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i like choice 3 because it represents the picture really well and also has strong verbs

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I chose choice 2 because it had really strong verbs instead of weak verbs.  Why would you choose 2 over 3?  What is your reasoning?  I like where you are going, but add some more detail to your response. I like choice 2 because it had at least 2 temporal words.

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I think choice 3 is the best choice because it grabs people's attenttion.

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Ithink three because strong verbs had sequence words  like finally, first, and next.

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I think choice 3 because it was long and had a lot of strong verbs and you actully  felt like you were there.

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I think choice 3 because it was long and had a lot of strong verbs and you actully  felt like you were there.

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I agree Alyssa. I love the verb choice in choice 3. By:Alyssa

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I selected choice 1 because it had really strong verbs and the ending was wrote what the picture looks like.

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Choice three because it has a bunch of strong verbs and. This also why "as the sheep were soundly asleep the dog was shivering with fear". Brennen-Please go back and read the question at the top of the page.  Which is the choice you would pick for the best ending?

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I think number 3 because it has so many strong words

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I think choice three because it has alot of sequence words and alot of strong verbs

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I think choice 2. But i think they should change the it to the dog, so the readers know what your talking about. i do like that they had alot of strong verbs and 2 sequence words and it really deccribes the ending well

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I think choice 3 has the best ending because  it has lots of strong verbs. I agree Tizhay. I think that the verbs in this choice really help our reader to see why the dog was so stressed out.

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I think that choice 3 is the best because it uses a lot of strong verbs and temporal words. I agree Brianna! I love the verb choice in #3 as well. I think it helps the reader really visualize being there.

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i think choice 3 is the best
because it had more detaill. And it had strong verbs.

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I pick choice 2 because it h is long and and has lots of verbs like after a long day, then, terror and frightened.

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I selected choice three because the choice uses temporal words or great discriptive words in the last sentence.

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I think choice 3 had the best ending because it had strong verbs it descrises the ending well.   I agree Nara!  Is there anything from the choice that really stands out to you?

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I choose choice 3 because it had really strong verbs and the ending was wrote what the picture looks like and it uses temporal words and they used strong verbs instead f weak verbs in there ending.

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i pick choice 3 because it is long and has a lot of strong verbs. Does it being long make it better you think? Or, is there something about the strong verbs that makes this writing stronger?

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I think choice 3 is the  best because it tells what was happening in the pictures plus it use's the right context of words and it involvse the two out of three characters and the main character is awake unlike the sheep.

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i think choice 1: had the best ending the reason why is it adds a ton of strong verbs. i don't think that the others do any ways

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i pick choice 3 because it has the most strong verbs and the best ending.

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i selcted choice 3 because it used strong verbs like petrafied.  it has more strong verbs. I agree Bailey, that is definitely a great verb.  Do you think that choice one has stronger verbs than choice 3?  Why or why not?

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Finally, night was upon them as they rushed to their cribs and fell asleep. But suddenly, the dog had awoken from his rest. He was petrified of the terrible sound he had heard. All of the roaring had upset the dog and the sheep still stirred. But, before the thunder could strike again, the dog fell asleep laying his head on the sheep.

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After the long day, they went inside the barn. Then, while the dog was sleeping, it woke up with terror because of the lightning storm. Next, the sheep woke up and saw that the dog was frightened, so they comforted it.

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While the storm was raging, the dog was trembling in fear unable to sleep, while the sheep were calmly sound asleep dreaming.