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Sound:
. 'Growling maniacally'
.'Very fast, aggrieved conversation'
The writer uses repetition with the verb 'growling' which gives the effect that it was something Magne did constantly. The writer also uses a simile comparing Magnes growls as that of a speedy conversation which gives the effect that Magne was a very energetic character. Thus, it gives the reader a form of imagery to the sound and pace of Magnes growls.

Behavior:
.'Banged his chest'
.'Tore at the grass'
.'Hunched, scooting gallop.'
The writer uses many verbs to describe Magnes behavior which shows that Magne had a very physical character. Powerful verbs such as tore are used to emphasize and exaggerate Magnes actions which expresses that Magne is an agressive character. The use of the phrase 'Hunched, scooting gallop.' is used to show that Magne was a wild character as it expresses under development and is considered a rural and an animalistic form of movement.

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SOUND
"the clang"
"A short, sharp, barking scream."
"Rumbling"
BEHAVIOR
"hunched, scooting gallop."
"Banged"
"Slapped"
The writer uses these phrases to describe the sounds and behaviors as violent, aggressive and threatening
Style analysis 2
"Surge of muscle"
"the solidity of him"
"the rank musk"
"growling maniacally"
The writer uses these words and phrases to give us the impression that Magne is extremely powerful and dangerous

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Sound:
- "sharp, barking scream"
- "a rumbeling noise"
- "growling maniacally"
- "clang"
Behaviour:
- "banged his chest"
- "tore at the grass"

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Sound: 'barking scream'
'rumbling noise of the concrtete'
'banged his chest'
Behavior: 'sideways glance'
'tore at the grass'

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a) Sounds and behaviour of Magne
SOUND
- " sound of a bolt being drawn back"
- "Banged his chest"
- "The clanging of a cage door"
- "barking scream"
- "rumbling noise of the concrete"
BEHAVIOUR
- " scooting gallop"
- "tore at the grass"
-  "detached"

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Faris Bayan planning for Style Analysis on Gorilla Sanctuary

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Faris Bayan planning for Style Analysis on Gorilla Sanctuary

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a) Sound and behavior of Magne upon entering:
Sound:

i)Short, sharp barking scream: Threes; adjectives
ii) Rumbling noise: Auditory imagery

Behaviour:
iii) Slapped: Verb; visual imagery.
iv) Hunched, scooting gallop: adjectives; visual imagery
Overview sentence: The writer paints Magne's behaviour and sounds upon entering as very violent, wild animal.

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a) sounds and behaviour of Magne:
SOUNDS:

"rumbling noise"

"clanging"

"sharp, barking scream"

BEHAVIOURS:

"hunched, scooting gallop"

"tore at the grass"

"slapped"

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sound:
-sound of a bolt being drawn back
-a rumbling noise on the concrete
behavior:
-banged his chest
- detached the two screaming baby gorillas

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Shaan's style analysis - planning (sound)

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Shaan's style analysis - planning (sound)

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-  "growling maniacally"
-  "very fast, aggrieved conversation with himself"
-  "a growl which varied in pitch and tempo"
-  "barking scream"
-  "slapped"
- "banged his chest"
-  "sound of a bolt being drawn back"
-  "the clang of a cage door"
-  "rumbling noise"

(behavior):

-   "hunched"
-   "scooting gallop"
-   "detached the two
screaming baby gorillas"
-   "tore at the grass"
-   "sideways glance"

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SOUND:
- "sound of bolt"
- "clang of a cage door"
- "rumbling noise"
- "barking scream"

BEHAVIOUR:
- "tore at the grass"
- "banged his chest"

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Sounds of Magne
"short, sharp" the use of alliteration emphasizes the sudden and abrupt sounds that Magne makes,. The effect of the technique is to make the reader aware of Magne's excitable and energetic character using auditory imagery.

"scooting gallop" Magne is a massive and muscular animal, the use of the adjective "scooting" created an image of him bolting from place to place which suggests that he is robust and powerful.

Behavior of Mange
"detached" the use of the verb "detached" suggests that Magne is quite sensitive as he displays jealousy of the baby gorillas. This makes him appear interesting to the reader as it shows that he displays acute human emotions.

"bit my ears carefully" the use of the adjective "carefully" is effective as it demonstrates that the author wants the reader to consider how carefully Magne bit Lary's ear despite all his incredible strength and might. This shows that Magne is  not as aggressive as the reader may have interpreted him.

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Sound: 'short sharp screaming'
'rumbling noise'
Both of these show
extreme agression and violent

Behavior:

Overview Sentence:
The writer uses words such as 'screaming', 'clang', and 'tore' to portray the gorilla as a violent, aggressive, and fearful creature. However, the writer also uses terms such as 'roughed up' to contrast with the previous image; making Magne look playful and fun as well.

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Maheen - Sounds and behavior  and the writers impression of Magne

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Maheen - Sounds and behavior  and the writers impression of Magne

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Sounds:
1) "bolt" - loud, thunderous
2) "short, sharp" - a sudden/abrupt sound

Behavior:
1) "tore at the grass" - aggressive/violent,
2) "banged his chest" - power, dominance, vigorous

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sounds:
-"bolt clung"- danger
-onomatopoeia-"clang"
-"barking scream"
-"rumbling noise on the concrete"
behavior-
-many commas-"a short,sharp,barking scream..."-he bolted in, it makes the reader read quicker, creates tension+power of 3
-"on all fours''-monster/predator, adds to tension
-"tore at the grass"-strong image,tension

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Bolt being drawn back

Slapped Yvette on the back

Tore at the grass

With a Sideways glance...

All these phrases hint at aggressiveness.

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Sound:
1. "Bolt"
2. "Clang"
Behaviour:
1. "Tore at the grass"
2. "Banged"

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Sounds:
-a bolt being drawn back
-the clang of a cage door
-a rumbling noise on the concrete

Behaviour:
-roughed them up a bit,
-banged his chest,
-tore at the grass
-detached the two
screaming baby gorillas

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-growling maniacally
-surge of muscle
-solidity
-rank musk
overview sentence:
the writer uses devices to give us an idea on Magne's thick built. Magne is 'growling maniacally' which implies that he was very powerful and mighty. The writer shows us that Magne is unbeatable and dangerous.

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b) Writers impression of Magne
-  "surge of muscle"
-  "solidity"
- "growing maniacally"
-  "pink cavern"

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Asser - The writer's impression of Magne

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Asser - The writer's impression of Magne

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The rank musk
A smell as sweet as cows breath
Surge of muscle
Growling manically

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b) writer's impressions of Magne

"stupid by the weight" - taken by shock of the weight

"surge of muscle"  -sudden, unstoppable muscle

"rank musk" -unpleasant, potent, animal smell

"as big as marlin spikes" - hyperbolic simile: the teeth were massive and very sharp

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- "surge of muscle"
- "solidity of him"
- "marlin spikes"

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Faris Bayan Planning for Style Analysis on Gorilla Sanctuary

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Faris Bayan Planning for Style Analysis on Gorilla Sanctuary

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b) Writer's impressions of Magne:
i)  varied in pitch and tempo: Auditory imagery
ii) Without effort: Visual imagery
iii) Very fast, aggrieved: Auditory imagery.
iv) Growling maniacally: auditory imagery
Overview sentence: The writer views Magne as a very wild, yet strong animal.

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-"'good boy'"- shows the writer's shock and amazement
-"made stupid by the weight"- writer in awe at the mere size of the gorilla
-"all my strength against the surge of muscle"-the word 'surge' emphasizes at how incredibly strong he is. It also creates a sense of threat as the writer is powerless.

-"marlin spikes"-compares gorilla to a predator, thus adds to a sense of threat. Gorilla is portrayed as monster/predator.Ability to tear you apart.
"surge" like waves, powerless and insignisfiacnt and small, adgile.

-"solidity'-overpowered, like a rock, alpha, "rank musk" alpha male scent.Attracts females

-"a growl"-monster-like
-still careful- carefully bit him, roughed them up

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The writer uses many linguistic techniques to describe Magne as a burly; powerful; dangerous yet also gentle creature.
.'growling maniacally'
. 'carefully,'
. 'solidity of him'
. 'surge of muscle'

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“Stupid”: the use of this adjective demonstrates that the author wants the reader to think of Magne’s incredible build. It implies that Lary was utterly dazed and unable to act or think clearly as he was stunned by his tremendous weight.

“Surge of muscle”: the noun “surge” suggests that Magne suddenly lunged at Lary forcefully, flattening him down. This further reinforces Magne’s muscular physique and emphasises his impressive and robust strength.

“Marlin spikes”: the use of this simile creates an image of Magne’s sharp and deadly canines in the reader’s mind, which makes him or her sympathise with Lary’s fear of this deadly beast who could easily tear him apart.

“Carefully: the use of the adjective “carefully” is effective as it demonstrates that the author wants the reader to consider how carefully Magne bit Lary’s ear despite his might and power. This shows that Magne is not as aggressive and excitable as the reader may have interpreted him.

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Sounds:

1. clang of a cage door

2. a short, sharp, barking scream

Behaviour:

1. banged his chest - dominance,

2. tore at the grass

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1. surge of muscle

2. the solidity of him

3. marlin spikes

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- a bolt being drawn back
- the clang of a cage door
- a rumbling noise on the concrete
- a short, sharp, barking
scream

BEHAVIOUR; ELIAS
-roughed them up a bit,
-detached the two
screaming baby gorillas,
-roughed them up a bit,
-tore at the grass

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1) surge of muscle
2) solidity of him
3) marlin spikes