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the skill that I want to develop is communication as English is my third language, which would help with my current and future career, talking in pure English without any other languages during class.

the other that I aim to improve in is problem solving which will be very helpful in my daily future life.

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I would like to improve my vocabulary usage in the next 5 weeks by learning new vocabulary words by reading more articles, my goal is to finish reading at least 5  "How to improve your English" articles per week. I'm trying to achieve my goal to be better in my English speaking and writing, hoping to use the words in the future.

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I want to improve my English skills in this semester with communication 2 English speakers of my friends on internet each weekend within 2 month and do more practice on the first 7 weeks by watching 5 movies and 5 writing tasks , that is to attain A degree on the first assessment.

TEACHER: This is a good start. How many English speakers will you communicate with? How often? What is a 'good' degree?  Do you mean that you will attain an A in the first English assessment or in another assessment?  Can you make this goal more measurable and more specific?

GRAMMAR NOTE: please use "by" + VERBing

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Communication: I want to improve my speaking skills, by talking with my friends in English instead of Arabic especially in the classes within these 5 weeks to get 90% of my English course mark.

Learning: I am seeking to get high marks in my current courses. So, I will specify 2 to 3 hours daily for studying.

TEACHER : This is a good start. How is "high" measurable? Can you be more specific? How long will you do this for?

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I want to develop my communication skills by watching 20 of English movies in 2 weeks. that will help me to learn more words and my listen ability be better. then I will be more confident because I will be able to communicate with many people around the world easier.

TEACHER:
This is a good start.  Can you please write a goal that extends beyond two weeks?  Also, are you interested in general English or English for your area?  Is there a type of documentary that you can watch or interviews that you can watch that will help with your professional English?

GRAMMAR:
Please check your run-ons.  Try this quiz for more information:http://www.bristol.ac.uk/arts/exercises/grammar/grammar_tutorial/page_77.htm

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I want to improve my communication skills  in the next month by talking in English with 3 different people in a 5 minutes with each.

TEACHER: This is a good start.How often do you want to do this in the next month?
I am going to talk with 2 different persons in 10 min with each.

TEACHER: Good, but this doesn't answer the question of how often.  How often?

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I would like to develop my communication skills within a month by talking more in English with my classmates , because I think that would help me in my degree year in the university and make it easier , also to gain more self confidence which is important to get a high GPA .

TEACHER: This looks good.  What do you mean by talking more?  Is this measurable?  I like that you have made it time-bound by adding information about "within a month".  This can still be more specific though.  How will you measure that you have developed your communication skills?  This is a good start, but it is not good enough quite yet.  Keep working on it for next week.

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I would like to improve my speaking skills to gain more self confidence in one year, because I will open my own business and it will be a car mechanic and I think this skill will help me to deal with customers.

TEACHER: A good start. Is this measurable?  Can you break this down into smaller parts so that it can be written about in five weeks?  What kind of business?  Define speaking skills.Define improve.

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I would like to develop my speaking skills in English language in next 5 weeks by doing practice in class with my friends and at home with my family or facing to the mirror for the speaking exam and it is about job interview. that leads to get an excellent marks (A+).

TEACHER: This is a good start.  What do you mean by "doing practice in class and at home"?  Which speaking exam are you talking about?  Is this time-bound? Please add a date if this is time-bound. What do you mena by "good marks"?  Is that measurable?  Perhaps my idea of "rich" is different from yours.  Perhaps my idea of "good" is different too.  Can you please explain so that we can say "yes" or "no"?

GRAMMAR: We say "would like" + TO VERB. Please check your grammar above.

GRAMMAR: We say"at" + home.

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I would like  to improve my speaking  English in the university with my friends by attending English classes with miss Nicole ,instead of using Arabic to improve my speaking skills for the next 4 years  that I will be studying in Bahrain polytechnic, because I want to work in company and I want to be successful in my filed so I have to be more influence in English.

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I would  like  to be professional in using the new technology of factories before 2019 because the factories is developing fastlly and all kinds of jobs need a person who is in love with technology.

TEACHER:
Can you break this down into something that can be achieved short-term as well as long-term?  I think that someone who is professional in using the latest technology in factories would start by studying something.  This person as a student would be really active in class, asking questions, doing extra reading, doing more than what your average person does when they study.  This person would probably be different in many ways from your average first year student.  Tell me about these things.  Don't focus for now on the long-term goal.  Focus on the now and what you can be doing today and for the next five weeks.

I would like to be a good communicator before graduating from Bahrain polytechnic to do will in job meeting and got a good job that lets me be knowledgeable and people like listening to my speeches.

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communication: I want to get  a well educate for my speaking communication skills in real life, by talking and practice and try to find new words  and being more influencial in  speaking,am trying  to reduce using Arabic with my classmates. my education goal  I want to do in Bahrain polytechnic university and I want to achieve my goal in these 4 years that I have in Bahrain polytechnic. why am I doing this?
So I have a nice attitude  and am more influencial, also im trying to use this skill for the place i will work in the futuer beucase the environment  that there is always english.

TEACHER: This is a good start.  Is 'Improve' measureable?  How can I know if you have done this or not this?  How can you define "real life"?  How can you define "talking"?  How can you define "being more infoluencial in speaking"?  How can you define "try"?  None of these are specific enough to be measurable.

for more info on run-ons, see here  :http://www.bristol.ac.uk/arts/exercises/grammar/grammar_tutorial/page_77.htm

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I want to become better in my speaking communication skills  before I complete my 4 years in Bahrain  polytechnic by studying English and trying to get good grades ,so that I am able to communicate properly with people in the future.

TEACHER: Good, is this measureable?

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I want to work on increasing my GPA by studying more every day for the whole semester so that I can graduate within 4 years and work as a mechanical engineer in a big company in Bahrain.

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I would like to improve my speaking during the four years in polytechnic. but before that I will talk in English with my mates. and also I will start reading books in different languages as its an effective way to improve communication skill in general

TEACHER:
Good start, is this measurable?  How can you define "good"?  How can you define "try"?  Can you break down the four years into smaller pieces, including the next month or so?

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I want to be fluent at English in speaking and writing in 5 week timeline at the poly English course :D so i can pass the course :D and i can do that by talking to my English friends and by watching unsubtle movies

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I want to learn 5 new words every week in which it helps me to improve my vocabulary skills within the next one month.---

TEACHER: I like this one.  It's measurable. What kind of words would help you?
How are you going to find these words? How can we measure "learn"?

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I want to develop a working website to sell it to  a company  before I graduate in 2020, for not less than 50 BD .To reach that goal I would need to study hard ,pass all my courses , do all my assignment's  , get an A in my assessment's and not be late for class .I would need to make a website by using HTML codes and design it with Photoshop , and the purpose is to measure how ready I am
TEACHER: How can you define "real"?  What date is "the end of this semester"?  Can you be specific about the coursework that it will help you to pass?  Which assessment?

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i want to increase my mechanical  technology skills so it will help me for my next month project and it helps me for my future.
TEACHER.  This is a good start.  Can we measure "learn"?  Can you please be more specific?  Is there something that can be done now?  Please break the four years into smaller pieces, including the next five weeks or so. Also, can you be more specific about mechanical technology?  What aspects would you like to cover in the next month or so ?

VOCABULARY: check your spelling for the word "years"