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It was interesting that you used chickens within your story, and it was laid out very well.

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I like the way you used the mascots as well as the chickens in the story. I also liked how you adapted features from Christmas Story.

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Your story was conpletely off the wall but funny and very creative, good job

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Wow. Your story was very original, I really like how you made Wendy the snitch it was very hilarious! Good job on your story, it was wonderful

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Very creative story. I like the detail, and description you added to each character.

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Very creative with your restaurant character names. Loved your description with the story.

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I like how your storyline relates to present and past treatments of poultry in the fast food industry.

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I like how you constructed your story. The names of each character are good. Your story was very nice.

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I think you were really creative with your creative writing, and I think the moral was very well communicated.

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The characters name were funny, along with his fighters, and how Wendy’s was the one to tell on them that they were cock fighting.

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I loved your story and how creative you made it.

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Very creative names and descriptions for each character. Very imaginative and funny.

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I liked how you included humor in your story, it makes it more interesting

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The story was really imaginative and it was really funny😂

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A very detailed presentation with good imagery. Good Job !

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I liked how you incorporated the big fast food company mascots in your story.

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How did you think of all of this it was super funny and unique! I can tell you planned this out of this

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I like how creative it is. The names are really good and the story is neat.
10/10 characters

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Your format format for your essay was very detailed and very funny to listen to.

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Your presentation was very entertaining, I like how you established each character. I also liked the point you made about chickens, and how you pointed out that they’re unfairly mistreated.

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I like how you did the story, something different. Your story was funny and had some facts about chickens in there. Good job!

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This shows that you tied the abuse of chickens that we saw in the book and made it into a fictional story about how the food industry abuses chickens. You took time to think of this idea. It was very creative

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I liked your format when you write your stories, they have a lot of underlying jokes to the story, I also like how you connect this comedy-style story to the more serious nature of the chicken treatments

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The amount of creativity is really great, I love the amount of thought put into the simple characters as the Mascots’ chickens. I like the amount of research gone into the story as well, and how it was used to become humorous. Your storytelling also helped sell it as well. Good job!

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I like how you used chicken fights it’s a very funny twist and well done.

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This story is HILARIOUS and very creative. The names you gave the chickens were pretty funny. There was lots of plot twists and different turns. The story line is pretty cool and interesting. Not boring at all! Good job!!!

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I like your creativity and interpretation of the fast food mascots.
I like that you touch on animal abuse and treatment of chickens in the food industry