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I'm glad you updated your project descriptions. I would still consider adding QR codes on your motion and Figma projects. Last, please clean up the laptop and Data Vis. poster. The edges look really rough. You might want to use the pen tool to cut them out in Photoshop.

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Consider removing the class and semester you completed each project. You want to present this work as professional work, not student work (even if it is). The "D" in InDesign should be capitalized. Lastly, have your images start on the same grid line(s) on each page. The example above has the images left and bottom aligned.

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Consider making your images start on the same grid line on each page. The example I attached above the images start on the same left grid line. When you are clicking through the pdf, it looks much nicer when they hit the same spot on each page (like your project titles).

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Looks good - love that the QR codes are perfectly in the same place on each page! On the pages with the black background, make sure they are solid black. When I opened your PDF in Acrobat, I could see where you cut the images out.

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I would consider making your images start on the same grid line on each page. The example I attached above the images start on the same left and bottom grid lines. When you are clicking through the pdf, it looks much nicer when they hit the same spot on each page (like your project titles do right now).

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Looking good. Remove your name and semester from the interior pages. I would also add QR codes to your Figma and motion pieces so we can see them in action. Last, consider rewriting your descriptions to sound a tiny bit more professional. See my examples above.

Below are the other suggested project descriptions:

PACKAGE (PRINT DESIGN)
This project involved rebranding a pasta product from the ground up. After exploring naming conventions across global pasta brands, I selected “Bronze” as a reference to a key element of traditional pasta production. The final identity reflects a warm, approachable aesthetic inspired by artisanal, homemade products.

SYMBOL BOOK (PRINT DESIGN)
The Symbol Book centers on the late summer season, using curated imagery to explore thematic connections between objects. Each spread pairs photographs to create visual contrast, with color adjustments emphasizing warm and cool lighting to enhance the overall composition.

WEBSITE REDESIGN (INTERACTIVE)
This project involved redesigning a restaurant-focused website for New Orleans, building on an existing red-based color palette. After initial layout sketches, I developed a prototype in Figma to guide the final design. The result emphasizes clear hierarchy, refined typography, and high-quality imagery to strengthen usability and visual consistency.

GREAT IDEAS (DATA VIS.)
This project analyzes data from the Great Ideas of Western Man campaign, focusing on the nationalities and occupations of its contributors. I visualized this information through a world map highlighting each figure’s origin, supported by a detailed bar chart that compares key demographic patterns.

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I'm glad your cover page matches your resume and cover letter. I would remove your name and contact info from every page except the cover page - less busy that way. Also, since your cover page is left aligned, I would have your type and projects left aligned inside as well. See my examples above.

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Looks good - I can tell you used a grid and it matches your resume and cover letter, which is great! I would remove your name and contact info from every page except your cover page. Makes the whole thing a little less busy. I would also discourage overlapping images. Your mock up look good. Could you create some for your other projects like the invite and the book cover?

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It's looking good. I'm glad your portfolio matches your resume and cover letter (and that you kept everything lowercase). My only suggestions would be to remove the semester/season and just left the year on each project. Also, I would suggest uploading your motion pieces to Youtube or IG and including QR codes for your videos and Figma projects. That way we can see them in action!

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It's looking good. I'm glad your portfolio matches your resume and cover letter. I would just make sure you use a grid. Line up your name and email address and your title with "portfolio" on your cover page. Also, I would make your "theatre posters" match a little better by adding white space on top of the "Illain" poster and more white space on the bottom of both. Let me know if you have any questions!

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I like the look of it but I would consider rephrasing the first two paragraphs to sound a little bit more professional. After you make your final edits, please drop the final file into your Google folder.

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Your resume and cover letter should be consistent - like a set. I also think you should rearrange your sections. See my feedback above. After you make these changes, please drop your final file into your Google Folder.

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Looks good - my only suggestion would be to indent "and" and "sculpting" so they start/line up with the line above them. After you make that small change, please drop your final file into your Google Folder.

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Looks good but there are a couple of misspellings and please remove the periods after June and July in your dates. After you make those small updates, drop your final file into your Google Folder.

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I'm glad you used the same type treatment on your name as your resume. Consider adding "graphic designer" under your name on your cover letter as well. As far as the content goes, it feels a little bit generic. Consider providing specific skills and examples and focusing on what you can contribute to a team. See my suggestions above.

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Looks consistent with your resume, which is great. I would give yourself a little more of a margin on top and to the left. I like your cover letter but I would be more specific where you can. See my suggestions above.

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I like how enthusiastic you are and you've done the research about the company but there are a few misspellings which could be a big red flag for some places. Overall it sounds good but I made a few suggestions above.

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You sound confident in your cover letter and I like that but talk a little more about what you can bring to the team and use specifics where you can. As far as the design goes, it's not consistent with your resume. They should look like a set. I think I prefer what you've got going on with you cover letter so maybe change your resume to match this. See my other suggestions above.

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I'm glad your cover letter is consistent with your resume. Your type though is hard to read - consider adding more space between letters and lines. Also consider condensing your letter - there are a few run on sentences in there. I would also adjust your margin on the left side. See my suggestions above!

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I think I preferred the layout of your first version of your resume. You had more of a margin all the way around. You may want to consider a different typeface (or adjusting your kerning/space between letters) because your descriptions are hard to read. I would also use bullet points instead of a paragraph format. See my suggestions above and let me know if you have any questions.

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I like the changes you made. I have two small suggestions. One is to give yourself a bit bigger of a margin on the left side so it feels even on the right. Second, and you don't have to do this but consider putting your descriptions in a bulleted format rather than a paragraph format. Bullets give you an opportunity to add interest (doesn't have to be just a dot). It's fine as it but you might want to use it to make your resume stand out a bit more in the stack.

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Looking good! I made a few suggestions above. I would make sure things are lining up. It looks a bit awkward that your contact info was higher than your name. Let me know if you have any questions!

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I like the changes to the copy! I only have a few tweaks for you. I would give yourself a tiny bit more space at the top and left. Also, you don't abbreviate the month of June and I would remove the periods after July in the dates. That's it!

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Love the changes to the copy but I would consider moving things around to make the page feel more balanced. See my suggestions above!

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You can tell you used a grid which is great! I would consider rephrasing your coursework and experience (occupation) descriptions to sound a bit more professional. Take a look at my suggestions above and let me know if you have any questions!

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Consider giving yourself bigger margins all the way around and making your text a little bit smaller. Use a grid - line your bio up with "Education" and "Skills" - they should all start on the same grid line (in red). You should give yourself more space between lines of text (leading). I've also made suggestions on how to rephrase your bio and experience descriptions a bit more professional. See my suggestions above and let me know if you have any questions.

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The layout is looking good - you can tell you used a grid! I would consider rephrasing your education and experience descriptions to sound a bit more professional. Take a look at my suggestions above and let me know if you have any questions!

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Looking good so far. I would give yourself more space in the margins of the page by bringing your two columns closer together. It will put the subheads (like "awards") closer to the information in the right column. Also, consider your grid and how things line up. The locations and dates under each company look a little awkward right adjusted. I think you can keep them gray but make them a little larger and left-aligned. See my suggestions above and let me know if you have any questions!

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I like how bold your name is but consider starting it on the same grid line as your title. Also, consider rephrasing your bio and work experience to sound a bit more professional. See my suggestions above and let me know if you have any questions!

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It's looking better but I would make sure your grid is the same on every page. Set up your margins for each page. I would recommend 0.25 all the way around. The Pepsi page needs some serious cleaning up. It looks very messy. Take a look at the examples above and please resubmit your final portfolio as soon as possible.

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Looking good - I'm glad you added descriptions for each project. I would consider making those descriptions sound a little more professional by removing the reference of the class/assignment from each project. For example for the Meteor project your could simply say "Designed and illustrated an album cover

inspired by the song Meteor by John Wyndham (important to include Wyndham since "John" could be anyone). Please make these updates and resubmit your final as soon as possible.

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While I appreciate white space, I think for a couple of projects, you could utilize the page a little better/to your advantage. See examples above and please let me know if you have any questions. It's looking good though! Professional.

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Looking good so far. Your cover page should reflect your resume/cover letter so I used the same font for your name on your portfolio. Most of your headers are on the same grid line except one or two (like the Light Bulb project for example). Make sure they are all lined up. Last, I would photo edit the photographed images so you can't see the hard edges on the image. See the Light Bub packaging as an example above.

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Looks good - I'm glad you updated your name/title. The only thing I could see that needs updating is The Maroon should be in italics (you italicize all publications). Also, remember to put your name in the file name. You have to imagine these employers are getting lots of cover letters. You want yours to be easy to find.

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Your resume, cover letter and portfolio should be a set and look consistent. For this assignment/course, your portfolio needs to be pared down. I want your work to shine, not the portfolio itself. Take a look at what I did above and what your peers have turned in.

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Your resume, cover letter and portfolio should look like a set which is why I mocked up your title page the way I did. Overall it looks pretty good but I would have your images line up in the same spot on every page. For example, The Maroon covers should be in the exact same places on both pages.

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Looks great - I can tell you used a grid and stuck with it on every page. Very professional. For the LUCAP logo, I would put it in a box, otherwise the Loyola logo looks a littler weird at the top right. Also, for those images that have a white background, I would blend them into the page OR change the color of the background so they are clearly within a box. I hope that makes sense. If know, please send me an email and I can try to better explain what I mean (see above)!

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I can tell you used a grid and because of that, it looks very professional. My only suggestions would be to make sure your images are hi-res (the king cake hub image is super pixelated) and photo edit the images that have white backgrounds. You can keep the drop shadows, but I'd remove the backgrounds.

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I'm glad your title page is consistent with your resume and cover letter. I do think you need to create a grid and use it on each page of your portfolio. Also, less is more. You don't need to have so much on each page. For your motion and Figma pieces, I would post them to your instagram or YouTube and include a QR code so potential employers can see your work in action.

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Your resume, cover letter and portfolio should look like a set. It's great that you used a grid and everything is in line! I like the work that you've included but I would highly suggest including descriptions of each project. I was left with a lot of questions after looking through your portfolio. Also, I would either put your project in chronological order or I would suggest removing the months and just put the year(s).

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Your resume, cover letter and portfolio should look like a set. That being said, I took your header from your resume and placed it on your cover letter without the bio. I also rewrote the letter to sound a bit more professional. Read it over and see what you think!