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You can use track changes on Microsoft Word (available on both Mac and Window software – you must have a subscription to use this feature) to edit a document without making any permanent changes.

You can also use track changes on Pages (available on all iPads), but it is less efficient than Microsoft Word.

On Google Drive, you can insert a comment to make suggestions without changing the actual writing. Simply navigate to the 'Insert' menu at the top of the screen, highlight the text you want to comment on, select 'comment' and then 'add comment'.

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Either share your synthesis paragraph with a partner on Google Drive or swap iPads to use Pages. Read your partner's paragraph three times and apply any edits either using track changes on Pages or inserting comments on Google Drive (DO NOT make any changes directly to their writing – only recommendations).

Edit for content

Edit for structure

Edit for mechanics

Use the editing checklist as a guide and add notes into the spaces provided for any addittional suggestions on how they can improve their writing.

Once you are finished, share your edits with your partner and give them minimum three pieces of feedback:
One positive comment
One piece of constructive criticism/one area they can improve on
One positive comment

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Reflect on the feedback your partner has given you on your synthesis paragraph.

Did your partner identify any recurring errors? Are there any specific grammatical issues you struggle with? Do you feel confident structuring your paragraphs with cohesion/clarity? Were you able to use some of the target language discussed in class? What area do you need to focus on the most when editing your writing? What strategies could you use to improve your writing?

Write a short (100–200 words) reflective paragraph on the editing process. You can use this paragraph for this week's reflective journal entry.

Recommended structure:
Outline the experience of peer reviewing and recieving feedback from your classmate
Outline the area(s) you need to improve the most
Outline some strategies you can use to improve your writing