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Nelson Mandela was born on 18 july 1918 as Rolihlahla in a small village in South Africa. His name means troublemaker.  His first teacher changed his name to Nelson.  When his father died he lived with his mother. First Mandela went with his cousin to study at the university Fort Hare. But he stopped studying because he was protesting about the food at the college. Later he ran away with his cousin to Johannesburg because he didn’t want to marry the girl which his uncle had chosen for him. In Johannesburg he began to work in a lawyer office and studied  in the evening. He met his first wife and he joined the ANC which means African National Congress. In the begin the ANC was against violence but later they used violence. Dr Daniel Malan introduced the term Apartheid. Black people were separated. There were laws to separate white and black people in all areas, like schools, work, hospitals etc. Black people must move to townships. Townships were the areas outside the city were black people must live. There was no running water or electricity. The houses were poor. Mandela fights against this laws but Nelson came in prison for the rest of his live. The Prison was in Robben Island. He was in prison for almost thirty years. Mandela became a famous person around the whole world. He knew Jesse Jackson, Desmond Tutu etc. When he was free he continue his fight. At he end of 1993 Nelson Mandela and president de Klerk were given the Nobel Peace Prize for their work for peace in South Africa. And on 10 may 1994 he became president of South Africa till 1999. The government exist of black and white south Africans, Indians, etc... Also friends of him were elected in the government. He married three times and he got six child’s. He started the Childrens Fund in 1995 for help the children of South Africa and he used his visits to get money. His first sun Thembekile died of aids He also organized a music campaign against aids.. Nelson Mandela used his prisoner number (46664) for the music concert. Famous artist were  Bob Geldof, Bono, Beyonce. After this concert there came a lot of more concerts in the whole world.

COMMENT OF JUSTICE
The summary is well structured, but i have noticed lack of conectors, some mistakes with verb tenses, but, despite that, it´s a good analysis, even though he could have used vocabulary more advanced to explain everything as it should have been.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Your summary is good, yet surprisingly there are some errors with verb tenses and you also use a lot of short sentences.  When you usually write your expressions are more advanced and better structured.  Did you write the summary yourself? The level is not up to your usual standard...
MARKS: 7/10

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Nelson Mandela.
This book, written by Rowena Akinyemi, summarizes the life and story of Nelson Mandela, one of the world´s greatest leaders of all time, and an extraordinary man, who  had a tireless struggle for human rights. After the long years in prison, his endless walk to freedom brought hope to many people around the world.

I chose this book because it seemed really interesting at first, and that´s something i always demand in a book, and, obviously, this is about freedom and human rights, what better book to choose when i´m into both concepts.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Brief but task accomplished - good range of advanced grammar and vocabulary
MARKS: 9/10

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The main character of this history is Buck a dog whose life is perfect until a employ of his owner sold him. From this Buck start a hard life, he starts to train for be a sled dog later is sold some times more until end with a terrible family, this family forces to Buck and the other dogs to work whitout break, a man who is called   John Thornton see this and save Buck from the family, Buck and Thornton start a really happy relanthionship, later a courage bet this relathionship become really strong but few time later a wild tribe kill Thornton and the jury, Buck really angry kill 2 wild people, from this Buck starts a wild life and every year visit his old owner.
COMMENT OF THE BODY IN THE LIBRARY:
This book looks really interesting because i love the murder stories and i haven't anything to say againts Alex comment his vocabulary and english level is just savage

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
You have not completed the tasks as requested Esteban, but have done a bit of both
MARKS: 6.5/10

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Main characters:
Helen Smith: She's sixteen years old. She was quite and generous, them very friendly.
Bobby Leader: He's sixteen years old. He's a very good friend and he loves the basket.
Lisa Seymour: She's sixteen years old. She's a model.
The three main characters are friends and also they are classmates.

Summary:
Arrived the first day of school, Helen, Bobby and Lisa return to meet and they tell all that they're doing during the summer. Helen was bored of her life and then she decided to go out without parental permission; here she met a man who gave a strong drink. Then, when Bobby was sleeping, she phoned him very scared and she asked him for help and Bobby went to the disco to help her. When they were together, shetold him that the man had tried to kindap. When her parents found out, she was punished for 6 months without go out.
Next than six months, she could go out, she was very tired and she asken again if could go with they, so they can meet together as before, they answered yes.
The Helen's father has got a meeting with the Gregory's teacher and the headmistress and they want open the school for more childrens with problems and for enable the school, they go to do a challenge for the foundraising with a prize (a travel to Paris) and Lisa, Bobby and Helen participated. They want to organize in the school a big party of San Valentin's day for the foundraising. The day before of the party, they had everything ready when there was a big storm and the salon flooded. Then, they had to cancel the party, but affortunatly, someone gave her a local when they could do the party. The party was succesfull and the next day everybody was happy.
Now, they had to think in other event but between the exams and the personal parties, they didn't put according for Easter, but they planned a fashion show on May. When the show end, Bobby asked the ticket for change for money in the bank, anabody have it because Helen had left the bag to a little children and, at the next day, a children admit that he spend the money in her sister's team. Finally, the Newspaper Team win the challenge, but the three friends go to California with Bobby's grandparents.

Comment:
I think that this book has been very entertaining and it's according to my age, although some words I have had to look for, the most of the book I understood it.
I recommend it.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Marta, I think you have used automatic translation to translate your summary.  These expressions are clearly Spanish and I know you wouldn't make some of the mistakes that I can see in this text...  You could have done a much better job doing it yourself!
You haven't commented on one of your classmates' post.
MARKS: 4.5/10

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My book is Robison Crusoe.
This book written by Daniel Defoe, he was a writer, journalist and pamphleteer Englishman, throughout the world known by his novel Robinson Crusoe.
The book is of adventure.
From the book I hope that it has many adventures, action, fiction, pirates' wars and that is mysterious and entertaining.
I hope that it is not a boring book, which entertains me and which does not stop reading it.
Task 2
The history tells us the adventures of a young person Englishman, belonging to a family of middle class, which he liked to be a sailor and which was very taught by many advices that his father was giving him for the life in general, on what he was thinking that it might be better for his son. One of the advices that his father gave him was that it did not go away to the sea, since it would lose the privileges of belonging to the middle class, that is to say, that would never be overwhelmed for not being rich and that would not also spend calamities for not being a poor person, but if it was going away to the sea, beside having few possibilities of surviving, it would suffer very much. Robinson was in the one that was for 28 years, until it was rescued, with the help of many utensils that it could save from the ship that sank for the storm, cultivated, he was hunting, it domesticated animals, explored the island, a schedule was created, a calendar and a diary, in which he was writing, until the ink was ended, everything what happened to him and, every day, also was reading a bit of the Bible. During all this time of loneliness he verified since him all the advices had fulfilled that his father had given him. Robinsón was thinking that he was the only inhabitant of the island, but one day discovered that there were a few tribes cannibals, and so on it was living through adventures.

COMMENT OF ROBINSON CRUSOE:
I think that the analysis of the famous book ' Daniel Defoe's Robinson Crusoe has been written well have understood corectamente what us queria to say. In my this opinion written well and explained good, it counts well the history without the end of the book counting to us and leaves you with the doubt that it happens in the history and they give you desire of reading the book to know what happens in the history.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Did you enjoy the book Laura?
You were meant to comment of one of your classmates' posts, but you comment on your own novel!
MARKS: 5/10

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General idea

A terrorist put the bomb in the Queen's parade, and it was a terrible accident in which Alan Cole loses his leg, Anna is kidnapped by the terrorist, the police arrest two people suspected of putting the bomb, the terrorist is going to visit To Alan Cole In the hospital, and said "you've had a terrible accident." While Anna escaped the terrorists. Finally Alan Cole and Anna are safe from danger, and the terrorists are arrested.

Analysis of Robinson Crusoe

I think the analysis of the famous book "Robinson Crusoe" has been spelled correctly. First, begin to describe Robinson Crusoe and in what situation he is, then sums up everything that happened to Robinson Crusoe. Personally, I think the summary is a little inadequate, however, you understand everything you wanted to tell about the story of Robinson Crusoe.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
You have mixed up the two tasks. The anyalysis is part of task 2.
MARKS: 6/10

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Author: Tim Vicary

Genre: Thriller & Adventure

Main Characters: Alan Cole, Anna, Queen, Inspector Lee and Detective Hall, Jane

Summary
In this book the terrorists are not interested in the justice of other people, they only think of bombs and weapons and murders. But there is another kind of justice, an old one, before there were police, laws and prisons. It is called eye for an eye, tooth for tooth, life for life.

The bomb that exploded in the carriage of the queen who was outside the Parliament, killing five people and disappearing the queen. Jane Cole is looking at the crowd, has been driving for the queen, and now Jane is afraid, she began to help the people terrified and. They find him lying on the floor covered with blood and screaming in pain. Alan Cole lives, but he lacks his leg. And the terror for him and his daughter is just beginning, because Alan knows something about the terrorist. He has not realized it yet, but he will soon. And someone, somewhere, desperately wants to stop them. Alan Cole does exercises with an artificial leg, he is very good. Finally the terrorist are in prison. And Anna is indifferent since she is not afraid.

Personal opinion

In my opinion I wanted to read the book, where the police die and the terrorist is not captured. And Anna is killed, but the book is an example for life, which happens right now. And it teaches some important things to oneself.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Yonni, I asked you to write your OWN summary, not the one that is written in the book.  The first part of your text is copied exactly from the original book!! This is plagiarism.
There are a lot of short sentences and your grammar and vocabulary looks like it has been translated by an automatic translator...
What did you learn from the book Yonni?
MARKS:  4.5/10

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The callenge.
This book, written by Anne Stanmore, belongs to the teen, exciting and moralizing genre. Here is the general plot:
Bobby, Helen and Lisa, all 16 years old and in year at school, want to do something excitinng during the school year. When the headmaster announces afundraising competition to remodel the local primary school, they are very enthusiastic and star planning. The prize will be a holiday in Paris and the  friends will learn some lessons.
What I expect from the book is to find it entertaining, suitable for my age and not very difficult to understand and I like this genre.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
It sounds interesting Marta, I hope you enjoy it.
Good work.
MARK: 8/10

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The author is Mary Stewart
The genre is thriller and adventure.
Nicola, is a secretary in Athens, she has been waiting for a week of holidays in Crete having a relaxed time with flowers and the company of her cousin Frances. Then on her day off her impulse led her to a little-used road in the mountains. Se found two people who inadvertently encountered blood scene, involving a young Englishman and a group of related people.

For the first time in her life Nicola meets a man and a situation she cannot deal with… for reasons he could not explain. Warned to stay away, Nicola was unable to obey. And before she realized what she had uncovered, she found herself thrust into the midst of an alarming plot in which she would become the prey… And suddenly the life that Nicola worships was put in danger

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Elena, you have copied the majority of your text from a webside http://dearauthor.com/book-reviews/overall-b-reviews/b-plus-reviews/review-the-moonspinners-by-mary-stewart/
without even giving credit to the original author.  This is plagiarism.

MARKS: 0/10

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the author is L.M.Montgomery.
I have chosen this book because it talks about a family which need a boy who helps them to look after the farm, but the  orphan give to them a girl, her name is Anne.
The girl will live with the family, because they don't know how to send her back. Then Anne stay living with them.
I believe that it could be interesting and its an history that makes me want to continue reading.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Good work Diego, I hope you enjoy the book.
MARKS: 8/10

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Jason Solano - Nelson Mandela

-The titule called Nelson Mandela and their author is Rowena Akinyemi

-The genre is factfiles

-The plot

Nelson´s life is example of fight for right´s blacks against colonials white mens , who wanted shuted up for impulse racism in South-Africa in the time of Apartheid, but Mandela fight and fight and fight since  that he could take the pace, equality and love between blacks and whites

-I wait who was awesome, natural and emotive because I like the stores which plot is educative and moral, and too cool

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
I am pleased you have used your own words, even though in some case there are some mistakes.  Good work Jason.
MARKS: 6.5/10

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The story starts when the Bantrys discover a body of a blond woman in their library.
Dolly Bantry, who is married with Arthur Bantry, calls her friend Jane Marple, who is very good at solving murders. Miss Marple is not the only one who participates in this crime, the Superintendent Harper and the Colonel Melchett also take part in this mysterious situation. The body is Ruby Keene, a dancer who worked at the Majestic Hotel. Conway Jefferson is a rich old invalid man who liked to give fifty thousand pounds to Ruby Keene, without being from his family, when he dies. Adelaide Jefferson and Mark Gaskell are daughter-in-law and son-in-law of Mr Jefferson and they didn't want the money for Ruby Keene. Sir Henry Clithering, a Mr Jefferson's friend, also helps the police to solve the crime of the young blond girl. After that, a second murder happened, this time it was a girl of sixteen called Pamela Reeves, who went to a film test and then she didn't return. At the beginning, there is no connection between the first murder and the second one. At the end, the police arrests Basil Blake, a man who works in the Lenville film studio, because there were many suspicions about him. In spite of that, Miss Marple shows that the true murderers are Josephine Turner, the cousin of Ruby Keene and who didn't like her cousin, and Mark Gaskell, who was married with Josephine in secret. Miss Marple declared that both Josephine and Mark also killed Pamela Reeves and put his body inside Basil Blake's cottage, so that the police suspected him.

COMMENT OF ROBINSON CRUSOE
I think that the analysis of the famous book 'Robinson Crusoe' has been written very correctly and with very few mistakes. Firstly, he started to describe Robinson Crusoe and his situation and then he summarizes everything that happened to Robinson Crusoe. Speaking personally, I believe that the summary is a little short but, despite that, I have understood everything he wanted to say about the story of Robinson Crusoe.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
Excellent work Alejandro.
MARK: 10/10

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Robinson Crusoe is a seaman of York who, in an expedition by Africa in boat, is captured by some pirates and becomes slave.

He escapes and is aided by a Portuguese navy captain, who heads to Brazil. In the latter place is established for a time but the option arises to sail back to Africa in search of blacks to attend the domestic needs of him and a group of immigrants in Brazil; Is where the ship is shipwrecked and is the only survivor, managing to reach an island that seems to be the only inhabitant. On the island, he discovers that he is not alone in it, since a cannibal indigenous tribe resides there.

. Crusoe immediately considers the Indians as enemies, and helps escape one of his prisoners who was about to be executed. As they have met on a Friday, Crusoe calls him "Friday" and forge a sincere friendship, even though they do not match the language or the culture. Together they decide to help the other prisoners captured by the natives, one of whom is a Spaniard who is also a castaway awaiting the arrival of a ship.

Finally Crusoe proclaims himself king of the island

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
It seems to me a fascinating story, to see how a shipwreck manages to survive on an island and to become friends with those who inhabit it.
Is this task 1 or 2 Alex?
Did you get help from an automatic translator?
MARKS: 6/10

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The body in the library.
This book, written by Agatha Christie, belongs to the mistery and detective genre. Here is its plot:
One morning, a woman's body is found at the Bantry's library. She wears a night costume and some make up. To solve this mysterious situation, Dorothy Bantry calls her friend Miss Marple, who is a frequent detective. Miss Marple should discover who's the murderer and why the body is at Bantry's library.

What I want from a book is that it is difficult to stop reading it, I mean, I'm always looking for a book which really makes me focus on it and I believe that this book will make me feel like that.

MY COMMENTS (Michelle)
I hope you enjoy the book, Miss Marple has always been one of my favourites.
MARK: 10/10

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Write a summary of your book analysis: main characters, setting, conflict, resolution  and mood.
Then comment on one of your classmates' analysis (constructive criticism).

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Write some infomation about your book: title, author, genre, general plot and what you expect from this book.

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