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Becky- I think your front style could be more inviting.
Josh- I would change the audio/song in the background for something that would make your readers actually want to stay in Tenby- It's a bit depressing!

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I liked the way your multimedia resource ran, it was really smooth and enjoyed the background music. It was very informative.  I would suggest you use brighter colours.

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Becky

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Great Prezi, I like the way it zooms in and zooms out for each section. Hyperlinks are very effective and your multimedia resource intices me to want to have a staycation in Tenby.
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Olivia

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I really like your resource, it is structured well and includes all the information i would need if i was planning a Staycation in Trecco bay - J

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Da Iawn on your multimedia resource, great use of features such as Video, Images etc. And your popplet was very innovative and informative for a reader. Great use of creative tools.

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Olivia

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I really like your presentation and how you have inserted a hyperlink for another multimedia resource. it was really well structured I think i may have a Staycation now! - J

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I really thought the whole of your multimedia resource read well. I liked the use of you tube and the link to the reviews. I would suggest you try to use more clearer images.

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Becky

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https://sway.com/XEcMaRXdc3L1p7Ah

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https://sway.com/jYV1Tl3HJLV9AtWm?ref=Link

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https://prezi.com/olk53dfybdym/staycation-tenby/

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Really like those ideas for what to include and how to show it 

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Really like those ideas for what to include and how to show it 

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I think we should use a slideshow for the advertisement.

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I think we should use a slideshow for the advertisement.

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I think we should include an image, a video and a hyperlink to one of the websites.

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Great research done, I like that you have used YouTube to show the videos of the publics experiences.

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Becky

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Hi Josh,
Good use of screenshots for your research. I like that you have put in activity discounts for Oakwood park. Very useful for someone who may be looking to book a holiday on a budget.

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Olivia

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Great research, I really liked the website Parkdean where it shows a list of the local attractions and enjoyed the video, I feel this grabs the audiences attention.

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Becky

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Hi Becky,

Great Research! I also used the Parkdean Resorts website, which I found very useful. I like that you have used specific activities to look at i.e. horse riding so your multimedia resource will be easier to create with this information.
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Olivia

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Really like that you have given links to the websites that you choose. This lets me look at the whole website's that you have. Josh

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Really like your research, there are some really good pictures and comments on the sites you have choose. Josh

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Here's my research on Tenby, what do you think? Josh

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Hi Guys, check out my research for Trecco Bay