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It was a sunny day at the beach.

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People were swimming in the sea and playing volleyball on the sand.

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I was lying on my towel, reading a book.

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While I was reading, my family was building a sandcastle nearby.

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Then, dark clouds appeared and it started raining. My family and I got wet.

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It was a cold day at the mountain

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it was a sunny day in neiva

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The day was Windy and Sunny

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It was a sunny day in Brazil and Peru

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I was on a vacation in Andorra whit my Family, the day was very sunny

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It was a hard day beacause the weather was very hot

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People were skiing on ice and making snowmans

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The people were walking

Correction: The people were walking ...... give me me more info??

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People were eating and watching a soccergame : Croacia vs Marruecos

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People were eating and watching a soccergame the Croacia vs Marruecos

Correction : People were eating and watching a soccergame: the Croacia vs Marruecos

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I was drinking coffee in my house because of the wheater

Correction: I was drinking coffee in my house (because of) for the wheater

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I was take fotos

Correction: I was take (taking) fotos (photos)

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While my family was walking, I visited the monuments

Correction: while my family was walking, I was visiting the monuments.

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Nothing

Correction: Come on Juli! give me more info! :)

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It was a snowy day in Canadá

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While I was drinking coffee,my dog was eating his food and my family were watching a movie

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Then, we turned off the lights and went to sleep because it was already getting dark.

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people were studying

Correction: people were studying ....? where? give me more info...

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Everyone was skiing, without jackets

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People were playing in the snow and buying winter clothes

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While the weather was hot The people in the gym were very sweaty

Correction: While the weather was hot The people in the gym were very sweaty ....? doing what?

ex. ... because they were working out / exercising so hard??

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I was doing excercice before at the english class

Correction: I was doing excercice before at the E nglish class

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I was walking towards an ingenous tribe

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While i was listening music i recive a fonecall

Correction: While I was listening to music, I recive d a fonecall phonecall

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I was went in indian trabe

Correction: I was went in indian trabe (I was walking? towards an indigenous tribe?)

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Then i go out to the gym from my house

Correction: Then I go (went) out to (of) the gym from (to) my house

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I was taking a class about how to ski

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While I was playing with the kids of the indigenous tribe

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While I was playin kids of the city vs kids indian tribe

Correction: While I was playin g kids of the city vs kids indian tribe .... what happened after?

ex: while I was playing with the kids of the indigenous tribe, .......?

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In soccer game

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I was writting a science fiction Book in my room, it was about vampires and zombies.

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Then I went many places in Leticia

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while I was learning about how to ski, my son was skiing because he learned how to do it faster than me

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While I was writting the science fiction book in my room, my family was eating sushi in the living room.

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Then I went in many places in Leticia

Correction: Then I went (to visit?) in many places in Leticia

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then my son threw himself from the mountain and I could not

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It was a sunny day in Cartagena

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My family was laughing and swimming in the pool

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I was taking care of my son

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While i was taking care of my son, my family was drinking some shots

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Then, we took a boat to comeback to the hotel

Correction: Then, we took a boat to come (go) back to the hotel

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The day was hot in liverpool

Comment: Maybe you can write: "It was a hot day in Liverpool", because you are going to begin a story...?

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It was a cold day in the US

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The people were buying in the supermarket

Correction: The people were buying ... buying what? in the supermarket

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the people were playing soccer

Correction: T he people were playing soccer.... where?

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I was studying math

Comment: ...where?

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I was boughting a Coffe

Correction: I was boughting (buying) a Coffe

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While i played soccer, my dad was working

Correction: While I was played (playing) soccer, my dad was working .... where?

Comment: Remember that in the previous question you said that you were studying mathematics, so you could start this sentence by saying: "While I was studying maths......"

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While I was buying the coffe the other people was eating in the cafetery

Correction: While I was buying the coffe the other people was eating in the cafetery (Café? Cafeteria?, Coffee Shop?)

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I drank the Coffe and I felt good

Correction: Then, I drank the Coffe and I felt good

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then, i went the house of my friend for played videogames

Correction: T hen, I went (to) the house of my friend for to play ed videogames

Comment: Remember you said you were in Liverpool...?

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Then, I went to the living room to eat sushi with them

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It was a rather sunny day in Cartagena

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the people were swimming in the sea

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while I was diving , My mom told me to go back to the beach because I was getting too far away.

Comment: to go back to the sand

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I was diving in the sea

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then I came back and my mom gave me soda to drink

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It was a cold day at the farm.

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The people were cooking meat and telling jokes.

Comment: Maybe you could say: The people were having a BBQ and telling jokes?

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I was making a sauce for the meat.

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While I was (marinading) the meat, my friends was playing poker.

Correction: ...marinating the meat, my friends were playing poker.

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Then, the meat was ready and we started eating. My friends and I enjoyed the rest of the day.