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Redesign 2
This has the mirrored beginning and ending. It's like my original design, with some thoughts filling in the moment, giving it the personal touch. *side note, I meant to move 11 between 7 and 10. sorry! Just saw my sticky notes. * I think the mirrored start and end tie the narrative together and bring closure to a story.

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Redesign 1 - This starts out with the moment and transitions into personal thoughts strictly after everything ends. It's more of a reflection at the end of the sticky notes, and this would be where I fill in with anecdotes and quotes from the interview if I choose this design

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Original layout - This is the most chronological way, with a few side thoughts added in. I wanted to have a few reflections looking back to contrast the past and present. I like this because it narrates the moment with personal thoughts during that time

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Redesign 2
This will place more emphasis on the past and cause a better description about the events that transpired in my grandmas life time.

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Redesign 1
By redesigning it to a structure that allows the story to flow more will allow the story to have a greater theme and meaning.

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My goal for narrative was to make it a deep, meaningful story which illicits deep thoughts that can make someone not only think about what they are reading, but feel it as well.

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3rd layout:
In this 3rd version I included the steps she took getting her job on her own, then included info of her moving to the U.S, how she was able to get her job, also that a family member was involved into the reason she accepted to go into the training session and how it went.

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2nd version:
In this layout I put more emphasis on how she got her first job when she moved here and then at the end Is flashback that gave background info on what on the steps it took for her able to get her job and her moving to the United States.

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The is the original layout for my narrative, It's in chronological order. Which allows for my story to be told deliberately. And its easier to put all the details in the order they happened and work based off of the correct timeline

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This version I would start with cliff of moving explain what led to that and how they grow form that.

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This version is similar too one but instead in reverse revealing the ending and growth and then how they learned that.

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This version is telling the story and emotion how it happen, I wrote down the main events and will go into detail and share the story as if the reader was living in that moment.

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I finished off the process by adding more details to the whole story and explaining more of how my mom applied living deliberately to her life after teaching. I showed more of what her teaching career meant to her and how it progressed as time went on. I overall went in way more depth.

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I began the second process in the same way. I lined up my details in chronological order. For the second time I had a new approach, I added more details so the audience could better recognize who my mother is and what her career passion was. It shows more of her journey and helps uncover the process for the next step.

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I first began by putting my details from the interview in chronological order. I began with very minimal details so I could just get my thoughts in order. People get a surface idea of who my mother is and what her journey was for becoming a teacher

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Redesign 2: Image ending. In this version I have His connection to someone else's crash first to make it so like he understands what happens. then the description of his own crash happens and It is from his own perspective. after that his reflection to make it seem like he is going to retell the story which does happen after that. I also included the image of him walking through the hospital after his crash to show how he sees it all differently.

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Redesign 1: Circular ending.With this story line I added when he was walking through the hospital before and after. But in the middle I switched things around to read like a looking back kind of story. So he wakes up after the crash and then it is like a light switch effect back and forth between before the crash and after the crash. I also added a little anecdote to his connection to car crashes by using other peoples experiences that he sees.

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My Original Chronological idea was to just go through the event and list the events as they happened. Though they are accurate they don't really show much as a story and just a simple anecdote.

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Redesign #2 - Circular Ending
I established an ending to the narrative by beginning the narrative with the ending. This ending focuses on a chunk of dialogue that is used to be used in the beginning of the narrative as well and acts as a transition to the chronologically accurate beginning of the narrative.

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Redesign #1 - Added detail
I added an additional detail in the beginning of the narrative that further establishes the setting and emotion involved in the decision made in this narrative.

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Redesign #2 - Great emphasis on his past

Apart from the additions added in Redesign #1, I choose to talk more about his past only because what happened was a really life changing event as based on his past there wasn't much that would actually make what happened seem as bad as it actually was

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The first picture is the original plan for my narrative. The chronological timeline puts the main events or details that I'd expand upon that detail the story. The smaller events build up to the main portion of the story that details a conversation.

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Redesign #1 - More emphasis on the effect that it had on his family at the time

For the most the story had stayed the same, it was just a matter of adding more emphasis on the greater affect that it had

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Chronological time line
This first image shoes to progression in order from when my dad was preparing all the way to the modern day. This time line shoes the variety of different event that had occurred over this almost 35 year period

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Redesign #2- Putting it all together

For this design I had moved some of the note cards around in order to achieve an order that can allow the audience to grasp the important details of the narrative. As well as aide towards the process of forming the story with a compelling plot that describes living deliberately as well as describes the life lessons involved.

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Redesign #1- Including more details

With this redesign I had realized there were important details left out which would help inform the audience of the background information for this situation. The inclusion of cards allowed for the chronological order to fall into place with a detailed recount of the event.

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I decided to do my narrative with a different interview I had conducted with Mason Middleton, this order is the chronological timeline in which each event took place. Which allows for the process of deciding what details and which moments best show living deliberately. By putting the original story in this order I was able to ask detailed questions to aide in the formation of the narrative, by relying on a given base line.

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Redesign #2 - lasting thought

My final redesign built off of the adjustments from the last one and made the ending connect to something that had been discussed later and leave the reader with a lasting thought.

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Redesign #1 - Straight to story
For this redesign I thought it would be good to cut out some of the information to help it get to the bulk of the story faster. Therefore I took out some unnecessary details and took others out to add a more dramatic affect later.

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So when I started I was under the impression to use a lot of details so I used 61 post it notes. My resulting story cut out some ideas that I wanted to cover but can't because it is a short story. I tried to create a lot of questions so the reader is engaged to find out the answers. (sorry if its hard to read because of my handwriting or my picture is so zoomed out)

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Redesign #2 - Lesson/Moral Ending
Like the last one, I left most of my story the same and only changed the last note. This time though, I ended the story with a lesson. This lesson is about how no matter how hard it can get, working and pursuing on will reap great benefits and will prove to have been a good choice in the end. I did this so the reader feels like they actually benefited from reading, that they leave learning something. It also just ties the story up well and makes it all make sense.

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Redesign #1 - Circular Ending
I left most of my story the same, I just changed the last note to where now it is brought back to the first note. They are both about dreams, but the last one is more about the completion of those dreams for a positive tone to finish it off on. I did this to give the reader a happier outlook once they are done reading, and so that the whole story feels connected, rather than just many separate pieces of information.

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This first picture is the original plan/ layout for my narrative. It is arranged in chronological order, and it shows the progress of events in a simple way. I put it in order since it is the way it happened in real life, and so it will be less confusing for the reader.

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On the last final touch up I am going to add more about the second campaign. This will give a more descriptive feel. This will help the reader understand his mindset.

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In the second version I will add more to the beginning and more detail to show the narrative. I started with more back round and ended with a recap

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First off I started with a simple version with a rough outline showing the story and all the events. As we go along I will ad new and improved events to it. This is a-great way to do this.

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Redesign #2 - Reflection ending
I rearranged my story accordingly to what it said on the reflection ending narrative square. The purpose was to rearrange it so that to the reader it looks as though the narrator is stepping back and reflecting on what had just happened. This adds more depth and character to the narrative because it puts the narrator's perspective into the reader's perspective.

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Redesign #1 - Surprise ending
I rearranged my story accordingly to what it said on the surprise ending narrative square. The purpose was to rearrange it to where the reader didn't expect it to end in the way that it did.  This adds more character and depth to the narrative, as it makes it more interesting for the reader since it leaves them in shock. To do this, I took my notes and rearranged them sort of from the middle to the end.

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As you can see here, this is the original plan I had for my narrative. I arranged it in chronological order (from left to right). The goal was to make it simple so that it wouldn’t seem so complicated or confusing, but also add enough details to where it’s clear what direction it’s heading. I want to make my narrative interesting and not boring for the reader. I put it in this order because it is the order in which it occurred in real life.

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This redesign focuses more on her childhood and trying to get an education for herself to get out of an abusive family and constant struggles. It focuses on family and school struggles and how she gets through it to eventually get where she is today.

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This first redesign I focus more on her struggles that she goes through in her adult life and how she copes with it while helping other people going through what she went through and may be going through now. She reacts positively when so much is negative but she does not allow that to affect her and her family.

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This is the chronological plot line. This is how my mothers life went and how she would explain it to others. All the struggles she has gone through and is going through in her adulthood while helping other people and women. Mainly focusing on transitions between school life and personal life

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This is my second redesign. In this plot design I changed the ending to a more lighthearted ending that connects to the reference to the weather made at the beginning. The reference to the weather shows the change from dark to light to show the audience Laura´s hope for the future.

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This is my first redesign. In this plot design I added a anecdote of Laura´s about her learning to react positive to change. This explains to the reader why Laura reacts positively to a situation that is not ideal and tells the reader more about my mothers character and personality.

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This is the chronological plot line. The story is about my mother who is about to be commissioned as a Coast Guard Officer. In the story she is being assigned where she will live and what she will do in the Coast Guard once she is commissioned. By having the plot line in chronological order the reader will be able to see the story as it happened without interruption.

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Redesign #2 - Finishing the ending

This time, I added more on the end to help finish off the story. This will help make the story seem complete. I added that it went well and my friends and I keep in touch.

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Redesign #1 - More detail

For this one, I made certain parts of the story more detailed. I added to the timeline by saying how we had talked, and added that I was nervous to tell my friends because I had to say goodbye to them.

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My goal for the storyline was to make a simple overview for what my story will be about. It is from mt point of view, and it is about when my parents told me and my siblings that we were going to move to Canada. The notes are in chronological order, from left to right.

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Redesign #2
This time I incorporated a more circular ending, where I put how depression effects teens, next to when she was experiencing depression and then concluded my essay with how she is living life deliberately and how you should live your life deliberately too; which is how I started the essay.

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Redesign #1
I incorporated a flashback at the beginning of my timeline. I put the major even in the beginning and then reflected on everything that lead up to the main event after. Then resuming at the major event.

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This original plot line was to show the readers what had happened and give them chronologically how everything went down.

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Redesign #2- Dialogue Ending

This time I added dialogue at the end to show some deeper insight into one of the people and their reaction to the news that my mom was moving.

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Redesign #1- Circular Ending

This time I started kind of in the middle of the story and then when she has a flashback to her childhood, I followed that timeline and connected it back to the present to give some background information. The purpose was for the story to be more engaging.

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The reason I put it in this order is because this is how everything went down in real life.

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This redesign helps to focus and understand a different way that I wanted to look at the story that I want to tell. This side of the story helps to highlight the story and what should be done. I also felt it would be helpful to reflect in the story at the end.

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This redesign starts with the event and then goes back to cover the background. I also close out with a lesson that has been learned. Being able to place these throughout the story could help to provide more depth to the story than I previously realized.

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My goal was to make my plan simple, yet go over key details that will help create my story and allow it to go pretty deep. The purpose was to make sure that the story can connect throughout the story and still be very deep throughout the story. This is a very chronological order which will help to make the story better,

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Also, please make sure you plotline pictures are clear, and we can read your handwriting. :-)

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redesign #2 - give it a title

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Chronological Plotline -
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