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What are some examples of how backward design was implemented in NY education during COVID-19?

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I like how Joanna used Kyoto as a comparison to New York's COVID education response, it showed what is similar and different and what can potentially be learned from each other.

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Make the text bigger and try to make the text into bullet points or smaller in size because it is a little hard to read. It would be harder to read if your presentation is in person.

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Can you talk more about being publicly shamed because of Covid and how that impacted social skills or mental health.

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I like the engaging conversation that I can relate to. (I haven't met my peer mentor once). The presentation was informative, clear, and covered a wide array of topics.

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On the last slide, I'd say to maybe split it up into two slides and make shorter bullet points so that it is easier to follow along while hearing you present.

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The topics fit very seamlessly together, it would be really helpful if the point on peer mentors was expanded on.

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Some slides are quite heavy in text. To try and lighten up you can put some words in bold to attract attention to specific topics. Overall, great presentation!

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i found it really interesing to see the similarities and differences between the response of kyoto and the US and how the responses did or didn't help students! thanks for the insight

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I really like how they did the before-and-after to show the effects of COVID-19 teaching, which showed the difference. I have one thing, which is just to make the text less wordy. SORRYYY (DIAA ZEDEIAAA)

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I really like how they did the before-and-after to show the effects of COVID-19 teaching, which showed the difference. I have one thing, which is just to make the text less wordy. SORRYYY (DIAA ZEDEIAAA)

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I appreciate the time and energy placed into the design of the slides. Considering, the left over time you guys can expand a bit more on your ideas and points!

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Anasthasya Purba

I thought the comparison between Kyoto and NYC's college response was interesting and showed the struggles from COVID.

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It's a lot of historical information in a few minutes, so I suggest trying to make it somewhat more digestible if that makes sense.

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The visuals on your slide are nice, I liked the green and white contrast. Having some bullet points, text, or images on the first couple of slides will make it easier to follow along. Especially, since it is a historically rich topic. The visuals started after the G.I section was really helpful.

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In giving the historical context, I think that it would be helpful to explain how the GI Bill and Morrill Act led and transitioned us to the context in which these colleges are currently being marketed.

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I really liked how there were pictures and the slides were sweet and simple. Another thing is the timeline was a nice touch. It just adds a better understanding for the listener.

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I appreciate the time put into the presentation. I also appreciate the timelines and clear flow of ideas. Being able to see the events, dates, and information being brought up chronologically is both useful and informative.

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I liked that you spoke about court cases and used visuals to show the timeline of important speeches and decisions made by the court!

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On the "Morrill Land-Granting Acts" slide, add one or two bullet points of what you are saying instead of just the year to make it easier to follow along. Since each of your slides is different, I think having the same font (maybe having a unifying color scheme) will make for a cohesive presentation overall.

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I love how you incorporated examples as far back as 1800s and relevant examples from todays it shows how persistent this issue is

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I really like the usage of timelines especially since there is a lot of historical information as it helps with better understanding the information. Also the comparison of cases/acts is very interesting to see how something was good is now not helpful or vice versa

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The timelines are essential for each of these topics, specifically the historical context and how that manifests to conditions today. Both first and third presentations have a big message at the end, for uniformity it'd be great to see that for the 2nd presentation as well (DEI)

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I like how the main point is something relevant to everything that is going on today. Just wondering how will you propose this idea to the dean during presentation day.

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it's a lot of information, I suggest focusing on the key points to allow everyone ample time for their presentations.

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On the fence about not presenting the information about standardized testing on the slides. Although this would help audience follow along, the content presented by itself was easy to follow along and succinctly stated by Anonna which is great!

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I like the blocked groups as it organizes the information.However it is a lot of information, so splitting it into two or more slides might be better so the audience can see the information more easily.

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Love the consideration of possibilities in the future section! I think if graphs are included maybe room can be made to make them bigger for the audience to see their importance

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It was a very informative presentation, but I would suggest having fewer words on a slide since it would overwhelm the audience. I would suggest separating the information into different slides rather than fitting everything in one slide.

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For the past, present, and future slide, can you expand more on legacy? What legacy to be exact?

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This presentation is super detailed and informative, but the slides are a bit overwhelming and very differing in style. Making the slides more stylistically similar and more spaced out would be really helpful

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The slides were very informative and concise, the speakers did a very good job condensing it. However, there is a lot of information/writing making it kind of hard to follow.

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i loved your examination of how policies which are normalized in education are actually detrimental and discriminatory

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I like how you took us through the financial issues/crises and the college's responses to it, and how it affects students through things like work-study/scholarship/grants/etc., it makes me feel included as an audience member and student.

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Great use of a range of knowledge! I think some slides would be useful especially when referring to reasons, years, different acts/titles, and monetary numbers

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What is the average student debt a graduate has after finishing their higher education journey?

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Speaking of the current economic situation, does that makes college worth the investment if the graduates (if they did) ended up in huge debt?

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I found your solutions really interesting and informative and your background context helped illustrate the history of the problem and its evolution

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Very good information! use some more slides and visual content

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Liked the solutions you made, but would like slides

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There was a lot of great content, but a visual aid will help keep the audience engaged so they can fully grasp this great information!

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It is very informative and organized. I would just suggest adding some pictures for the audience. It would just make the slides more engaging.

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I like the way you organized your information, especially the slide titles like "Quick Insights". You should add some pictures because that would help grasp the reader. You don't have to include the sentence on the quick insights that mentioned the journal as you already cited it at the bottom

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Love the inclusion of quotes highlighting the current landscape of affirmative action.

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All of the information was really well organized and the bolded words draw your eyes to the key terms that help highlight the main points in your slides

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The information was very easy to follow along and presented in a seamless way!

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The layout of the slides is clean and easy to follow along. I thought the quotes on Donna's slides were a nice touch.

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Great organization of information and images! Very easy to follow and understand as an audience member.

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Lots of great information here and I think the audience will be really engaged when you present!

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I love the way the information is formatted, it's very clear. Talking about the future was really nice as well as comparing and talking about the different stances on affirmative action

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I like the information in the slides, the organization, how each section transitioned into each other!

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This is gorgeous. You should shorten the bullet points a little more to make it easier to read.

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i love how you covered everything important about affirmative action icluding covering the basics and nuances

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I think you could make a more detailed script because sometimes when people are speaking they jump back and forth and it sounds a little unplanned, but otherwise you had good information

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Great explanations given for the bullet points! There is quite a bit of information provided. It may be beneficial for time to cut down some.

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I like how you say "why not target the rich people?" when it comes to for-profit college. They probably try to reap more profit because the poor are less likely to be able to repay loan on time which means more money from interest. Just my opinion by the way.

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I like the simplistic theme used for your slides. Maybe making some bullet points shorter, so you can make the font bigger.

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The information is good but there might be too much of it. Picking the main points or a summary of each and talking on that will help cut down on time but still get your points across.

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I loved your explanation and the format of your slides as well. The transition between slides as each of you spoke was particularly effective and clear.

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You did very great job of explaining and delivering the information, and the design of the slides is very nice and engaging to follow. Just try to summarize the slides so to get out the information as fast as possible.

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The presentation was great! I think it could be helpful to focus on a few bullet points to keep the audience engaged.

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The presentation is nice and simplistic and the information is laid out well, but some points can be shortened to get the message across more quickly and effectively.

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I think it might be helpful to shorten some of the text since it can be a little overwhelming at times