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writing to much. I need help cutting down my words to not make my story super long!

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The story is good and ima get a good grade

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The story is good and ima get a good grade

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-sonny

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using details (onomatopoeia)

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my dialogue

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I wrote a lot and was being descriptive

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my story is very unique

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Maybe to see if I wrote to much, or if i got off task in my writing.

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I'm doing good but I need someone to fix my story and tell me what I need to add and my periods 

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I'm doing good but I need someone to fix my story and tell me what I need to add and my periods 

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Knowing how my character feels about the situation. It's easy to show how she feels.

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-sonny

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finishing it

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speeding up my process

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i dont think i need help

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I am happy with my use of literature and how my story is going so far.

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being unique

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I don't think I will be done in time I still have a lot to type

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i have no idea if the story is any good since i dont know what im doing

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I'm writing to little in each paragraph and i need to make my story more interesting and use better words

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I feel like I've been writing too much. I think I should not add as much because it wastes time, but I also want the reader to understand everything that's happening.

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being descriptive , more time with the assignment

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feel confident because i'm almost finished my climax and i type fast plus this really isn't a hard task

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My whole story i got this

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my comedy in the paragraphs

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I feel confident about finishing

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Feedback

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that i will get a good grade

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- David

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i need help with a lot ah things

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I think i should slow down and add more details

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I feel like my story line is very good. -alicen

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I feel like my story line is very good. -alicen

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feedback

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getting good

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writing the story