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Very timely and relevant topic, which needs to be highlighted further.  Good presentation!

Include the variations of phishing and how these played a role in the chosen cases.

Perhaps you can choose a framework from existing literature for factors that influence susceptibility?

Comparison between youth and elderly can be clearer - maybe put into a table a visual representation would be useful

Recommendations - can be more specific, in terms of awareness and other interventions as a lot is happening in Singapore in these areas already

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Good clarity in the presentation and gap that you are filling is clear.  Methodology is clear. Highlight the significance of your study further (why is studying this gap important) more clearly? Presentation was clear, but need to make sure pace is good (not too slow, not too fast) when presenting, and avoid too much text and jargon.

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good presentation! Very interesting topic. The study is very descriptive, summarising and synthesizing key points from four experts. That is a valuable contribution, but also limited; these experts may have also already published their own works on this topic, so the current study must demonstrate that it is adding value to this discourse beyond highlighting differences and similarities of what experts say. Overall, good effort in examining a very timely and relevant topic!

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good presentation! Very interesting topic. The study is very descriptive, summarising and synthesizing key points from four experts. That is a valuable contribution, but also limited; these experts may have also already published their own works on this topic, so the current study must demonstrate that it is adding value to this discourse beyond highlighting differences and similarities of what experts say. Overall, good effort in examining a very timely and relevant topic!

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Presentation is clear and well organised, and well explained.  Topic is highly relevant but this could be highlighted more effectively in the beginning.             I would recommend practicing on being more engaging and well-paced with voice and speed variations.

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