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There are textual references, but they are limited.

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Evid. & Commentary Score: 2
The writer shows understanding of the piece but doesn't go into any depth and was a little bit vague.

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Overall Score: 2
Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Makes some references to the text, with little to no commentary.

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Evidence & Commentary: 3
It had textual references but they were uneven or limited in places.

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Evidence and commentary:2
Uses textual references but commentary is simple and limited

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Evidence and Commentary Score 3: makes textual references but limited commentary

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Evid. & Commentary: 3
No debatable thesis, limited commentary

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Evidence/Commentary: 2
There are a few lines of evidence/quotes from the text, but commentary isn't very in depth

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Evidence and commentary: 2
The evidence is simple

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evidence and commentary:2
They give brief evidence, but do not expand on it and connect it to

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Evid. & Commentary: 2
Brief/simple commentary, thesis does not fully respond to prompt.

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Evidence and commentary: 2
Uses some textual evidence but the evidence is somewhat simple

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thesis; 1, the argument wasn't explained well but enough

evidence and commentary; 2, they didn't expand or touch on any of their claims very much. The evidence given wasn't very connected to their claim and was very brief.

sophistication; 0, they didn't really have a very good thesis to work with

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They were very brief and do not elaborate on their evidence

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Evidence/Commentary: 2
The selected quotes do somewhat tie into the thesis, but commentary isn't strong enough

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Evid. and Commentary: 2
The evidence is brief

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Overall Score: 3
Evidence and Commentary Score: 2
Commentary is brief and slightly inaccurate.

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Evidence and Commentary: 2
Commentary is simple and short and didn't explain much

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Evid. & Commentary: 4
Defensible thesis, explicitly explains evidence, vivid writing style.

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Evidence & Commentary: 2
Brief commentary and doesn't answer prompt fully.

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Evidence and Commentary Score 1:
vague reference, little commentary

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evidence:2
does not elaborate enough on evidence given

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Overall Score: 6
Evidence and Commentary Score: 4
Makes and properly integrates several textual references, each accompanied by equally excellent commentary.

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Evidence and commentary score: 4
Uses great textual evidence that consistently helps explain the thesis

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Evidence/Commentary: 4
Selected quotes are very relevant to defense of the thesis, commentary is in-depth and accurate

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Evid and Com: 3 Makes textual references but commentary is limited.

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Evidence & Commentary: 4
Good explanations and evidence. The explanations helped the quotes make sense.

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Evid. and Commentary: 4
the evidence defense the claim and explains how it connects

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does not elaborate on evidence or connect completely back to the thesis

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Overall Score:  3
Evidence and Commentary Score: 3
Writer appropriately uses and integrates their evidence, which they back using good commentary.

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Evid. and Commentary: 4
Gives great evidence with great explanations to back it all up. All of the writers evidence and analysis relates to their topic sentence without repeating it.

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Evid.& Commentary: 3
Simple commentary, commentary explains relationship to evidence

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evidence:4
the essay was neatly organized and the evidence was selective to their thesis.

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Evid and Com: 3 Multiple textual references, but very simple commentary.

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Evidence and Commentary:3
Uses well put together evidence to help support thesis

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Evidence/Commentary: 3
Although there isn't a lot of either, when used evidence is relevant, and commentary is accurate

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Evidence and Commentary 4:
Had textual references that defended thesis and consistently explains the relationship to the thesis.

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Evidence & Commentary: 3
Has evidence and explanations but it isn't even or complete everywhere.

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Evid. and Commentary:3
Explains the evidence

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Evid and Com: 4 Evidence is provided that defends thesis, and commentary is thorough.

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evidence:2
they give some evidence and some commentary, and it lacks organization

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evidence and commentary 4
they used relevant text examples with explanations that connected back to the debatable thesis.

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Evidence and Commentary 3:
Makes textual references that defended the thesis, commentary was uneven

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Evid. and Commentary: 3
Has okay textual evidence to defend the thesis but isn't fully explained in some spots.

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thesis; 1, a short and sweet thesis that helped explain their argument well enough

evidence and commentary; 2, it was very simple and very little commentary

sophistication; 0, not very good

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Evid and Com: 2 Makes references, but commentary is simple.

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evidence and commentary 3
simple commentary but could elaborate more

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thesis; 1, definitely created a good argument

evidence and commentary; 4, made many relations to the text and sounded very sophisticated, understood the text and showed it

sophistication; 1, knew what they were talking about

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thesis; 1, the thesis had a good argument that  could be argued

evidence and commentary; 3, explained it to a good extent

sophistication; didn't get it to a great extent