc.

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I think you did a nice job of connecting literary devices and why the author chose to use them. You did explaining their importance to the underlying meaning.

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You all did a good job with the presentation, lots of information and insightful analysis but you guys sounded bored and were reading too much off the slides and didn't explain much afterwards. It was hard to stay focused when you all sounded so monotonous.

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Very thorough! Could be more clear in your speech. Phenomenal!

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did well explaining the importance and different meanings within the short story. 

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did well explaining the importance and different meanings within the short story. 

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Good context and presentation that make the ideas very clear and organized.

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Your analysis of the overlying theme of insanity was very clever and in depth

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Summary shows good understanding of the text, context was enlightening and helped make a more dated story interesting again, comparisons drawn between the house and characters helped with comprehension

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Really great interpretation of the text. I feel like you had a good understanding of the deeper meaning.

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Nice connection between the events happening in the context and the tone behind American gothic literature.

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i like how aidan talked about mental health and the way it was viewed in the past. shows how well he understands the work.

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i like how aidan talked about mental health and the way it was viewed in the past. shows how well he understands the work.

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The connects are very indepth and insightful however the entire presentation could use some more illustrations.

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Yall did a good job of encapsulating the overall symbolism and detail in the original text.

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There is lots of interesting and information like the gothic topic that you explore in depth and makes the presentation very insightful. However there are tons of blocks of texts and could do with some illustrations.

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I think that you guys had a lot of insightful commentary! There were good examples from the text and good analysis based on the topic

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You had a lot of information that was very descriptive and organized. Very good presentation overall

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good, informative presentation, good interpretation, etc.

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good, informative presentation, good interpretation, etc.

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great information and casual style of talking, 20 on criterion D and 20 on criterion A

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great information and casual style of talking, 20 on criterion D and 20 on criterion A

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Good job going into depth on the story.

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strong interpretation and commentary with the addition of the fall of feudalism and theme of fate, clear and solid analysis of textual evidence and context

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Very extensive analysis of historical context and symbolism.

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Very extensive analysis of historical context and symbolism.

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This would score very highly on Criterion A and B.

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This presentation makes very strong connections to the historical context. There is repeated reference to your individual interpretation of the concrete text while also relating it back to universal themes.

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awesome analysis! I thought there was a lot of good commentary and examples

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great context and it was very organized.

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very interesting interpretation of the story and how it relates to shared cultural heritage. the striking features were appropriate and meaningful

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very interesting interpretation of the story and how it relates to shared cultural heritage. the striking features were appropriate and meaningful

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Interesting twist on the more well known myth, good understanding of a shorter text (Criteria A), good application to the real world

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Great job!

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well done, informative, etc. good descriptions and context

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well done, informative, etc. good descriptions and context

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good description and use of detail

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good interpretation and connection to the themes. 25 on criterion A

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good interpretation and connection to the themes. 25 on criterion A

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Nice conclusion, shows analysis and more universal themes