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1. Critique is essential for literature review section
2.In  methodology part, coding will be added.
3. Timing will be noted

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1. link the objective and aims more close
2. give more detail about the example literature (explain, critique)
3. better reasons for the methdology choice

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1Add content to the background
2more specific on values and benefits
3make objectives more clearly

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1、Accurate pronunciation and fluent presentation
2、Make slideshows more concise and clear
3、Clearly articulated and enthusiastic language

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1.  need to critique the sources in literature review
2. add more detail in methodology
3. repeat the research gap

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1.  explain and critique in-depth
2.  use linking words
3. make objective clear

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1 confident and enthusiastic
2 explain ethics
3 introduce myself

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1. cut down the content  of outline
2. add more details of my methodology and  clarify the research question
3. use coherence sentences to divide my potential benefits of academic significance and non academic significance.

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1.Add more critical details
2. Clear research objectives
3.Add more details about current research and previous research

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1.  more complex in key L and give a critique
2.  In the aspect of benefit, the significance of academia and the further development of future research should be expanded
3.  Explain why the methods used to collect and analyze data are useful/appropriate for my research

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1.Objective must be clear
2.Justify enveything in methodology section with an explanation and then reason why suitble for research question
3. Needs in depth critique of 2 or 3 individual sources.

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1. Research gap need to be always mentioned.
2. The methodology section should be more clear.
3. Value and benefit should be more details.

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1.sound confident and enthusiastic
2. with some key literatures
3. Justify everything in the methodology section with a reason

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1. Add more in-depth critique/ evaluation of individual sources
2. add academic benefit
3. add why choices for research everything in methodology section and give a reason

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1.The connection between scections should be natural
2.Use citation in presentation
3.Constantly changing speech rate

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3 ways for YOU to improve your presentation score (see grading criteria) 

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3 ways for YOU to improve your presentation score (see grading criteria) 