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a lot of content, I think you should cut it down a bit. Some of it was a bit irrelevant. 

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a lot of content, I think you should cut it down a bit. Some of it was a bit irrelevant. 

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It was good, try not to recognise your mistakes, it makes them obvious.
Regards,
Won-choy Dowdle

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Hugh andrew was greatest

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edward was very comanding and didnt let my boi hew get his time to shine smh 🤦

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edward was very comanding and didnt let my boi hew get his time to shine smh 🤦

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use dot points and have more picture, cognitive overload

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use dot points and have more picture, cognitive overload

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Dot points usually needed when presenting

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Dot points usually needed when presenting

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Edward may have hogged the slides and hugh may needed to practice the presentation. but the content is great.

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Maybe even out the speaking between the Hugh and Edward

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try decreasing the information and lenght it was very confusiling

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try decreasing the information and lenght it was very confusiling

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EDWARD SAID 95% OF THE PRESENTATION HOWEVER IT WAS GOOD CONTENT

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put some more diagrams into the slides, good presentation however

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put some more diagrams into the slides, good presentation however

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Good hand gestures and eye contact Edward.

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Good hand gestures and eye contact Edward.

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good info

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Obviously knew a lot about the topic. To many words on each slide though. They just need to few key points in dot point form not full paragraphs.

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Obviously knew a lot about the topic. To many words on each slide though. They just need to few key points in dot point form not full paragraphs.

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A good presentation with lots of information but maybe too much  information.  Try to summarize the information to short bullet points when presenting.