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+ Outstanding presentation with such an interesting choice for a favorite place! Loved that you included some personal photos (a great strategy to interest and build relationship with the audience). Interesting facts/stories about landmarks (ex. sky and earth, only opened once, etc) to keep the audience's attention. Overall excellent structure and organization--info slide that was placed at the end after you made the audience interested in the place.

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+ Thank you for looking so professional! Gave lots of great options to the audience including activities, transport, and landmarks.
- Few grammar errors with (missing "to be" verb, and modals for possibility).

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+ Great choice of a favorite place. Good pronunciation. Excellent content including directions, climate, and things to do and see.
- Work on vowel sounds (long ee sounds)

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+ Good content. Liked that you chose one specific beach. For a 3-4 minute presentation, it is better to be specific because there is too much to talk about in a whole city in 4 minutes.
- Not really a slide presentation, more of a pamphlet or blog post. Needs longer pauses between sentences. Pronunciation errors (impressive, unique, breathe, beaches, ancient, etc)

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+ Slides did not have many words. Prompted Ms. Sa to move to the next slide. Interesting photos (I really want to do the bowl boat!)
- Plural nouns (dish should be dishes). Quite difficult to understand sometimes due to pronunciation. Recommend apps such as Google Translate or Dictionary.com where you can listen to how the words should be pronounced.

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+ Good variety of content. Good time-keeping.
- No slide presentation. Needs to better position camera so the audience isn't looking up your nose. Pronunciation errors (ex. immerse, cheap). Too much reading.

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+ Thoughtful introduction. Good transitions and overall great job editing your grammar. Nice use of adjectives.
- Needs to look up sometimes at the audience. Forgot to prompt Ms. Sa so she would know when to change slides.

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+ Very aware of pronunciation and did a lot of self-correction. Nice mention of "experts" such as Bazaar, CNN, Anthony Bourdain which adds credibility to own opinion.
- Over time. Too much reading sometimes meant you forgot to prompt Ms. Sa to the next slide. "My love place" on the title slide is strange and is a place you take your lovers. Should be "My favorite place."

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+ Lovely accent and nice choice of photos.
- Some mistakes with plural nouns ('place' should be 'places). Word stress errors such as mounTAIN should be MOUNtain. On www.dictionary.com, you can see where the word should be stressed in bold.

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+ Really charming accent! Kept to the time limit very well. Nice use of adjectives (reknowned bridges).
- Could work on vowel sounds (Beaches should be with a long "ee" sound, not a short "i"). Word stress errors (deLIcacies should be DElicacies and caBLE car should be CAble car).

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**I'm so sorry but I think I forgot to press the record button because it did not record your presentation.
+ High level English use where you showed flexibility in grammar tense from past imperfect to present, to future. Good information on prices and opening hours--only put relevant writing on slides. Offered advice.
- Could add photos to "where to visit" slide.

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+ Nice video in the beginning to make the presentation more engaging. Included really useful information about hours and prices. Liked how you offered different options for transportation.
- Slightly over the maximum time which could have been avoided with a little bit of organization and direction for Ms. Sa ("Go to the next slide, please." Can you return to the previous slide.") Pronunciation issues with "ch" sounds.

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+ Appreciated your use of "I" to stress that these are your opinions about your favorite place. Makes it more personal.
- No slide show. Could slow down to better enunciate sounds. Needs longer pauses between sentences (after period/full stop). Sentences blur into each other.

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+ Loved that you made a full day itinerary! What a great idea and what a full day of visiting places, eating, and shopping. Nice use of adjectives. Perfect timing, just a little over 4 minutes.
- Good pronunciation but you're now ready to move to intonation patterns and word stress to be an even clearer English speaker.

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+ Your content would make a good travel guide! It included interesting content about the economy and people. Good use of modal "should"
- Could slow down a little to pronounce each sound more clearly. Had some trouble with "xt" sound in next.

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+ Very nice intro and remembered to greet the audience. Great idea to focus on one specific location as there is already so much to talk about.
- Not really a slide presentation but could be a good pamphlet or blog post.

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+ Beautiful images, especially of the food! Very little writing on the slides. Some great advice.
- Presentation is not quite long enough (needs another 30 seconds). Could sound less like reading and speak more naturally. Pronunciation problems with 's'.

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+ One of the best slide presentations (adhered to the "rule of three" which did not include more than 3 points per slide). Amazing content that included great recommendations (use of modals), transportation options, and positives and negatives (strengths and weaknesses)
- Much too long! Needs to cut the presentation in half.

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+ Good job editing, clean of grammar errors. Adhered well to the time limit.
- Don't write everything you will say on the presentation. Avoid using complete sentences. Instead use bullet points containing key pieces of information. Needs more practice in pronouncing long words (3 or more syllables)

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+ Amazing use of transitions to help the flow of your content:  furthermore, no only, besides, moreover, etc. Use of "you" in the presentation to include the audience which makes it more interactive and conversational. Considers people's different interests and gives many options of activities, landmarks, etc. Good body language which is difficult to show on Zoom.
- No slide presentation. Over the time limit. Pronunciation and pace started off well but in the end became less clear from rushing. Subject-verb agreement errors (ex. I was born. Not I were born.) Some word choice errors ("equal space" should be "equal distance")

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+ Great content. Talked about both things to see and to do. Sweet potato and hot milk sounds so good!
- No slide presentation. Use simple present tense "It has" instead of "It had" as the place still exists. Pronunciation could be clearer on final 's' sounds and 'f' (life).