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I watched a fire emergency on TV. It happened in a clothes shop. There were many customers inside. They were shouting and running out of the place. The rescue workers came in a fire truck in 10 minutes and  put off the fire. That was a scary situation.
1. What was the emergency situation?
- It was a fire emergency that I saw on TV.
2. Where did it happen?
- It happened in a clothes shop.
3. What were people doing there?
- They were shouting and running out of the place.
4. What transportation comes there?
- The rescue workers came in a fire truck to save people from the fire.
5. What sound can you hear in the emergency?
- I heard people crying and shouting loudly, and the loud noise from the fire truck when it came. It was very noisy there.

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I watched a fire emergency on TV. It happened in a restaurant. There were many customers inside. They were shouting and running out of the place. The rescue workers came in a fire truck in 5 minutes and put off the fire. That was a dangerous.
1. What was the emergency situation?
- It was an emergency in a restaurant
2. Where did it happen?
- It happened at a restaurant
3. What were people doing there?
-  They were shouting and running out of the place.
4. What transportation comes there?
- The rescue workers arrived in a fire truck to save people from a fire.
5. What sound can you hear in the emergency?
- I heard loud screams and loud noises from the fire truck as it approaches. It was very noisy there.

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I watched a fire emergency on TV.It happened in a home of one a family.There were one family.They were mom and 1 kid go outside and dad and 2 kids inside home.

The rescue workers came in a fire truck and put off the fire in 30 minutes.That was very dangerous.

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