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My writing goal today is to finalize my rhetorical part of my essay which I have to change some things based on the feedback I was given. Then when I finish with that I will begin thinking about the critical analysis part and maybe even starting to writing it.

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-Third body paragraph change

-Clean essay

-Title

My goal today is to change my third body paragraph's device to hyperbole. Then to clean up the essay.

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My writing goal for today is to add more transitional words and to finish my essay completely.

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For my writing goal today, I would work on reorganizing my paragraphs by seeing if there are any issues with, Grammer, rhetorical questioning and Critical analysis that I may have missed.

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Alter body paragraphs

Reorganize information to be more choronological

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My writing goal for today is to work on my last paragraph and I also need to make my quotations more clear as well as my essay.

I edit some parts of my 5th and 6th paragraph but I still need to work on them more. I need them to be more clear and more specific

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my goal for today is to find a rhetorical technique that best fits into pathos rather than just using Pathos itself. Also, to integrate one of the methods we discussed in class.

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My goal for today is to finish the last rhetorical technique paragraph and go over a few areas to see if they need to be rewritten to make it more clear.

I was able to clean areas of my essay that needed improvement. I also finished my last paragraph and was able to add some more.

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My goal for today is to review my paragraphs and identify areas for improvement. I have completed revising my claim, but I would like to go over it one more.

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My goal is to to rewrite a few inmy rhetorical essay part and then start on my critical analysis part of my essay and to check parts in my essay that still need a bit of more improvement .

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I’m still revising my draft. So my writing goal for today is to much sure that’s all the way finished or almost all the way finished so I can be where I’m supposed to be.

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Work on my conclusion

work on my title

work on my critical analysis

the goal for today is to work on this three things and see what areas need to be rewritten