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When the class were walking the path.Polly suddenly stopped and took photos of the beautiful view and dandelions while her classmates and Ms Chan were leaving without her.

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The end ,teacher realized Polly was gone ,and she called the class teacher watch the 5A classmates .The teacher go to find Polly and then Polly has found by the class teacher and the teacher take Polly to the picnic site.

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When polly is search for Miss Lau and her classmates then she saw them then they went to had a barbecue.

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Last Friday is a great day .Polly,Miss Lau and her classmates went to Sai Kung Country Park.They felt excited,then teacher asked :” Do you guys know How long does it take to travel from here to Sai Kung Country Park ?, Polly and her classmates answer :It’s a long way. It’s 4 kilometres.Miss Lau said : yes very good 👍 Let’s go now !

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Last Friday, my teacher Miss Fong and classmate went to Sai Kung country park for a school picnic. We were travelling by tour bus and felt very excited. A few moment later, We were arrived the entrance. My teacher said, How far is it from here to the picnic site? Polly said, Around 1.5 km and 30 minutes. Miss Fong took a map and show the location in the picnic site. All student were very happy.

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On the way to the picnic site,Miss Wong said,“Please follow at me ,don’t get lost.”when they walked Polly saw beautiful flowers and fantastic views. She stopped to take photos,she said,“Wow!The scenery here is so beautiful.”When she get up,the teacher and classmates left,she was get lost.

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At the end of the story,Polly was lucky because she meet a kind man to helped her.The kind man helped her to call her teacher or her classmates.

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After taking the photos,Polly discovere she got lost. It had two roads ,Polly didn’t know which way does she wanted to choose so she felt very scared and didn’t know how to do.

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When the teacher and the classmates were going to the picnic site,Polly suddenly shopped and squat down to take photos with the fantastic view.

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Polly see some fantastic views so she take the camera to take so beautiful photos.But she can’t see her teacher and classmates are gone.

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Last Friday ，Miss Lau , Polly and 5A classmates were going on a school trip . The weather is sunny，Miss Lau asked ` Do you guys know where we are ?‘ 5A classmates answered ` We are at Sai Kung Country Park .’ Miss Lau said `Yes ，correct ， from here to the picnic site is 10 minutes and 2 kilometers.’5A classmates after hearing what Miss Lau said and they were so excited to go to the picnic site .

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The teacher and his friends know Polly was missing. So they found and found.

But they couldn't found Polly .So they went back home . Polly was scary . She found a puppet telephone and called the police. Finally the police came . They took Polly to her home.

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Polly took out a map and went to the visitor center for help. The teacher noticed that Polly was missing. The teacher walked back to find Polly. They went to the visitor center and they found her.

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In the end. I took the lPhone called the 999

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In the end. I took the lPhone called the 999

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Last Friday,is school trip.We went to Sai king Country Park.After arriving at the destination, miss Lau ask How far is it from school to the Sai Kung Country Park?Polly said It’s a long way.It’s 5kilometres.

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When they were walking to the barbecue site,Polly stopped and sit down and use his camera to take photos of the flower. The teacher and student were keep walking! When Polly was staying up to go the barbecue site,he was lost.

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Last Friday,classmates and I want to school trip,want school by school bus from there to Sai Kung Country Park.I was very excited  because had barbecue.After arrival，teacher asked we where was there?We sad there was Sai Kung Country Party.After teacher sad your must followed me.

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One day,Polly and her classmates go to Sai Kung Country Park .

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Last Friday,Polly and her classmate with her teacher Miss Lau went to Sai Kung country Park.Miss Lau said’You should follow me,do you understand?’’I am understand!’said the classmate.

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Last Friday was P5 school trip.They were went to the Sai Kung Country Park.While the teacher saying how long does it take from there to the picnic site,I was taking photos so I don’t know the teacher said what.

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In Friday, the teacher with classmates went to hiking,I want to go to park to play football and badminton with my best friends.

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Last Friday,Polly travelled to Sai Kung Country Park with her classmates and teacher.The teacher told them that ‘ Don’t just play when you leave to avoid getting lost.Polly and her classmates quickly said ok.

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Last Friday,Polly travelled to Sai Kung Country Park with her classmates and teacher.The teacher told them that ‘ Don’t just play when you leave to avoid getting lost.Polly and her classmates quickly said ok.

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Time flied while Polly was taking the perfect photos of the views. When she realised that it was time to go, her teacher and classmates were all gone. She couldn't find them. She rushed up the hill immediately, wishing to catch up with them. However, she got lost. She didn't know which direction she should go when she reached the fork in the road. She couldn't find the correct way even after reading the map. She was scared and nervous.

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When Polly turned around, she could not find her teacher and classmates. She didn't know what to do. She was scared.

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Last Friday, Miss Lee and 5A classmate were go to the Sai kung Country Park had a pichic. Polly ask Miss Lee how far and how long frow here to the picnic site? Miss lee answered  IIt's not far It's I kilometres and takes 55 minutes

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After the filming, Polly found that she was separated from the teacher. Polly was afraid and didn't know which way to go.

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The frightened Polly looked around and finally saw the teacher. The teacher also saw Polly.

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in the end， the teacher found that Polly was missing when he arrived at the destination.Then the teacher took the students back to find Polly.When they found  Polly, she
Started crying  where she was .The teacher comforted him and  told him to tell the teacher first when he wanted to take pictures next time.

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On the wayto the park，polly told her teacher that she was going to stop and take pictures of the beautiful flowers. She was lost and polly felt very nervous and panicked.

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Polly was so luckily because her teacher and her classmates were at the Sai Kung Country Park picnic site at that time , Her teacher and her classmate was so worried about Polly ,luckily a man help Polly to look for her teacher and her classmates .Polly never get lost because you will never see your family again and you will crying .Her teacher and her classmates were so relieved that has already found Polly at the picnic site and her teacher thanked to the man for helping Polly to found her teacher and her classmates.Polly,her teacher,a man and her classmates were so happy 😄😄😄

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He saw a very beautiful flower, and then he stopped and took a photo, only to find out that he couldn't see his class when he finished taking the photo, and he realized at this time that he had lost it!!

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He saw two paths, he didn't know which way to go, and he was a little unhappy inside

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During the tour, Polly was attracted by the stunning and gleaming flowers aside the road. Then, she leaved the queue of her group and took out her camera to record the flowers. Since she was too obsessed with such flowers, she did not realize she was already lost from her team.

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After arriving at Sai Kung Country Park, the teacher introduced the plants as he walked. Polly was also taking photos and recording some beautiful plants, but he didn’t know that his classmates and the teacher had gone far away, but he obviously didn’t know yet.

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But l couldn't find the teacher ,so l just squatted there to see it the teacher would come back to find me.

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Then Polly saw some beautiful flowers so she took a camara on her bag.Polly took some beautiful photos.

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polly found a beautiful little flouer on the road， so he took a camera and planned to take a picture of it

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last friday ，we took a bus to sai kung country park，so my classmates and polly were very excited.the teacher told us that the destination was about 1 km away and it took about 9 minutes to walk

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In the afternoon, Polly finished filming and found that the class had left, so she was in a hurry to look for it.

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Eventually Polly met a kind person who told her where the picnic was and she returned to the group.

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Polly was talking the  flowers because the flower were beautiful，but teacher and classmates went to the picnic site.

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Finally,Polly walked to the left road and saw a tourist here.She immediately ran to ask,’Have you seen a large group of people？‘The tourists said they saw it,and then Polly saw her classmates

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Last Friday , Polly and her teacher and her classmate went to a Sai Kung Country Park to had a nice and relaxing picnic .Polly teacher asking , how long does it take from here to the picnic site ?Polly said “It takes 1 kilometres to get to the picnic site.We needed to walk on foot.Polly know it’s a long way to get to the picnic site on foot but it is good for exercise.They were so excited and happy😄.

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Finally, she decided to stay at the origin and she wouldn't make any decisions about the road .She knew that her teacher would come back to find her. Ten minutes later, she saw her teacher come back and she said, ''l am here, Miss Lee, ''and ran to her. She told Miss Lee that she would never leave alone.

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On the way, Polly saw a beautiful flower, picked up his camera and took a picture.On the way, Polly saw a beautiful flower, picked up his camera and took a picture.

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Polly and his teacher went on a picnic last Friday.Polly asked Polly how far the teacher is from the picnic site.The teacher said there was still 1.5 km left.Polly and his teacher went on a picnic last Friday.Polly asked Polly how far the teacher is from the picnic site.The teacher said there was still 1.5 km left.

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Last Sunday,it was school hiking day , we are so excited.￼ finally,￼ We are￼ arrive to sai kung ￼ Country Park. Suddenly ￼ The teacher said￼; Follow teachers and don’t run lost￼￼ !

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Last Sunday,it was school hiking day , we are so excited.￼ finally,￼ We are￼ arrive to sai kung ￼ Country Park. Suddenly ￼ The teacher said￼; Follow teachers and don’t run lost￼￼ !

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I was so scared, I said help me who can help me. I’m lost get lost in the hill teacher help me please. my Teacher and classmate was find me in the end

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I was so scared, I said help me who can help me. I’m lost get lost in the hill teacher help me please. my Teacher and classmate was find me in the end

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On the bus, Polly and his classmates were looking forward to it. Polly asked: How long does it take to get to Sai Kung Country Park from us? I can not wait any more! His classmates said it would take about 45 minutes. Polly said it would take so long. I couldn't wait.

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Poly was scared , because she was get lost and also she didn't
Follow teacher. She look scared and devours

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Polly stopped to take a picture because he saw a beautiful flower, but the class and the teacher didn't notice that he stopped so they walked away, and Polly couldn't see them after he finished taking pictures

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Polly stopped to take a picture because he saw a beautiful flower, but the class and the teacher didn't notice that he stopped so they walked away, and Polly couldn't see them after he finished taking pictures

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In Sunday, the teacher with classmates went to hiking,I want to go to park play basketball and football with my friends.

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Polly was taking photos for the flowers because they were so beautiful.The teacher and classmates were going to the picnic site . Polly enjoyed the best view of Sai Kung Country Park.

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Suddenly,Polly was so nervous and scared,because she didn’t listen to her teacher and didn’t stay together with her classmates and her teacher. she was afraid that she will get lost and would someone took her to somewhere else or someone will killed her.Polly was so cry,nervous and scared .

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No，not found.Yes，she is lost.She went to find her teachers and classmates.she feels scared.

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She rushed to the visitor centre at once.She entered the visitor centre and asked the stuff for help, ‘Excuse me?’ She said to the stuff.The stuff replied politely,’What may I help you?’Polly answered,’ I was taking photons when my teacher and classmate didn’t notice and walked away.Therefore,I rushed to here.’ The stuff asked,’Do you remember where is their destination?I can lend you there.’Polly told the stuff that her teacher and classmates went to the picnic site.The stuff brought her to the picnic site and they met her teacher.Polly promised that she won’t do it again.

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The teacher was leading the class to another destination when Ben stopped by the bushes. He loves nature and kept taking photos of the view around us. 'Look at this colourful flower! Isn't it fantastic?' He asked.

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Last friday, Polly went on a picnic with her teacher and classmates. Teacher asked 'There was Sai Kung Country Park. Are you ready to go to the country park?' 'Yes, I am ready to go to the country park!' classmates respond because they excited to go to the country park.

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On the way to the picnic site.Polly got distracted by the beautiful flowers she saw.She quickly took out her camera and kept taking photos but the teacher and her classmates did not realise that Polly was not in the group so they kept walking.

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She calm down. She decided to go find the park ranger. On the way, she met the teacher and classmates who was looking for her. She understood that she had to follow the teacher and not act without permission.

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Last Friday,Polly went on a picnic site with her teacher Miss.Lee and classmates."Can you follow me,every student?We will go to picnic site" Miss.Lee said."Yes,we can!"Polly and classmates answered.Every student were excited.

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However, Polly realised that the teacher and classmates were left already. Polly felt very scared and fluster. She wanted to find the classmates and teacher but she was getting lost.

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Last Friday,Polly went on a picnic with her teacher and classmates.After took a bus , teacher asked they a question,‘How long does it take to travel from here to the picnic site?Did anyone know that?’,Polly and her classmates answered,‘It takes five minutes.‘When classmates answered the question,Polly was taking photos.They were excited about it.

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Last Friday, Polly went for a picnic with his teachers and classmates. After arriving, Miss Yan said, "You must follow me during the visit, otherwise you will get lost." I was very excited and couldn't wait to ask Miss Yan, "How long does it take to from here to picnic site＂ "It take 30 minutes " Miss Yan answered.

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Polly went on a picnic with her teacher and classmates last Friday. We went to Sai Kung Country Park. After arriving, Miss Chan ask ed, ＇You all should follow me, untersand? ＇Polly felt excited so she answered nonchalantly, ＇ Undersand! ＇Then the classmate asked, ＇Where wil we go? ＇The teacher replied, ＇We will go picnic site. It is 1 kilometres.It takes fifteen minutes. ＇Next, they walked over picnic site.

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Polly went on a picnic with her teacher and classmates last Friday. We went to Sai Kung Country Park. After arriving, Miss Chan ask ed, ＇You all should follow me, untersand? ＇Polly felt excited so she answered nonchalantly, ＇ Undersand! ＇Then the classmate asked, ＇Where wil we go? ＇The teacher replied, ＇We will go picnic site. It is 1 kilometres.It takes fifteen minutes. ＇Next, they walked over picnic site.

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After a while,Polly saw some fantastic views. She took photos with the camera. Polly was taking photos when the teacher and classmates kept walking.

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Last Friday,Polly went to school picnic with her teacher and classmates,they were travelling by school bus to Sai Kung Country Park.Polly asked “How long does it take to travel from here to the picnic site?” “It’s takes 15 minutes.”Miss Chen answered.

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After Polly took the photo ,she realised that nobody there. She shouted ‘Oh no! I got lost.’ She felt scared and didn’t know what to do because she didn’t know which road is correct.

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Last friday,polly with her classmate, went to the famous park Sai Kung Country. On the way, peter asked’ How long does it take from Sai Kuny Country park to the picnic site’ teacher reply’ It’s take 40 minutes’ the bus arrived at Sai Kung Country, the classmate were excited ,Joe looked at the beautiful view and took picture.

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Last friday,polly with her classmate, went to the famous park Sai Kung Country. On the way, peter asked’ How long does it take from Sai Kuny Country park to the picnic site’ teacher reply’ It’s take 40 minutes’ the bus arrived at Sai Kung Country, the classmate were excited ,Joe looked at the beautiful view and took picture.

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Wang Hongzheng

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Polly stopped and used the camera to took some photos to the flower because it is so beautiful. The teacher and classmate didn’t know Polly is stopped so they went out.

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Last Friday,polly went to Sai Kung Country park with her classmates and teachers 30 minutes later, she was arrived at Sai Kung Country park.Polly was taking photos when teacher asked “How long does it take to picnic site?” Children answered “It’s about 15 minutes.”Polly felt excited.

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＂Now we are going to the barbecue site. ＂teacher said . But Polly   was taking photos. When miss Lee went. Polly said  ＂there is a fantastic views ! Let's me use the camera take it . ＂she felt excited because she loves flowers.

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Polly took out her camera and took a lot of photos because the flowers were fantastic. Miss Lee and the classmates walk far away already. Miss Lee told Polly to walk faster but she didn’t hear.

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At last,Polly was carried. Suddenly she saw her teacher and classmates, she was surprised, she said ' I will never leave the group again.

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Polly was taking photos when she forgot follow teacher and classmates.The flowers are fantastic.

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Last Friday,Polly went on a picnic with her teacher and classmates. "Miss Chan,how far is it  from here to picnic site?”Polly asked. "It is not far.It's one and a half kilometres.”Miss Chan answered.

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Suddenly Polly realized that the view is fantastic. Polly exclaimed, ' Oh ,the flower is beautiful. The flower is red, as if wearing  a red dress. I want to take photos of it. ＇Then she took out her camera and took pictures．

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Polly did not follow the teacher and her classmates because she want to take a photo of a beautiful flower.She use her camera to took photo of the beautiful views.

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In the end,Polly saw a man was walking on the hiking trail and she went to ask for help.The kind man help Polly to find the teacher and classmates.Teacher thanked the kind man and said'Polly!You are so naughty that you did't follow us!Don't do this again!”Polly said sorry to the teacher and thanked the kind man again.

I am the second one to post the paragraph here😏😎😜

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Polly realised that she was lost!She was worried and wanted to find a people for help but she did not find it.

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They were walking and chatting,suddenly,Polly stopped.Sheset down and take her camera,after she take the photos,her teacher and classmates went away,They didn’t realised she was taking photos.

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Last Friday, Polly went on a picnic with her teacher and classmates. They went to the Sai Sung Country Park. Miss Chan was our teacher, she said, ‘ We would go to the picnic site, did everyone have any questions?’ The student asked,`How long does it take to travel from here to the picnic side?’`It takes 30 minutes.’ Miss Chan answered.

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Miss Ng and her classmates have already gone to the picnic site.Although Polly is the one clever in her class, she didn’t know how to find them.Suddenly,Polly found something,Oh! Aren’t they are my teacher and classmates footprints?
Polly shocked.

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In the end, she realized she went to a wrong Tarth. She saw a man who are hiking, she raced to him and ask him how to go to the picnic side. The man gave polly a map nicely. Finally, she found her classmates and Miss yu.she realized that she was wrong and she promised it won’t be like this again !

I was a first one write this paragraph!!!🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

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On their way to the picnic site,Polly saw some tulips which had beautiful petals. She took her own camera and took some photos.

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After taking the photos,Polly was going to leave,but she realized that she got lost and her teacher and classmates are gone!Polly was scared because she don’t know how to get to the school and she was scared because she don’t know how to find them. ‘Which path should I walk?’She asked to herself.

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Last Friday, Miss Lee and 5A classmate were go to the Sai kung Country Park had a pichic. Polly ask Miss Lee how far and how long frow here to the picnic site? Miss lee answered  IIt's not far It's I kilometres and takes 30 minutes

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Last Friday, school was host a school trip, they were go by tour bus to the Sai Kung Country Park, they were happy. After getting there, teacher, Miss Lee said ＇classmates they first follow me, them you can move around freely ＇but Polly was did not listen。

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In the bus,polly and her classmates were very excited.polly
ask:How long does it take to travel from here to Sai Kung country park ? Her classmate said :It takes 45 minutes.

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On their way to the park,she didn’t follow teacher and took photos.She got lost and felt scared.She needed to think some ideas ,but she just stay here until teacher found her.

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Polly and her classmates went to Sai Kung Country Park for a school picnic last Friday. Miss Wong was their class teacher.

She said, 'We will go to the picnic site on foot. How far is it from here to the picnic site?'

Polly said, 'It is 1 kilometre.'

She smiled, 'Yes, Polly. How long does it take to get to the picnic site?'

Kim said, 'It is 15 minutes.'

Miss Wong showed them the direction to the picnic site. Then they set off our journey. All students were very excited.

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Write an ending by adding a new ...
- character
- emotion
- lesson learnt
- setting (when / where)

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These questions may help you:

-Did Polly find her teacher and classmates?

-Did Polly get lost?

-What did Polly do?

-How did Polly feel?

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These questions may help you:

-What did Polly do? Why?

-What did the teacher and classmates do?

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These questions may help you:

- You are Polly. Where were you and your classmates?

-Where did the teacher want to go?

- What did the teacher ask?

- What did the classmates say?

- How did you feel?