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Instructions:

1. Plan your story as a group. You are only required to plan the falling action and conclusion based on our class writing. Your story should flow and continue from the class writing. Include your names followed by the part of the story mountain. For example, Student A, Student B, Student C, Student D - Falling Action. [10min]

2. As a group, based on your plan (story mountain), finish up the story by writing your falling action and conclusion in paragraphs. Your story should flow and continue from the class writing. [10min for each paragraph]

3. Use the final checklist found in the post below. [3min]

You may also refer to the posts below on what you should include in your plan.

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Introduction:

“Ring…” The school bell rang. It was recess, and Sam rushed down the stairs to head to the canteen. As he hurried down, he glanced around, keeping an eye out for Johnny, who had been bullying him for the past three weeks. Johnny was the school’s most notorious bully, and the students even had a nickname for him – Bully J. Everyone feared him, and no one dared to mess with him.

Rising Action:

Before Sam entered the canteen, he scanned the area carefully and spotted a familiar figure from afar – yes, it was Johnny. His heart skipped a beat, and cold shivers went down his spine. It was too late. Johnny had already made eye contact with Sam, and he skipped over toward him, waving a sandwich in his face. He then ordered Sam to take a bite of the sandwich. Sam felt uneasy as he sensed something was wrong, but when he saw Johnny’s gang cracking their knuckles, he had no choice but to obey. Soon, his throat started to itch, and he broke out in rashes. One of Johnny’s henchmen passed a cup of vinegar to Sam. Thinking it was water, Sam took a huge gulp, and his face wrinkled up in disgust. His eyes blazed with fury, and his nostrils flared like crazy.

Climax:

Sam’s rashes were small, but the humiliation was too much. While Johnny and his gang perceived Sam as a scaredy-cat, the rage inside him was screaming. However, instead of letting his anger take over, he took a deep breath and calmed himself. He did not want to behave like the bully. Looking Johnny straight in the eye, Sam said firmly, “I have had enough, Johnny! I will not let you bully me anymore!” Johnny was dumbfounded and taken aback. He didn’t know how to respond. For the first time, someone stood up to him.

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Events:

Characters involved and actions:

Their feelings:

Words to use:

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Events:

Characters involved and actions:

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You should write your final group writing task and post it here as well.

Remember to include dash for additional information/thought, reported command with to infinitive and appropriate vocabulary to show character’s thoughts, feelings, actions.

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What do I need to have on this Padlet by the end of the lesson?

1. Planning for Falling Action

2. Planning for Conclusion

3. Actual Group Writing (after checking if you have included dash for additional information/thought, reported command with to infinitive and appropriate vocabulary to show character’s thoughts, feelings, actions)

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Events:

1) Sam protests to Bully Johnny that he should not bully him anymore and that he would tell a teacher about Bully Johnny's behaviour.

Characters involved in the actions:

1) Sam

2) Bully Johnny

Their feelings:

1) Angry (Sam)

2) Dumbfounded (Bully Johnny)

Words to use:

1) Dumbfounded

2) Firm

3) Protest

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Lee Ting Wei, Zhuo Yuxuan, Han Junxi Ian. (The smartest people. Ting Wei is the most handsome Ting Wei said that)

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Lee Ting Wei, Zhuo Yuxuan, Han Junxi Ian. (The smartest people. Ting Wei is the most handsome Ting Wei said that)

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Planning:

Falling Action:

We will write: Bully Johnny was dumbfounded and shocked. He did not expect Sam to stand up to himself. Sam was proud as he had done the impossible.

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Events:

1. Johnny clearly was angry at Sam for disoeying the 'king' of the school.He and his gang wanted to beat up Sam to a pulp.

Characters involved and actions:

1. Sam

2. Johnny

3. Johnny's gang

Their feelings:

1. Angry

Words to use:

1. Infuriated

2. Irritated

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Sam stood up for others and himself.

Sam also helped other people who also got bullied

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Events:

1. Sam stood up to Bully John

Characters involved and actions:

1. Sam, Bully John and the teacher

Thier feelings:

1. Bully John - guilty.

2. Sam - proud.

3. Teacher - proud that John stood up to Bully John and told a trusted adult.

Words to use:

1.

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Events : Sam stood up for himself

Johnny got furious/ irritated as he wanted to punch Sam

Steam was coming out from his ears and head

Anger rush through his veins

Characters involved in actions:

Sam,Bully Johnny

Their feelings: dumbfounded,stunned to the ground(Johnny)

anger(Sam)

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" Please stop it! Is hurting me making me happy?" Sam said while tears rolled down his face like an avalanche. At this moment, he knew he had enough of him. Sam walked closer to Johnny and held the half eaten sandwich in his hand and stuffed it in his mouth. Johnny looked at him fiercely but Sam had just kicked him in the shin as for what he had learnt in his past Taekwondo lesson his mother had signed him up for. Everyone in the canteen was very shocked as no one had ever saw him do that ever. The reason Sam did not show it was because he was no nervous to show it to anyone.

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Bully John was in disbelief. While Bully John froze on the spot, Sam ran and informed the nearest teacher, Ms Aida, about what Bully John did to him. Ms Aida rushed over to where Bully John was standing. She scolded him and gave him a punnishment, recess detention.

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Events:

1) Sam told the teacher about Bully JOhnny's behaviour.

2) The teacher scolded Bully Johnny and gave him a punishment - caning.

Characters involved:

1) Sam

2) Bully Johnny

3) Teacher\Principal

Their feelings:

Proud (Sam)

Angry (Bully Johnny)

Angry\Proud (Teacher)

Words to use:

1) Proud like a peacock

2) Burning with rage

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Suddenly, a mysterious figure appeared behind Johnny, " I thought you promised you will stop bullying? " It turned out to be the principal - Johnny's mother.

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Johnny was furious.his eyes blazed in fury.

"how dare you! You dare to mess with me!

eat this!!"Johnny swung his 'iron fist'- his special move -at the helpless Sam.

Just as Johnny's fist was about to land on Sam, a voice rang out. "Leave him alone!", and out came Ted- the school's martial arts champion.

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"How dare you say that to me!" Johnny hollered at Sam as Johnny was stunned like a deer in the headlights.Out of the blue, Mr Choy appeared out of nowhere. Once Sam saw Mr Choy, he dashed to him and told him that Johnny and his bully gang was bulling him.

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After Johnny got kicked, he immediately ran away and apoplogised to Sam. They knew to never mess with Sam anymore. He had too be rushed to the hospital as the reactions were getting worse asnd worse. During the trip to the hospital, Sam was really proud of himself for finally having the courage to standd up for himself.

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Events :

1)Johnny and his gang started throwing punches and kicks recklessly at Sam without a care

2)Sam dodged everything and put Johnny and his gang in their place

3) Johnny and his gang learnt their lesson which is not to bully people

Characters involved and their actions :

Johnny

Sam

Their feelings :

Johnny - angry, infuriated

Sam - satisfied, proud, brave

Words to use :

Infuriated

Recklessly

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"What did you just say?" yelled Johnny after a moment's pause. "I am your superior, and you dare to disobey me! You'll see what I'll do to you! Attack him, boys!" Johnny commanded.Sam swiftly dodged the attacks.

As Johnny and his hencmans gaped at Sam in shock and amazement at his sudden reflexes. "Smack!'' Sam gave Johnny a tight smack as Johnny tried to punch him in retaliation for dodging all his blows.Johnny's eyes widened in shock as he realised what Sam had done. Growling, he said "You will pay for this! This isn't over!!''

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All the teachers were proud of Sam because he told the teachers what was going on and Bully John's parents scolded him for acting this way - acting like a bully. They also apologised to Sam's parents and said that their son, John, won't do it ever again. After a few weeks while John was being kind, Sam and John became closer and they became best friends.

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Johnny's gang gasped in indescribable fear as the towering giant Ted loomed over them. "Back off." he growled, Johnny and his gang felt Ted's aura radiating from him and scurried off as far as their legs could carry them.

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Bully Johnny was still flabbegasted as he did not realise that Sam would actually stand up for himself. Sam protested for his dignity. He told Johnny firmly that he will not hesitate to tell the teacher or even the principal about Johnny's behaviour. Johnny did not believe Sam and dared him to tell the teacher.

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Johnny was angry that Sam talked back to him. Johnny wanted to beat Sam up to a pulp. They were both feeling irritated and could not stand each other.

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Falling Action :

Slowly,curious students crowd around,wondering what the commotion is about.When they found out what had happened, their eyes widened and their jaw dropped agape on how brave Sam was to stand up for a bully like Johnny.Thunderous cheers and loud encouragement could be heard from afar.This gave a new sense of hope for Sam."What is going on?Why is everyone screaming and shouting?"Ms Tan,the form teacher of Empathy 1 questioned.

Conclusion:

The students who were cheering for Sam told Ms Tan what had happened when she was not around.Realization hit her like a punch on her face,there was a bullying case happening that she was not aware of. For the next few weeks, Johnny and his gang did not dare to move a finger.Rumours spread around that Johnny and his gang got punished for their actions.

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Right beside the principal was a girl Eva - Sam's table partner - She walked past the bullying scene and wanted to report to a teacher. Just nice she saw the principal and told the pricipal what happened. John stood frozen after seeing the principle, " Ummmm....wh.......wh....wh.....wh....wh....wh....what are you doing here mother? Oops! It is principal. " In the end, Johnny got grounded and appologised sincirely to Sam.

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Zhuo Yuxuan, Lee Ting Wei, Han Junxi, Ian

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Zhuo Yuxuan, Lee Ting Wei, Han Junxi, Ian

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Falling action:

Bully Johnny was dumbfounded and agitated at the same time. He was speechless as he did not think that Sam would ever stand up to him as he was the big bully in the school and he was just a scrawny little boy. He tried to scare Sam again by saying "How dare you say that to me, I will teach you a lesson and make you pay!" but to no avail, he failed miserably. Sam did not even feel scared at all. Instead, he said fearlessly:" Oh yeah? Let's see if you can truly make me pay, catch me if you can!"

Conclusion: He ran as fast as light towards the school field- next to the big banyan tree- while Bully Johnny and his henchmen chased after him. When they arrived there, Bully Johnny and his henchmen's jaw dropped, their faces turned as red as a tomato. The discipline master and Sam's parents were waiting for them by the big banyan tree and the bullies later got the punishment they deserved. "Well done son for telling everything to us, you are very brave for standing up to those bullies," Sam's parents proudly told Sam. In the end, Bully Johnny and his henchmen learned their lesson and never bullied anyone again. The End.