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At now I am at my hometown, my hometown doesn’t have covid 19, so I can go outside, play with friends,.... So I think there are no change for me. My parents can go to my hometown and meet me because they are in green land and they all have 2 shots of vaccine.

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I used to visit my grandparent's house every weekends. But due to the pandemic, I have to stay home. After weeks the government stopped the quarantine, so my family had a chance to visit them again. It was very different because my young cousin, who is living there, went to first grade. I got to see his books and notes... which is not interesting. Then, they have some new sports tools and games, which I really enjoy going. I love visiting my grandparents because they always greet me with smiles and welcome and they cooked us tasty meals every time we visit them.

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Currently, I do not live in Hanoi but I live in the countryside, my hometown is not affected by covid 19 so I can do all I want without wearing a mask.After school, in the morning, I will go to the neighborhood to play with my friends, and in the afternoon, I will go to the sand next to the field to play football. I have a close friend here, I've been playing with him since I was 2 months old
Currently, my hometown is not affected by covid 19 but from the beginning of July to the beginning of August, my hometown was slightly affected by covid 19 .So I need to stay at home even though it's not required by the state, but I think it doesn't make much difference whether I stay at home or go out to play. My grandparent' house is very very large, it is about 1 km² wide and has a lake so I can catch the fishs , climb trees, shoot marbles, weed , hoe, grow vegetables, jump rope and many more else .My grandparents also have a lot of dogs and cats so I can play with them, they also have a lot of chickens so I can chase them if I'm sad.
When covid 19 affected my hometown, once, I went to the market to buy some things, there was not a single person in the field, and there were as many people on the sand as there were in the field. And on the village road, it's only me. At that time I thought: "I am the last survivor in the world" :))))))))). When I went to the market to buy things, only a few essential food stores were still active. At that time, in addition to the sales people, only me and another person were the buyers.
But after all, everything seems to be waking up after a long sleep, people go to the market to buy goods, the streets are crowded again, in the fields, the farmers go back to doing their daily work, the children in the neighborhood The village invites each other to the sand, after the first day of the end of the distance, everyone eagerly prepares to start a new normal life. The next day, everything was right back on its own. A fresh space, people go to the fields to plow, children scream, play on the sand, and bright smiles.

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Did you use past tenses and present tenses?
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How much has the place changed?
Are the changes positive or negative?
Did you use comparisons to describe the changes?

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My favorite place is my hometown. It's a beautiful place. The last time I went to there was 3 months ago. The first entrance of my village still had cement on it. My aunt house was still a really old, and my neighbor's house was still in construction. Yesterday I went to my hometown, I saw that now my neighbor's house is nearly completed. The first entrance of my village is now completed. My aunt's house is now under construction with a much more bigger house. There may have some awkward changes, but I still like my hometown.

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I love my house and over the years it has changed in many things. For example, the house that I’m used to is now way more beautiful and more convenient. There’s now a wall separating mine and my parents’ room. The living room is brighter than before because of the new lights. Back then the living room seemed dead. And now it looks like an actual living place. The bathroom isn’t as disgusting as before and it’s cleaner now. The difference isn’t very big but I like the house more now. I like it the way that it is now.

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I love my house and over the years it has changed in a few things. For example, I remembered that it was very inconvenient to do an online class without interruptions from family members. Now there’s a wall separating mine and my parents’ room. The living room is brighter than before because of the new lights. Back then the living room seemed dead. And now it looks like an actual living place. The bathroom isn’t as disgusting as before and it’s cleaner now. The difference isn’t very big but I like the house more now. I like it the way that it is now.

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I love my house and over the years it has changed in a few things. For example, I remembered that it was very inconvenient to do an online class without interruptions from family members. Now there’s a wall separating mine and my parents’ room. The living room is brighter and livelier than before. Back then the living room seemed dead. And now it looks like an actual living place. But we didn’t make dramatic changes to the living room, just added some lights with a yellow tint. However, we did change the stand the TV was on. It was just an ordinary table we found. Now the TV is hanging on the wall and there’s an elegant looking shelf next to it. The table that used to be my storing space is now replaced by a wooded shelf. The shelf is way more compacted than the table and it fits with the room. I like it the way that it is now.

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It has been 5 months since I came to Thaou. Yesterday, I went to Thaou and there were so many changes. They made a big improvement by building wind turbines but it makes the town as not pleasant as before. The turbines are noisy and farmers cannot work as efficiently as they used to. Due to Covid, the street is not as narrow as before. Houses are also built with cement instead of traditional communal house and people start to use lots of motorbikes makes the air highly polluted. All of this make an adverse effect on this small town and I don’t like it as before

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Ha Noi has changed really much in the past years because of the population, the pollution there is in Ha Noi. Many years ago, Ha Noi was a country with nearly no polution and the population wasn't really that much, but many years later, they invented many different transports like motobikes, cars, and buses, the worst thing is that the population grew really quick since then. But the good thing about it is that the

civilization of Vietnam grew a lot, the best is probably technology. I still think living long ago is better than now. I hope the population will grow slower and the polution will be less.

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The last time I went to the countryside was about 6 months ago. Now, the road has been rebuilt with cement instead of stone which makes it easier to go through and looks better. Now every house on the street has become more modern and beautiful than it is before. There are also random chairs around the road which means people can sit down and relax easily. But unfortunately, now there are fewer trees and plants than there is before. But now there is a big restaurant and a gas station at the start of the town so truck drivers can sit down and relax. Because of that, more people are visiting the town than before. In conclusion, my countryside has changed a lot for the better and its becoming  more like a modern city

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I used to live at my grandparent's house but now I live in a different one. My grandparent's house definitely changed a lot since I last been there. It's certainly not the same as it was before. It's surprisingly peaceful, and there are more children playing there. There used to be some noisy neighbours that lived next door but now that they're gone, it's much quieter.
A new supermarket just opened recently, now my grandparents don't have to travel a long way to get their groceries.

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My house has never been the same since the past years. My family moved to an apartment 4 years ago. When we first moved there, the house was so beautiful: the wall paint, furniture. The house has always been like that. But there were lots of other differences. On my bedroom wall, there are lots of artistic paintings that I have been drawing. My room is a bit messier than it was before. The living room is filled with toys and books over the time, more lively than the cold, lonely living room before. My parents' bedroom has lots of diapers, baby toys since we just welcome a new family member. The house has change a lot with noisy, lively and happy atmosphere.

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I used to live at my grandparent's house but now I moved into a different one. My grandparent's house definitely changed a lot since I last been there. It's certainly not the same as it was before.
The neighbourhood is surprisingly peaceful, and there are more children having fun outside. There used to be some noisy neighbours that lived next door but now that they're gone, it's much quieter.
Also, a new supermarket just opened near my grandparent's house, now they don't have to travel a long way to get their groceries. It's useful for me too, because I can go get snacks whenever I want.
Everything has changed for the better or stayed the same. I think my grandparent's house is a much more pleasant place to live now.

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I love my countryside very much. The lasr time I went there was 2021 Tet. There was many changes compared to the years 2012-2013. It was became more modern. Many groceries are built. Streets was more smoothly. I think I like these changes because I like groceries or convenience stores like Circle K.

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I have lived in my hometown since I was born until now. It didn’t change much. There are still a small road many houses next to each other. But it’s more polluted and noisier. My house change a little bit. My dad painted the wall again with cream white color because when I was a child, I drew on it. It’s so beautiful. My dad also bought a new computer so we can study online.

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One of my favorite places ever is the countryside. The last time I went there was about 6 months ago. Now, the road has been rebuilt with concrete instead of stone which makes it easier to go through and looks better. Now every house in the street has become more modern and beautiful than it is before. There are also random chairs around the road, which means people can sit down and relax easily. But unfortunately, now there are fewer trees and plants than there is before/ there used to be.

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One of my favorite places, when the summer is coming, is my hometown. It has a lot of beautiful rivers as many as it used to have but they have a little bit different from the last time that they don't have any trash in rivers anymore. It also has more houses than last 2 years. The sky is blue the air is fresher and there are more trees. people go out less and the road is clean, it looks like those people have changed a lot as much as I could see. After that trip, I feel more different from the last time because I can see the work they have done so far I feel happier and more confident.

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My hometown has changed a lot. My grandparents’ house is now bigger, there are more lights in the house. My neighbours’ house and gardens are bigger. The streets are wider than it was which makes everyone feel comfortable There are more works for people here because there are more factories so people want to live here. My hometown also looks more urbanize. It’s not really good because urbanize may cause more pollution of air, water,… and more nature beauties can be destroyed. My hometown is now better and better everyday and I really want to comeback there again.

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My street is my favorite place. I really love to be there because I have spent all my childhood here even to now. It used to be a very polluted place at first, but now it's clean and with fresh air because everyone here is friendly and always ready help the street cleaner but when we first come here, no one even care about us, they just stare at us and then go do their work. Flowers bloom in the spring is very beautiful, even in the summer too. We play football here for many times but we don't do it usually due to Covid-19 but instead of that, we try to do it during night so no one complained about us. I love my street so much

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No one fix anything so this is my final draft

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No one fix anything so this is my final draft

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When I was a child, I often cycle in the pavements near my house. I was too scare to cycle on the streets at that time. Sometimes I almost hit people which I still to this day. If lucky I can meet my friend too. The pavements are not crowed, just some walking people and maybe a motorbike. It hasn't changed much since then. The bookstores, the buildings, the alleys,... the same as before. Only my feels is not as the same as before.  I don't see this as my home anymore, just a place that I have come before.

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Ha Long bay is a beautiful beach. But it has changed alot. The beach isn't as clean as it selves before. Plenty of plastic bag, water bottle, etc. are floating on the water, the oil everywhere. But the food isn't too bad. But the resort service is really wonderful. They always appearing when you need. This is also a advantages for the island.

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work (uncountable noun)
works of art; tác phẩm
jobs should be used to talk about things people do
go back

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-You should work on your grammar.
-It's too short.
-I don't think this fits the topic.

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i think you should write some more changes not just the pollution

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It's been four years since the last time I went to my hometown. It has changed a lot since four years ago. There are more houses and more vehicles than before. The streets aren't as quiet as before but traveling is much better now. Many things changed but there are a few things that I like and haven't changed. Such as the delicious food and how friendly the people in there are. Nature is still the same even houses and streets are growing insanely. I'm very happy with what has changed in all those four years.

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I dont see any changes. The changes must be about the place(just think)

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Guts

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Trọng minh: 'polution'
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Your writing looks really good, and how can your countryside be so modern?

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Too much grammatical mistakes
Your ideas aren't linked, they don't flow

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I think you should write some more changes not just the houses

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You miss some words in the sentence and it will decrease your points when you do the paragraph so try to check and edit it

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My favorite place is my hometown. It's been a lot more changes since the last time I visited it. My hometown is a beautiful and fully decorated every day. The last time I got to my hometown is 3 months ago. And yesterday I went back to my hometown. A part my village road is now renewed into a better road. The market and the school are now really quiet because everyone are afraid of the pandemic. The school have just done constructing a new P.E house, you can go swimming in that place. Everyone don't go to there really often. My aunt's house is now under construction to make a bigger house. That's a lot of big stuffs have changed in my hometown. That makes my hometown better and better through days. That's really great

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-You can't count cement, so don't add s
-The entrance. Not the first entrance
-great writing overall. Keep up the good work :D

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ok this  good but some parts are a bit funny

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1. "the wall paint, furniture" -> the wall paint and furniture.
2. You shouldn't start a sentence with the word but. I'm not very sure but "but" is a conjunction which means it should be in the middle of a sentence. [sentence 5]

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-nice but you should add more adj and more interesting things than just that ;-;

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there is a tiny mistake, but yours is good overall

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It's ok but kind of short

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+Link the sentences together
+Use less "buts"

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In your 3rd sentence, your grammar is incorrect. there are change to there is because a small road is one so use is

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nothing is link to topic
still using ... ???

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-Too short
-Grammar mistakes
-Wrong topic
-Don't use "..."

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Short
Use some connecting words

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I enjoys should be changed into I enjoy (without s)

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Nice. I can really see the positive changes in your living room that you're describing :D

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It has been four years since the last time I went to my hometown. It has changed a lot since four years ago. There are more houses and more vehicles than before. The streets aren't as quiet as before but traveling is much better now. Many things changed but there are a few things that I like that haven't changed. Such as the delicious food and how friendly the people in there are. Nature is still the same even when houses and streets are growing insanely. I'm very happy with what has changed in all those four years.

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1. "everyone here is friendly and always ready help the street" -> and is always ready to help
2. Your 3rd sentence is a bit long, seperate it into 2 sentences.

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I don't find any mistakes so I think it's really good

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-Your house is interesting =))
-Very good writing but I think it's a bit too long

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Thank you! I'll change it.

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Your writing is a little bit short ://

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First line: "since I have come..."
6th line: "the town is not as pleasant as before"

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I get what you mean, but it's kind of choppy

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you should add some positive changes ;-; and i think you should add more information about a specific thing.

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Mistakes:
- Tense
- Nuon (nostalgia not nostalgias

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- the writing is off-topic. I don't see you talking about the actual changes
- as everyone has said before: grammar mistakes
- In my opinion, your writing is a little bit too short

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My village has 2 entrance so I must call the "first entrance"

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First line: you should use :"changed a lot"
Third line: "Pollution"

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- Soooo short
- I think u need 'as'
- Check again your grammar :)

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Your writing is really good. I like how you describe both positive changes and negative changes :))))

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thank and will edit it if I can ;-;

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It's kind of the same

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-Nice
-''The streets are wider than they were'' not it was
-Basically the writing is good =)))

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4 years ago cannot come with present perfect (line 3)
Other I think I wrote well :D

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that is really short

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In some sentences you add unnescessary words.
"They sky is more fresh" -> use a different adjective to describe the sky.

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The writing's great. I dont think there's any major mistakes. Keep up the great work :D

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-Missing words
-Some grammar mistakes

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First line: "It's has been..."

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and haven't... (that haven't...)
even (even if)

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good job bro :)))

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U did a good job and u need to check again bit mistake bout your grammar.

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Check your work again for some grammatical mistakes + should be longer

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Good writing. I think it's perfect isn't it

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some tenses mistakes

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I think this is really good since I don't see any mistakes :D

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Great writing. =)))))

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Good job! I don't see any mistake

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first draft and I have edited it for a couple of times

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My hometown is Hanoi and it has been constantly changing over the past century. In the past, according to my dad's stories, Hanoi was outdated and people lived in poverty. There were shortages of food and safe water.
Now, it sure has changed a lot. People are provided with better education so that they are able to get decent-paying jobs. The government also ensures that people have good-quality food and clean water. The streets surely are upgraded, too. They are filled with trees and beautiful flowers. Even though this city still has a lot of flaws and lacks in many aspects, I love the way Hanoi is now.

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thank you everyone

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in the street -> on the street

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as not -> not as
narrow (dude Covid can't make streets wider)

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There was (are)
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There have been many differences since the last time I went back to my primary school.

The last 2 years - the time when I was studying in my primary school, it didn’t have as many technological devices as it has now. I think the biggest change is the school’s color of paint. It has turned from milk-white into white. Even though the school’s vastness didn’t change, but it looks newer. Besides the good sides, the number of trees is not the same as when it was, the school has fewer trees. The school is now cleaner and fresher, I love this part the most as I’m a clean person :))).

So overall, my primary school has changed a lot. Some of the changes are good, but I don’t like some. However, I still love my primary school so so much, and I hope I can go back to my school one day, after the lockdown.

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Ha Noi has changed a lot over the past years. There are more buildings and more people than before now. That makes the city more polluted and more dirty. Some places and rivers are as dirty as before.  Despite all of that, there are many good things too. Many of the streets are polished and fixed, the parks looks so much prettier than the old versions. The only thing that hasn’t changed is citizens’ friendly attitude towards eachother. Those things make Ha Noi prettier, and it also makes me want to explore Ha Noi more.

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I used to visit my grandparent's house every weekends. But due to the pandemic, I have to stay home. After weeks the government stopped the quarantine, so my family had a chance to visit them again. It was very different because my young cousin, who is living there, went to first grade. I got to see his books and notes... which is not interesting. Then, they have some new sports tools and games, which I really enjoys going. I love visiting my grandparents because they always greet me with smiles and welcome and they cooked us tasty meals every time we visit them.

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It has been 5 months since I have come to Thaou. Yesterday, I went to Thaou and there were so many changes. They have made a big improvement by building wind turbines but it makes the town is not as pleasant as before. The turbines are noisy and farmers cannot work as efficiently as they used to. Due to Covid, the street is not as narrow as before. Houses are built with cement instead of traditional communal house and people have started to use lots of motorbikes makes the air highly polluted. All this make an adverse effect on this small town and I don’t like it as before

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I have lived in my hometown since I was born until now. It didn’t change much. There is still a small road many houses next to each other. But it’s more polluted and noisier. My house change a little bit. My dad painted the wall again with cream white color because when I was a child, I drew on it. It’s so beautiful. My dad also bought a new computer so we can study online.

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I'm having a bad feeling when I revisited my old home. It's still okay, but things aren't normal at the apartment: Where're the playground, the mart, the restaurants? I can only saw a bank that I can feel some darkness inside. I'm so worried: The owner is going to remove all houses while my family isn't able to sell the old house yet. With Covid-19 is still affecting on, that's so terrible and if things are still going on, my old house will be ruined until it's a bunch of trashes.

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My house has never been the same since the past years. My family moved to an apartment 4 years ago. When we first moved there, the house was so beautiful: the wall paint and furniture. The house has always been like that but there were lots of other differences. On my bedroom wall, there are lots of artistic paintings that I have been drawing. My room is a bit messier than it was before. The living room is filled with toys and books over the time, more lively than the cold, lonely living room before. My parents' bedroom has lots of diapers, baby toys since we just welcome a new family member. The house has change a lot with noisy, lively and happy atmosphere

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When I was little, I lived in a small house with my parents in Sai Dong. The people were very friendly and nice. The streets were small but it was ok. There weren't any trees then and it was a bit polluted. But now, the streets are wide and there are lots of trees. The street is still a bit polluted since there is a small factory there. The people are still very nice and I'd say the place had improved from when I lived there.

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F in the chat for the people that you almost hit