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You had me really scared(or any other specific emotion) at this point.

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your writing is sincere and is so authentic!

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“I really like how you….” “This quote contains deep emotion”

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I can tell how much time you put into this work, it really shows!

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“ Your personality in your writing makes it very enjoyable!”

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Great work! I see so much improvement from the start of the year! Keep up the good work!

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i really like the way you did ……

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"I can see how confident you feel about your writing!"

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I love your use of vivid imagery.

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You are doing amazing keep writing like this it is really moving

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I love the use of this transition, I can clearly follow your voice and argument of your paper.

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I really feel your emotions!

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“Your writing was really thoughtful and demonstrated your kind character”

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This had me super interested and I can’t wait to hear more about it. Keep up the great work.

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You can say “I really loved how hard you worked on this” or “I can see in your writing that you put a lot of time and effort into it”

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Your voice really shines in this work!

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Shakespeare would be jealous he didn’t write this piece first!