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I hate it because it have bad spilling and it doesn’t

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1~cap letters for every begging in the sentence.
2~They also have good punctuations

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1.it would be better if they explain more about th 2 story of being positive at all times

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Glows:
1.have capitalized letters.
2.he has completed sentences
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Glows: 1. Used quotation marks on “Tangerine”. 2. Used examples. Grows:
1. Misspelled success to sucess. 2. Wrote “In this essay, I will explain the importance of having a positive attitude.”

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1 positive attitude

2 they have capital letters

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They could explain more to the two story of being positive all the time

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I think essay … is the best because …

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The whole seant is bad

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Gloss~This passage has correct punctuations and not misspelled word .....and there also explains about why you should have a positive attitude.
Grows ~I think is has to many punctuations and its really not completing a sentence .

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They could explain more to the 2 story of being positive all the time.

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Glows:
1.they have good capital letters.
2.the also have commas.

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1.they have something bad they always write (in) the first sentence

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Glows-there's good Capitals                                P

glows- there's alot  of mixstakes on the spelling

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Glows
1they used complet sentence.

2 They told us why we should have positive attitude.

Grows
1 they could explain more and add more of why

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Glow 1 they have incorrect spelling have good capa

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1:Capitalized beginnings
2:Underlined characters.
Grow
1:They begin with small word and big words.
2:They don’t spell it right.mispelled.

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This passage talks about why you should have a positive attitude even when you have a bad day. And it's a good story with correct spelling (glows)

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Glows:
1)I liked it because is telling us about being positive.

2) also because it has good capital letters.

Glows:

1)they first write little and in the middle they write big

2)the word is really sloppy. And all together.

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Glow:
1. It has good capitalization
2. It has good paragraphs with good punctuation
Grows:
1.It needs to have a few commas
2.it

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Incorrect spelling
The words are sloppy and smudge
2 commas word after word
The words are squished

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Grows: it has paragraphs it's bettere  glows: it has good capitalization.

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Glow:
1.Has complete sentences.
2.Has good punctuations.
Grows:
1.It has some misspelled words.
2.Some letters aren’t capitalized in the beginning of a sentence.

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1.A glow is good punctuation.
2.a glow is complete sentences

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Glow 2 good things that they do is they have complete sentences,and positive things.

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Glow
1.it has a complete sentence.
2. it has a positive attitude.
Grow
1.a few words are spelled incorrectly like success instead of sucess.
2.does not have capital at the beginning of names

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(Glow)-2 things they did right were going back to there go to (“Tangerine”) and it has complete sentences.

(Grows)-some words are spelled

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Glows:
1.Having a positive attitude .
2.he put capital letters in each new sentence.
Grows:
1.words are misspelled.
2.2 paragraphs don’t start with capitalized letters.

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Glows: have  complete sentences
Growing:”TANGERINE” has a complete sentence
They have capital letters in the arothee

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(Glows)
1. it has complete sentence
2.he starts whith capital letters
(Grows)
1. it goes of topic sometimes
2.dose not put captain letter at a name

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Glows:
1.the essay has good punctuation.
2.the person who wrote the essay gave examples of positive attitudes.

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Glows:
1: The writing gives two examples of people being positives

1: And it send a message to be positive.

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1 I think that this essay is the best because they actually rode there story nice and they put questions marks and commas and they wrote there sentence in. A complete sentence

2 and they are quoting the capital letters and the period and they did this story very good and need.

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1the first think I saw in the story is that they wrote there story in a comment sentence and they also had them in a period and they had there letter in capital and quotations mark

2 so the first think they need to worry is capital and quotation

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Glow:1 good thing that they did in the essays as using complete sentences.2Another thing that was good was they used quotation marks.
Grows:1 thing that was bad is that the 1st and the 4th paragraph has lower case i’s.2:In paragraph 2it says”While Paul’s was playing a soccer,match”they put a comma in between soccer and match.

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Glow
1:Having a positive attitude
2:Complete sentence
Grow
1:incorrectly like success instead of sucess.
2:Some are capitalized and lower case