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I absolutely love your creativity , with the song, it would of been cool if you had the lyrics as substitis so we could better understand what was happening :).

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You’re a lyrical genius!!! lolol.... the only thing I would change is your actual stage presence.

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Praise: The video is very creative, I like how he uses a stereotypical mentality from someone who grew up in time where transgender people weren't as known about as today.

Polish: The only thing I would ask you to change is to speak a bit louder.

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Praise: I thought his idea was really creative and he executed in a good, funny way.
Polish: I would just say for his voice to be a little more clear.

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I like how he has a musical video visualizing how a grandparent would react. Also the lyrics were good.
Something to polish would be talk clear.

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Praise: the lyrics were good
Polish: the flow could be a bit better

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Praise: The background lighting made the room look groovy like the song beat.
Polish: The background music is really nice and groovy

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I really liked the presentation. It was interesting to watch and I liked the beat.

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The video was great and the backdrop you added made it colorful. I think you should’ve been a little louder when singing. The costumes where well made and creative

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Polish: Add someone with you in the video.
Praise: I love the music and they lyrics that he had.

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Praise: Good lyrics! It had a good storyline!
Polish: There could be a better flow tranisioning from the dad to the grandpa

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Praise: great job with your creativity!
Polish: your sound quality could be fixed with a mic

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Praise : The vibes and the background are really cool the lyrics are also really good
Polish : Could flow little better.

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I like that he used rapping to get across his message. It would have been better if you had different people, not only yourself.

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Praise: good speaking and nice song
Polish: more eye contact

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I really like the creative aspect of this project. A rap video is very creative and it was excellently executed. The only polish I would suggest it to slightly raise the volume on your voice to hear your voice better.

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It was really creative! The only thing would be make the voice clearer