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Vanessa showed a clear use of the writing process. She has good diction and syntax.

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Very good use of diction within the writing

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Good descriptive language that went beyond the norm.
Had a good personal rationale in beginning.

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You used good diction and syntax.

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Language:
- Voice projects
- Has a great reading voice, and good pronunciation
- Simple and Sweet

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She talks very clearly, the words she used in her story seem very well thought out and proper. Her tone is fine and understandable.

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The language in her short story was really good and she organized the story well and was very creative

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Well thought out story, really bullied on Wendy's

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The language of her short story was very good she had ideas that were very well supported by details and good adjectives.

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It is clear and throughly eplained. Use of proper grammer

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Her voice is very clear and loud enough for many to hear. I liked her story it was very creatively thought out she also seems very confident.

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The language was sophisticated

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She uses a clear voice and uses good language. Her story seems interesting and creative.

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Reads fluently and choice of diction is pretty good. The story seems interesting, something I would read.

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There was very good language and good diction.

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- The language was very consistent and polished ^^
- I liked your story!

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I like how her words are being pronounced and loud for all to hear. Her short story is very creative and entertaining.

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Great figurative Lauange

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Read loudly and clearly and has the confidence to present her project

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Language:

She had good language and diction throughout her presentation.

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Project was creative and well thought through
Was different from previous

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Was creative and like how it was based on something true

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-very entertaining
-shows to be confident!