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Sample: Ms Cai and Mrs Cain's PEDAL paragraph

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Sample: Ms Cai and Mrs Cain's PEDAL paragraph

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POINT : I enjoyed reading the poem as it feels calm and nice when I read it. The poem sounds so carefree too!
EVIDENCE + DEVICE + ANALYSIS : “the sun barely risen, looks down with a smile” is a personification of the sun as it describes it with human attributes. This personification feels very heartwarming as the sun is smiling at me. It emphasises that the day is good as the sun is smiling at me.
LINK : hence, I enjoy this peom very much as it feels very heartwarming. The peom is also very calm.

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Point: Yes, we enjoy reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh. The poem allows me to understand a home that is comfortable and lovely.
Evidence: In the poem, the author said that “home is my best friend”.
Device: The author uses personification to describe his home as his best friend.
Analysis: The use of personification tells me that his home was very fun and vibrant like a best friend. The home was always there for the author, listening and accompanying him.
Link: Therefore, the use of personification helps me have a vivid experience of how his home is like, filled with love and comfort.

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P:I enjoyed reading Childhood Home by Tera Kunesh as the poem is very relatable to us as we are mere children and i think that when we grow older and somehow stumble on this very poem, it will end up being a very nostalgic visit, at least for in my humble opinion.
E: “Morning is love, when mom bids me arise” This statement relates to the teenage lives of many students and children all over the world and makes the reader reminiscise about
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L:Not only this, but we also think that the poem is immensely heartwarming and wholesome, at parts even making the reader feel as though they are a child again. Overall, I enjoy “Childhood Home” very much a, not only is the poem bitter-sweet(bitter because of nostalgia being a thing of the past, and sweet as it is a part of us and of our childhood innocence.), it is also relatable as we are still kids.

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Point: I enjoyed reading Childhood home as it reminds me of my carefree days when I was young.
Evidence: From the poem, the sun “looks down with a smile”
Device:the quote uses personification of the sun.
Analysis:to emphasise how there is a lot of love and warmth in the house.
Link: hence the narrator’s home is comforting and there is a sense of belonging and security in the home

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We enjoy reading the poem because it’s very nostalgic and relatable to us, because we are children too. The poem is very heartwarming. For example, the sentence “morning is love” and the sentence “the sun barely risen looks down with a smile” is very bittersweet. Tara Kunesh used rhyme, metaphor and personification to enhance the poem and to make it more understandable. “Morning is love” means Tara Kunesh was happy in the morning and had a great breakfast. In a nutshell, I enjoyed reading the poem very much and it was wonderful to us.

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Point: I enjoyed the excerpt, as it reminds me of my own adolescence and the residential estate that I resided in. The metaphors, rhyming words and personification makes the poem not only very pleasing to read to, but also more intricate as there are hidden and subtle details awaiting to be found.

Link: This excerpt reminds me of my home.

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Point:We enjoyed reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh because we can feel the bittersweet memory of the author’s childhood home and it makes us think of our own childhood memories.
E,D and A: This is specially shown through the metaphor that describes how clearly and fondly he remembers his childhood home with “My room is a picture that stays in my head” with some descriptions of how her childhood room was laid out.

Link:Therefore,we enjoyed that poem because it is something we can very closely relate to

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Point:from this poem I can tell that she had a pleasant time in her childhood home.
Evidence+device+analysis :this is highlighted by the personification my home is my best friend ,my partner,my all.this personification depicts the idea that she spent a lot of time at the home worth cherishing
Link:thus her time spent in her childhood home was pleasant and she cherished her time there

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We enjoyed reading the poem because it reminds us of our mornings when we were younger as our mothers will cook us breakfast during primary school.
“Morning is love, my mom bids me arise, eggs shaped like hearts, a breakfast surprise.” The metaphor “morning is love” reminds me of when our mothers would wake us up early and cook a delicious breakfast for us out of love.
Thus, the use of metaphors reminds me of our mothers love in the morning.

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Allison and Zhi Han’s PEDAL paragraph >:)

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Allison and Zhi Han’s PEDAL paragraph >:)

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I enjoyed reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh as I found it very meaningful because it describes how home has is a nice place to look forward to and that home is a place we all remember from young to old.  From the poem, the writer describes the room as “My room is a picture which stays in my head”. This is a metaphor. This evidence shows how the writer’s childhood home may not exist anymore but is still memorable. It shows that despite being grown up, the room and house where she grew up in will never be forgotten. The writer describes home as “Home is my best friend, my partner, my all”.  This is a personification. The evidence shows that the writer prefers staying at home to going out as she feels that home is a very safe and warm place. It also shows how home is very close to the writer’s heart. Hence, I like the poem as it shows how despite being an adult, childhood memories will not be forgotten, even if it is just a simple house.

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Megan and Xin Ling’s PEDAL Paragraph :)) 😎

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Megan and Xin Ling’s PEDAL Paragraph :)) 😎

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Yes we enjoyed reading the poem ‘Childhood Home’ by Tara Kunesh, as it shows us how much the author treasures her childhood home. This is shown through the lines ‘My room is a picture which stays in my head’ and ‘Home is my best friend, my partner, my all’ .  The author used personification and rhymes in the poem to tell and express how much she treasures her childhood home. Therefore, we can tell how much the author loves and treasures her childhood home. This is also why we like this poem.

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Yeow Hui Qi and Desiree Yap PEDAL PARAGRAPH

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Yeow Hui Qi and Desiree Yap PEDAL PARAGRAPH

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Yes, we enjoyed reading childhood home because it reminds us of the days where there was no homework to do and we were very relaxed and free.

The part “looks down with a smile” describes the Sun hanging in the sky, shining brightly down on everyone to brighten their days. In this piece of evidence, the writer used personification to emphasise the Sun shining down, brightening everyone’s day.

Therefore, the use of this personification allows us to understand that the Sun can brighten everyone’s day, something that reminds us of the old days that we have experienced in the past, which were good times.

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Point(P):I enjoyed reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh.I enjoyed reading it because I resonate with the poem,as I similarly have many fond memories in my childhood home.
Evidence(E):From the poem,the writer’s childhood home experiences is described as “a picture which stays in my head”.
Device (D)In this piece of evidence,the writer uses personification
Analysis(A)to emphasise that her childhood home is very memorable and pleasant to her,to the point that she can remember the look and details of her room,such as the books in a corner and a cat on the bed,almost like looking at a picture,despite the long time and distance between her childhood room and her current room.
Link(L):Therefore,the use of this personification allows me to understand the personal connection between the writer and her room,which is quite interesting,as I have not experienced this before.

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Point: I enjoyed reading the poem because the literary devices used were interesting and helped me imagine the poet’s memories of his childhood home.

E+D+A: From the poem, the poet’s childhood home was described with a personification, “home is my best friend, my partner, my all”. This tells me that the poet treasured his childhood home and is very attached to it.

Link: Therefore, the use of the personification helped me visualise the poet’s childhood home better while making the poem more interesting for me to read too.

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We enjoy reading Childhood Home by Tara Kunesh as we are able to feel the sense of warmth and comfort of the writer’s home just by reading the poem. From the poem, the writer’s home is described as “Home is my best friend, my partner, my all.” In this piece of evidence, the writer uses metaphor to emphasise on how the writer has close relationships to the house and spend much time with the house, making good memories in the house. Therefore, we enjoy reading the poem as the use of this metaphor allows us to understand how close the writer is his or her home.

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Point: Yes, I enjoyed reading the poem as I allowed me to understand what a grown up thinks about their childhood home.
Evidence: From this poem, the childhood room is described as “My room is a picture which stays in my head”
Device: In this evidence, the writer uses metaphor
Analysis: to emphasise the fact that the writer will always remember her childhood room and that she will miss it a lot.
Link: Hence, the use of the metaphor allows me to understand the feeling of missing our own childhood home.

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Yes, we enjoyed reading the poem because it is relatable and brings back many memories of our childhood. I love my mom (eugene). From the poem, the distance and time was described as “have claimed it from me”. In this piece of evidence, the writer used personification to emphasise how after years and living far from the writer’s childhood home, these memories still stay in the writer. Hence, the use of this personification allows me to understand even after time, the memories of the writer’s childhood home would never leave her.

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We enjoyed reading Childhood Home because it was really nice and relates to a child’s idea of a home. It sounded really carefree and calm to us. From the poem, the morning was. described as “Morning is love, when mom bids me arise”.
In this piece of evidence, the writer used metaphors. It shows that every morning is a joyful one to a child. Therefore, the use of the metaphor emphasised the feeling of the child which brings back a lot of memories of us when we were young—a carefree one.