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Plans for developing & strengthening your future BTA essay writing:
1. Include ways in which classrooms can utilize the reform I am discussing. (Active learning)
2. Include how this reform relates to progressivism.
3. Include ways students can be assessed based on this type of learning in the classroom,
4. Further detail the benefits to students and society with this type of reform.
5. Make sure my references are cited correctly and accurately coincide with my material.

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1. Review APA citations by re-watching plagiarism video provided by Dr. Harris and visiting Purdue website to compare my paper to citation examples provided.
2.Interview kindergarten teacher, Preschool teacher, and elementary school principal on their views and expertise on whether they would support my supposed reformation on universal Pre-K.
3. Use the Joyner libraries to further research more scientific journals and/or books to see if benefits of a quality early childhood education can still be seen in higher education.
4. Provide more examples of how Pre-K promotes social skills that children will use throughout school.
5. Use ideas promoted by Froebel and Montessori that align with the progressivism theory that is supported and used in today's Pre-K classrooms.
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1. I found two different journals from the Joyner library databases to use in my section 2 essay.
2. I reviewed APA citation rules and reviewed my paper.
3. Provided examples or progressivism and social/emotional development in Pre-K classrooms.
4. I did interviews with two teachers but decided to use citations from my other resources. I will potentially save those quotes for future essays.

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Laura Gillikin- Plan to strengthen writing

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Laura Gillikin- Plan to strengthen writing

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1.     Study APA citation guidelines to ensure that I am citing correctly to avoid plagiarism.

2.     Remember to stay on task while writing being careful not to venture off to another similar topic.

3.     Ensure that my reform is reasonable and could be fulfilled in classrooms.

4.     Always write about ways that would impact students intellectually and make them successful.

5.     Use factual information to support your ideas is a great way to establish validity of your reform.

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Plans for developing & strengthening your future BTA essay writing:
1. Collect more research regarding my reform and ensure my references align with my research.
2. Make sure that I am correctly using APA citation guidelines to ensure I am not plagiarizing and that my citations are correct.
3. Be sure to include how my reform relates to the educational theories.
4. Include why my reform will be beneficial to schools, teachers, students, and the community.
5. Use examples from the book to back up my reform relate the two.

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Plans for developing & strengthening your future BTA essay writing:
1) use correct APA format, including in-text citations to avoid plagiarism
2) use many reputable sources to add incite into my essay
3) in depth analyze why my reform will give equitable education to all students
4) discuss in depth how the educational philosophies we read about apply to my reform
5) include and discuss the many different ideas for reform

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Plans for developing & strengthening your future BTA essay writing:
1. Ensure essay is written in a clear, organized way, with each topic having its own paragraph.
2. Try to narrow research down to the most important information.
3. Find a way to use concepts of progressivism to make a compelling argument for my reform.
4. Find additional reputable sources to tie my philosophy to my reform.
5. Create an outline of main points before actually writing my essay.

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Plans for developing & strengthening your future BTA essay writing:
1. Use correct APA citation, including in-text citations and correct formatting of references on the References page
2. Make clear connections between my philosophy of education to support my reform
3. Provide different information than previously stated in past writings as to why my reform is important
4. Use historical figures to emphasize my philosophy
5. Expand on my thoughts and reasonings

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Morgan Griffin- Plan to strengthen writing

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Morgan Griffin- Plan to strengthen writing

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1. Ensure that resources are credible and are cited correcty according to the APA format.
2. Make sure there is direct relation to my reform to at least one philosophy.
3. Stay on task according to the rubric and don't stray off the key topics.
4. Be sure to specify the group of students my reform benefits.
5. Provide some more statistics/studies to back up my statements.

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Plans for Developing and Strengthening Your Future BTA Essay Writing:
1. Apply both progressivism and critical theory to my reform
2. Advocate for both students and teachers
3. Explain how my reform will strengthen schools
4. Explain the economic and civic purposes of my reform
5. Explain the importance of having a community and student driven course.

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Priscilla Baker                Plans for strengthening writing

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Priscilla Baker                Plans for strengthening writing

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1. Ensure that I follow the APA formatting guidelines.
2. Research more data regarding my reform and make sure that my references lines up.
3.  Research my reform and how it will strengthen schools.
4. Ensure that the connection between my philosophy of education support my reform.
5. Make sure that the text is cited correctly.

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My plans for developing & strengthening my future BTA essay writing:
1. Research, and narrow down information to the most important.
2. Correctly cite my resources.
3. Compose a detailed outline. Make connections between my philosophy of education to support my reform.
4. Begin drafting, making sure the essay flows in a coherent and organized way.
5. Proof read for grammatical and spelling errors.

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Gabby Godwin- Plans for strengthening writing

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Gabby Godwin- Plans for strengthening writing

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1. Have only and all useful sources regarding my reform to education.
2. Clarify the relationship between my philosophy of education to my reform.
3. Make sure my header of my paper is format correctly.
4. Find more resources to use in my paper when talking about my philosophy connecting to my reform.
5. Make sure that all my sources are in APA formate.

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Plans to strengthen writing:
1. Research more about APA format and practice proper in-text citations and a correct reference page.
2. Find more research elements to add to my paper.
3. Use the textbook as a resource for the paper, instead of only using online databases.
4. Make connections between my philosophy of education, and the reform that I am advocating for.
5. Give myself more time to draft the paper and proof read.

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Plans to strengthen writing:
1. Review APA citation rules and proofread essay for APA conventional errors.
2. Use the textbook to define educational philosophies and identify contemporary contexts that correspond with my reform. More specifically the prominence of critical theory in my reform.
3. Review previous essay submissions and use noted claims to further conclusions in the philosophy section.
4. Be sure to include why my reform corresponds with critical theory and why other educational philosophies do not correlate with my reform.
5. Allow a peer to review my writing and note any significant errors.

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plans to strengthen writing

1. Make sure that the content of my essay is clear and concise
2. Do more research and add more facts to my paper
3. Add more facts from the textbook
4. Ensure that I review APA citation rules when citing
5. Allow time for peer reviews to ensure my writing is proof read.

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Plans for Strengthening Writing:
1. Ensure that APA format is being used throughout essay. Proofread essay before submitting to avoid grammatical and spelling errors.
2. Utilize textbook and lecture videos to provide additional support and evidence for essay.
3. Allow ample time to critically think about concept for writing a well-written and strong essay.
4. Review feedback from previous assignments and sections from essay to ensure that the following sections are much more successful.
5. Compare philosophy of education with my chosen reform to provide a strong argument.

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Plans to strengthen writing,
1. Find multiple reliable sources for statistics and information on my reform.
2. Use past assignments along with notes to utilize when writing paper.
3. Go in-depth with how my reform  in beneficial to the education system and students.
4. Explain the how and why this reform should be implemented.
5. Check paper for any spelling, grammar, and citation mistakes.

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1. Find sources from actual research, possibly even books.
2. Review APA guidelines and focus on proper in-text citations
3. Make my writing more concise and to the point
4. Make very clear connection between my philosophy and benefits to a decrease in testing
5. Work on using the textbook and my notes taken more often in my writing

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Plans to Strengthen Writing:
1. Adjust in-text citations to APA format
2. Find more reliable sources/using the the text book more
3. Correctly cite references in APA format
4. Fix grammatical/punctuation errors
5. Making sure I don't fluctuate topics in specific sections

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Plans for Strengthening Writing:
1. Find more sources pertaining to my reform.
2. Rewatch the video on APA guidelines. More specifically paying attention to the layout.
3. Asking a friend to proofread my paper.
4. Explain my reform thoroughly.
5. Make connections between my reform and my philosophy.

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Plans to Strengthen Writing:
1.  Find more variety of sources to include in my paper. When using scholarly sources, I find that the majority focus on the impact of libraries/librarians on test scores and I would love to examine other areas where there is impact because we know that standardized tests are not always the most accurate assessment of student learning or growth. I tend to get stuck looking at one source for a long time and trying to get my interpretation of that one source perfect. I think my writing would benefit from having more pieces of evidence to back up my claims. This will also help increase the length of my analysis.
2. Research more how to implement APA style, as I have never used it before
3. I need to be more specific about the exact reform I am advocating for.

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Accomplishments for developing & strengthening you essay      Michelle Ehrler

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Accomplishments for developing & strengthening you essay      Michelle Ehrler

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1. I included ways active learning could be used in an elementary classroom.
2. I included ways this reform aligns with progressivism.
3. Included ways students can be assessed.
4. Detailed ways students would benefit from active learning.

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Accomplishments for developing and strengthening your essay- Morgan Griffin

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Accomplishments for developing and strengthening your essay- Morgan Griffin

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1. I ensured that all sources used were credible and that they were cited correctly according to the APA format.
2. I included many different ways to relate progressivism to my proposed reform.
3. I made sure to directly follow the rubric in order to stay on topic. I hit all of the important key concepts included in the rubric.
4. I made sure to include that peer-tutors would be accessible to all students, but especially low-level students.
5. I included an interesting fact to show the correlation between drop-out rates and tutoring.

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Accomplishments for developing and strengthening your essay:
1. I made sure that my writing was structured logically and cohesively.
2. I used the BTA section 2 review questions assignment and an appointment with Dr. Harris to help me construct an outline for my essay.
3. I successfully used concepts of progressivism to make a strong case for my reform.
4. I found additional reputable sources to provide evidence for my claims and to back up my chosen philosophy.

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Accomplishments for developing & strengthening essay - Sabrina Villa

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Accomplishments for developing & strengthening essay - Sabrina Villa

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1. I made sure that the content of my essay was clear and concise by keeping my goal of what I am advocating for in mind and never losing sight of the purpose of my essay
2. I did a lot more research and found a lot of facts that I incorporated in my paper from a great source
3. I used the textbook to add facts about philosophies to make my essay strong with facts
4.I researched and review APA citation rules to ensure that my citations were correct.
5. I allotted myself time to review my essay to correct any errors.

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Accomplishments for developing and Strengthening Essay - Kelsey Woods

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Accomplishments for developing and Strengthening Essay - Kelsey Woods

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In this section of the essay, I think I did a good job of adhering to APA format and being more specific about the exact reform I am advocating for. Additionally, I was able to include eight sources in this section of the essay and increase my word count with more pieces of evidence to back up my claims.

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(Willicia Johnson)
1. Cite in-text citations correctly
2. Used the text book a lot more as a resource.
3. I kept the same topic in this section where as in the previous sections I would bounce in between different topics

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Accomplishments:
1. I used the textbook as a big resource for my paper
2. I gave myself ample time to proofread and work on my paper
3. I reviewed APA Guidelines