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to angelo your spread is amazing because of the design of your spread

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Raisa: I like raisa's color combination and the layout is really cool, I love the picture you put and i love how you made the picture as a background and make it transparent
Mabell: Your layout is really cool and creative and the color combination is cute. I love the picture you put too.

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to khalfan, i like your spread because it's creative and the pictures are great and it's cool

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raya:  i like your spread because you add more color to it. and it is very well constructed. and also it was very cool.

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Angelo : I don't really like the layout because it's a bit messy but you need to add pictures or more decoration
Annabel : I like your layout but the spread need to be more colourful.
Adin : I luv the layout because it's neat but i want it to be more colourful.

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For Rayanda:
I really like your layout it's really nice, I love the flowers, and I also like the color scheme.

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Mabell : I love the color scheme.
Raisa I like the Layout

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Please give Comments...

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dasna dispa

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Bhakti your poetry/book layout is very good because there is good pictures,  Your poetry is good but the grammar needs to be fixed in some sentences

Toby your poster is really unique because you use the element of lines for the frame of your poetry/book layout, Your  poetry is also really good also it really describes the joy drinking a cup of cocoa

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mabell : i really like your spread and i love the color combination

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nonof 's spread is eye chatching due to the bold title, nice margin, and nice layout of the poem. Although in my opinion I think it needs a nicer picture, and it needs a running head/feed aswell. Overall it's a really nice spread nonof.

dana, i'm impressed. First of all, Dana's spread is pleasing to see, love the color, and how you kept the font simple. However, maybe add a picture next time?!. Overall, love your work.

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for mabell

I think its so good
and i like the photo it is suitable for the poem

I think it should add more color

for Raya

I think its good the mix of color and I also like the font and the pictures of the flowers in the sides

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for toby: I think your spread is very basic which is not bad but I think you could've added more eye catching and pleasing factors such as more creative images or illustrations.

for dana: I think yours is very dull which i personally like, and i could see what you are going for but I think you could add more factors and give use to the space more wisely.

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Bhakti: It is a very nice but also a bit basic, as in terms of pictures, for me it's a bit weird and out of place. The color combination is basic but nice, for me blue and white are colors that match, but I think you could also add a few more colors, maybe some black or green. The page layout is simple and good, it's also not too simple either. Size of font is I think maybe a little bit too big for the title, and also adding that you have caps. I think you should make it smaller and no caps, only on the W. The font is good as it's a generic normal font, it's like handwriting and most people can read it. The margin is a bit too small.

Altaf: For what I think about it it's the same as bhakti, but I think your margin has a bit more space, which for me is a good thing so that I can sort of read it much more clearer instead of it's too little it looks like the same words and we get a little bit confused sometimes.

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untuk altaf puisi nya sangat keren dan bagus.

untuk khalfan gambarnya bagus dan puisi nya juga bagus.

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Raisa's spread: It is so eye catching! Very contrasted and attractive! Pictures also relate to the topic of the poem. For the top margin, maybe put it a little down like 2 or 3 cm from the original place.

Both Raoul

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Emirsyah: I think the color combination of the spread is good because he used multilpe colors for the margin and text. I also think that the font size is pretty big enough and it is readable. The image is good and related to the poem however I think he should put the pictures in each poem but since he doesn't have enough space, it is okay to put it in the space that is enough for the picture.
Khalfan: I think the fact that he created the poem himself, I think it is very good because we can learn from it. I think that the left margin is good, however the right margin needs more space. But I also think that the pictures is relatable and understandable. The font is also good and readable in a distance.

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ok

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Bhakti: The margin is not enough space but the colour combination is creative with the colour blue and nice use of images that are shown but I believe that the text should have a darker colour to be easier to read and the typography is ok and the size of the spread is perfect I would say

Raoul: The margin is good which has a lot of space and the use of the colour black and blue is also good but I believe that the text should be a little bit bigger and the title shouldn't have any quotation marks but the entire spread is very artsy and attractive

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please pick two spread designs and give feedbacks for those designs. give feed back by using 3 praise and 1 improvement (things need to be improved)
these are things you need to comment:
- margin
-running heads and feeds
- page layout
-typography (font)
-size of font and pictures
-image
-color combination
please cek your wording and use positive words. avoid using don't

cheers,
reri soewardi