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From: Minh Ngoc & Minh Khue | Vinschool The Harmony | 999-698-8484

To: Karren Miller

Manager

Bung Lua - 2468.

Ho Tay, Hanoi

November 14, 2022

Dear Mrs Karren Miller,

We are Minh Khue and Minh Ngoc from class 7B1 Vinschool The Harmony. In our ESL class, we are doing a project about how to improve our local community.

We are living in a wonderful neighbourhood with a lot of green space and clean air. There are even many shops and parks nearby, everything here is built perfectly! However, as time passed, many problems appeared, so we wrote this letter to inform you about some of the problems that may affect the quality of living in the neighbourhood in the future.

To begin with, there is a lot of litter and trash on the streets, and people have even left personal items behind. We would suggest printing off posters and giving them to people living here so they can understand and put the trash in the right place. Also, we might do a project in which we will gather young people in the surrounding area to help pick up the litter.

Secondly, there is a park near our house that is miserable; the grass is overgrown, the trees are not carefully cared for, and the roads are covered with trash,... We would be happy to help clean the park because we thought that the place was the perfect area to go cycling after school and to chill at the weekend.

Lastly, we have noticed that many playgrounds in the neighbourhood are badly damaged. It would be a great idea if we, the students, could come and paint on the benches, and the swing to make it more beautiful.

We are looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Minh Ngoc

Minh Khue

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Dear Sir/Madam,

We are Vinschool Harmony seventh-year students. Our ESL teacher has instructed us to do a project and provide suggestions for enhancing our neighbourhood and so we would like to discuss with you our ideas to improve the neighbourhood around Vinhomes Riverside.

The best thing about living in Vinhomes Riverside is the abundance of plants and flowers, the park and the river, and, of course, the very good weather and clean air, which is very fitting for doing outdoor exercises. But there are some problems that we want to discuss with you to make our neighbourhood more suitable.

In the first place, let's talk about the environment. The environment has gone quite bad. Most people throw garbage and inedible food into the river, which will cause great harm like environmental pollution. Disposal of garbage in the right place also needs to be asked to do so immediately. According to our observations after walking around the Vinhomes area, we noticed that there are still people who are not conscious, throwing garbage illegally, into the lake, grass, and near trees, some people also open the car window and then throw the litter away right out onto the street. That is why I suggest that the management will make laws such as paying fines if they break the rules, and putting up billboards and propaganda to the people so that no one is missed the laws and regulations. new determination. If these are not managed and taken immediately measures, the base condition will be drastically reduced resulting in not many people wanting to buy houses here anymore.

Second, the children also spend a lot of time playing around the neighbourhood, plucking almost all of the plants and flowers. It is not a very big problem but if we all keep ignoring it, it maybe will become a big problem. So on, we think you should add some laws about plucking or cutting plants and flowers.

Last but not least, folks should avoid letting their dogs out unattended when they are not at home since they might get into trouble by biting people. There is also a great likelihood that a dog may be struck by a car, motorcycle, etc. Therefore, keeping the dog indoors while no one is watching is the easiest method to keep it safe from both dogs and people.

All that needs to be said is written above and we are looking forward to hearing from you. If there is anything that was dissatisfying or needs to discuss more, please reply to us soon so we can have a conversation together.

Yours faithfully,

Grade 7 students, Nghi and Huyen.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

We are Le Gia Hung and Tai Khanh from class 7b1 and we are from Vinschool The Harmony. During our ESL period, we discussed improving our neighbourhood and we have some ideas we would like to present to you.

Peacefulness has always been in our neighbourhood. Birds chirping, wind whispering, trees flowing with the wind,... Our neighbourhood has always been so peaceful and tranquil but recently there were changes in our environment due to the newcomers from the big city moving in with us.

First of all, there is a lot of trash on the streets and it has disturbed a lot of people. The trashes did not make our neighbourhood a very welcoming place and many rude people still throw trash out and are not in the bin. Well, we have an excellent solution to save this problem. Basically, we are thinking of creating a charity around our neighborhood and every week on friday, the charity workers and helpers can pick up trash on the floor and we can help spread awareness about this issue.

We are also very concerned about losing the silence among us. For others, that isn’t much of a big deal but for us, we lived here for years, and that is really concerning. Loud parties, loads of cars, and cigarettes are left all over the roads and pathways which annoys pedestrians. Children and older people are affected by those shown by children cries and screaming and we don’t want our neighbourhood turning into an unhappy place for partying purposes.

We would like to discuss with the newcomers and hope we all could bring back the peace to this area. The meeting

We are looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you!

Yours sincerely

Tai Khanh                            le gia hung

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Dear Sir/Madam

We are students from Grade 7 at Vinschool the Harmony and we are writing to you with a request to improve our neighbourhood.

Firstly, we would like to talk to you about the school speed limits because recently we have had some complaints about students almost getting injured by a vehicle. So we are here to talk about the new speed limit which is 15 miles per hour, I think it is a perfect limit because it is slow enough for students to see the car incoming so they can move out of the way.

Secondly, we are thinking that our neighbourhood looks very drab so we are trying to paint many murals on many different kinds of buildings and personally I think it can improve citizens' friendliness and interactions by a lot because different colours can make you feel many different things. The mural can also be painted with luminescent paint so people can see at night if they are lost and the paint can create a beautiful image at night which I think many people will enjoy.

Finally, we would like to plant more trees and flowers if possible because the neighbour has lots of extra fertilizer which I think is good for planting lots of flowers and trees but the only problem is we need a large group of people to water every plant every day so our suggestion is to recruit many people with a little funding from the council to create a beautiful neighbourhood that people can enjoy.

We hope that you can consider all our suggestions fairly and if you have any extra budget for people who can help us plant flowers and trees.

Sincerely

Canh Kien & Gia Hien

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Dear Sir / Madam,
We are grade 7 students from Vinschool The Harmony, and in our English class, we've been requested to write a letter to our community manager to suggest ways to improve our neighbourhood.
We believe that this place is already a wonderful place, with all the needed necessities such as cafes, restaurants, a mall along with entertainments, like parks and an artificial beach, even.
Due to the place being wonderful, many people have came to reside in this place, which is a problem in it's own.
With many people comes many vehicles, yet this place doesn't provide enough space for parking; being the single most prominent concerns we have with this place. When this happens, people would have to resort to parking in the wrong areas, causing major inconveniences, such as the roads being congested or a marked crosswalk being un-crossable due to cars and vehicles covering it; therefore, we think that adding more parking spaces or building another parking garage is a good idea.
The next concern that we have is the midnight market near Vincom. We believe that the new market there does not provide quality food, in addition to the fact that it is also overpriced for what it is, therefore not serving it's original purpose. It is also blocking the roads, including the local bus: making it very inefficient. So we believe that a solution to that is either to replace the food there to something of higher quality or to move it to another place where it does not block the road - a more drastic solution, if it is rendered too much of an inconvenience, is to remove the whole market itself.
Those are our only two major complaint, and we only have a minor complaint left.
As you know, the doors in the place here have an advanced lock using password instead of the traditional lock, and the problem stems from that.
After the password is entered, sometimes a glitch would occur where the enter button does not work; the only way to solve this problem is to either wait it out, usually taking about a few minutes or to intensely click the buttons until a beeping noise appears. Then, wait for a few seconds then you can use it normally. Both of these options are time-consuming and inconvenient, therefore we think that taking a look at it and fixing the error would be nice. If not, then handing out to every resident a leaflet or an instruction book on how to use the lock (for example, changing the password,...) would be a great idea too.
That is all of our recommendations, and we look forward to hearing from you and have these changes implemented.

Yours sincerely,

Grade 7 students

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Nhat Quang, a student of Vinschool Harmony's high school. Our neighbourhood is really good but it still have some problems. The idea that I want our neighbourhood to do for improving our neighbourhood is using the community activities building as the main holder of community events.

Currently, when I am writing this letter, the building is still being used as a storage place for waste construction materials, which is a pity because building this community building cost a lot of money and time but we don’t use this gorgeous building for anything. Instead, we use it for storing waste construction materials which is a waste of resources because this building use could be really good for holding big community events, ceremony and announcements. Last but not least , we could use this building as a symbol of the area and unite people in the community together in the area's events.

Another idea that I want to talk about is that we could clean the area border’s river because there are many construction sites are near the river and they discharge a lot of toxic chemicals into the river which make it unclean and sometimes in some places, it smells really bad. That’s why I request we should mobilize publics workers to clean the river . Finally, I think we should remind the construction site owners to not discharge wastes into the river to keep the river more clean.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you

Best regards

Nhat Quang

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a year 7 student at Vinschool The Harmony and in my ESL class at school, I am currently being asked by my teachers to do a project about our community. So that is why today, I am writing this letter to you to suggest some ideas that you can maybe use to improve our neighbourhood.

For me, Vinhomes Riverside is a peaceful and beautiful community where you can really relax your mind and be one with nature. It has everything that you would need such as a shopping mall, restaurants, and swimming pools,... However, there are still some problems that exist in the community.

The first problem that I want to mention is that there are not many places where you can park your vehicles. This leads to many inconveniences such as the fact that people have to park in the walking lane,...  An example of this could be that my parents sometimes have to park far away from our houses as there are no spaces for parking. This problem has now worsened as more people start moving into our community. So that’s why I think that we should create more spaces where people can park their vehicles to prevent further inconveniences.

The next problem that I want to mention is security concerns as there are recently some cases in our community where people’s valuable possessions are being stolen by thieves outside of Vinhomes. I think that this is a serious problem as it can cause many serious consequences, far worse than just losing money. So that is why I think that we should increase our security by hiring more guards as well as installing more cameras to have better control of our community. We should also raise awareness about the problem so that people can be more careful about protecting their possessions and safety.

My last idea is that we should help clean our river and prevents it from being polluted. Recently, I have seen that the river has been heavily damaged due to the construction of new houses. There are also some cases in which people in our community started dumping toxic substances into the river, polluting the river, which leads to the death of many fishes. For this problem, I think that we should raise people's awareness about the problem so that they would have a better understanding. We should also organise communal events in which people in our community come together and help clean up the river.

I am looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours sincerely,

Quang Minh

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Dear Sir/Madam

We are Minh Khue and Minh Ngoc from class 7B1 Vinschool The Harmony. In our ESL class, we are doing a project about how to improve our local community.

We are living in a wonderful neighbourhood with a lot of green space and clean air. There are even many shops and parks nearby, everything here is built perfectly! However, as time passed, many problems had appear.

Firstly, there are many of litter and trash on the streets and people even left their personal things behind. We would suggest printing off posters and giving them to people living here so they can understand and put the trash in the right place. Secondly, there is a park near our house which is miserable, the grass is overgrown, the trees are not carefully cared for, the roads are covered with trash,... We would be happy to help clean the park because we thought that the place is the perfect area to go cycling after school and to chill at the weekend. Lastly, we have noticed that many playgrounds in the neighbourhood is badly damaged. It would be a great idea if we, the students can come and paint on the benches, and the swing to make it more beautiful.

We are looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Minh Ngoc, Minh Khue

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Dear Mr Hải,

I am Phạm Mạnh Đức, a seventh-grade student of Vinschool the Harmony and for our ESL class, I have been given a task to think of some ways to improve our neighbourhood; so today, I am writing this letter to inform you of some of the most prominent problems that our neighbourhood is currently facing, and also to suggest some ways that we can counter them, in my personal opinion.

As a resident of the Gia Thuỵ neighbourhood, I can confidently say that our neighbourhood is a wonderful place to live in, it is well known to be quite lively with lots of fun and exciting activities, thriving businesses, and a large and proud local population; nonetheless, we are prone to having some very prominent issues in our neighbourhood.

Our neighbourhood is a small place, but since it provides so many great living opportunities, it attracts many residents, making it quite crowded; this causes us to lack any meaningful amount of public space. The lack of public space significantly limits the number of public activities that residents may participate in while making many people resort to participating in activities at unfit and dangerous locations. One thing that we could do is to get rid of street vendors, street vendors are one of the significant reasons why we have very limited public spaces, they often take up large portions of the free space. Another way is to build more public spaces, there was once a large project in our area but it was halted due to lack of funds, so one of my suggestions is to make it a public project, with help and funding from both the government and the people of the neighbourhood.

We also have a big problem with security, alcoholics, drug addicts and criminals often roam our area; which causes the rate of theft, burglary, abuse and harassment to be astonishingly high. The root cause for this is the current law enforcement in the area, they often take bribes, engage in misconduct and generally are uninterested in carrying out their duties.  However, these issues could be easily fixed by reforming and increasing law enforcement, through stricter rules and regulations these matters could be fixed in matters of months. Otherwise, public support programs could also be a great way to address these problems, offering help and support to these individuals especially works great in conjunction with new, increased and reformed law enforcement.

Last but not least, we would also like to suggest some public activities to furthermore increase the unity of our neighbourhood with even larger and more frequent activities. For example, some of these activities might just be small and simple activities like cleaning up the streets and planting trees or larger events like concerts, sports events, fairs, etc…

That is all of my recommendations, for now, I hope that some of these suggestions will be implemented; I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Phạm Mạnh Đức.

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Dear Sir/Madam

We are Anh Tâm and Vân Anh, we live in Vinhome. We have some problems in Vinhome that we want to share with you, maybe you could fix some of the issues below.

First, there is too much light on the road. Second, the road is way too small and people keep parking randomly. Third, kids in the neighborhood are making too much noise. And the last thing is so many guys' car throttle near the house.

We also have some ideas about what you should do to solve these problems because they annoyed us and the other people too. When people park randomly, you should make rules for people to park in front of their house instead of the other's house. You should also make the road bigger. If children make noise, you guys can also make rules to not let children shout in the street, and don’t make way too much noise to not interrupt the other's work. You should build less light on the road to save energy and electricity too.

We hope you guys can see this and maybe fix some of the problems, we know it's not easy to just change it immediately but I hope you guys would try to solve the problems to make Vinhomes a better place.

We are waiting for your reply, have a nice day sir/madam.

Yours faithfully

Van Anh and Anh Tam

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am a grade 7 student from Vinschool. In our ESL class, I was asked to do a project where I have to come up with ideas that will improve our neighborhood.

My neighborhood is a peaceful and safe one. It is very big. In my neighborhood, there are lots of houses and you can chill and relax there or play in the playground. However, there are some side effects to this.

Firstly, since there are a lot of houses and it is very big. There are lots of trash around the neighborhood and it disturb and made people annoyed. Trashes made our neighborhood worse and and not very welcoming. I have an idea that we post posters and leaflets about throwing trash into the trash can, it will make the neighborhood better.

If you have anything tell me or any other ideas, contact me and I may have a conversation with you.

I look forward to hearing from you
Sincerely,
Grade 7 student

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Dear Mr. Dung,

I am a seven grader at Vinschool. In my English class, I’m doing a project about the local community. I am being asked to come up with ideas to improve the neighborhood.

For me, our neighborhood is a busy, lively neighborhood with many businesses, restaurants, and other places you can buy clothes, and food. However, this has many side effects.

First, I want to mention that there are too few parking spaces. This led to unwanted things such as cars parking on the side of the street. An example of this is I have to ride ten blocks away from my house just to park it. This situation keeps getting worsen so that’s why we should increase the parking space available.

The next concern is stray animals just roaming around freely. Straying animals can cause serious consequences like spreading diseases, and stealing people's food,... We should encourage people to adopt them and we can tell people not to give them food so they will leave.

Lastly, I think we should make the street wider so that people can move around easier and faster. People won't complain about they are late to work because of bad traffic.

I hope these problems will change soon so we will have an even better neighborhood.

Your sincerely,

Nguyen Duy Tuan

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm a 7th-grade student at Vinschool harmony and our ESL teacher just gave me a new project about improving our local community.

My neighbourhood has a lot of trees, flowers, and even playgrounds and parks. There are some shops and markets, it’s great but still has some problems.

First, the park has some litter because there aren't enough trash cans around so I want to ask the park to put more trash cans. Second, at midnight I still can hear music and very loud sound in my neighbourhood. I decide to make some posters to post on the wall and on social media.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
Thanh Thanh

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Today is November 14 2022. We are grade 7 students at Vinschool, and we are doing an English project on the local community. We are being asked to come up with ideas to improve our neighbourhood.
The neighbourhood is always full of people and very lively. The traffic is no need to be worried of, security is amazingly organized, there are a lot of playgrounds around the area. The streets are always establishing new shop, restaurants, events, cafes. But there are still problems littering around our area.
People in our area do care about nature, they have been growing more trees, creating new eco-events, and I haven't seen any trash leaping around the streets in a while. Even though, the amount of water polutions released by restaurants are still thriving, and new restaurants are moving in. We would like to create a new event, not just collecting litter, but also making sure that the amount of polution is going down.
The next problem is the pets being released in the area freely. We ourself have received complaints about pets running free in the area and damaging their properties. To solve this problem and avoid being offensive to animal lovers, we will not hang up posters and automaticly make their pets looks like the danger, we'll put up a poster saying that leashing your pets will be a win/win. Your pets can attack other peoples, scare them, damage things. On the other hand the can be kinapped too. So I think that's the best reason to leash them.
After all, the area we are living in is still great perfection. But please, considered taking a while to think about our request. We're looking forward to hear from you.

Sincerely
Thu Anh and Chau Anh

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14/11/2022/I'm a Grade 7 student in Vinschool the harmony and I  live in Eco park with my family which is very far from school and I have to take car to school with me and my sisters friends and I think that its good because we live far like 25 minutes  away from school and that's not good because it will cause a lot of pollution  and a lot of smoke in the air I also notice that people burn a lot of plastic and I think that's not good because there will be a lot of pollution in the air and that's not good also I think Eco park should have more playgrounds for kids to play because there's not a lot of playgrounds and I think that's not good because kids love to play and have fun . also I think in my opinion that there should be less power cuts because when it gets dark you cant see and that's not nice right I mean seriously its just not good but its fine during the day like that's fine but not when its getting dark other wise you cant see a thing and you cant see where you are going or stepping that's kind of scary I'm not gonna lie and I'm not joking its crazy how much power cuts happen sometimes. also i forgot to say that i think that if we can do something we might help other people . I will be looking forward to your reply  i hope that we can stop this issue that is happening at the moment and help change ecopark a bit and make it a better place to live and have fun i hope this letter will help change the way ecopark its and make it more nice to live  and i think that if we can do something about thes issues would be amazing  and might help bring more people to ecopark  and live there
sincerely ,

Martha

From vinschool the harmony secondary school and high school

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Monday, 14th of November

Vinhomes Riverside

Long Bien, Hanoi

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a year 7 student at Vinschool The Harmony and in my ESL class at school, I am currently being asked by my teachers to do a project about our community. So that is why today, I am writing this letter to you to propose some ideas that you can maybe use to improve our overall community.

For me, Vinhomes Riverside is a peaceful and beautiful community where you can really relax your mind and be one with nature. It has everything that you would need such as a shopping mall, restaurants, and swimming pools,... However, there are still some problems that lie in the community.

The first problem that I want to mention is that there are not many places where you can park your vehicles. This leads to many inconveniences such as the fact that people have to park in the walking lane,...  An example of this could be that my parents sometimes have to park far away from our houses as there are no spaces for parking. This problem has now worsened as more people start moving into our community. So that’s why I think that we should create more spaces where people can park their vehicles to prevent further difficulties.

The next problem that I want to mention is security concerns as there are recently some cases in our community where people’s valuable possessions are being stolen by thieves outside of Vinhomes. I think that this is a serious problem as it can cause many serious consequences, far worse than just losing money. So that’s why I think that we should increase our security by hiring more guards as well as installing more cameras to have better control of our community. We should also raise awareness about the problem so that people can be more careful about protecting their possessions and safety.

My last idea is that we should help clean our river and prevents it from being polluted. Recently, I have seen that the river has been heavily damaged due to the construction of new houses. There are also some cases in which people in our community started dumping toxic substances into the river, polluting the river, which leads to the death of many fishes. For this problem, I think that we should raise people's awareness about the problem so that they would have a better understanding. We should also organise communal events in which people in our community come together and help clean up the river.

I am looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours sincerely,

Quang Minh

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from: Block 69 st. Boosaiye N Dek
to: Block 34 st. Sleay

6th of September, 2022

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are Le Gia Hung and Tai Khanh from class 7b1 and we are from Vinschool The Harmony. During our ESL period, we discussed improving our neighbourhood and we have some ideas we would like to present to you.

Peacefulness has always been in our neighbourhood. Birds chirping, wind whispering, trees flowing with the wind,... Our neighbourhood has always been so peaceful and tranquil but recently there were changes in our environment due to the newcomers from the big city moving in with us.

First of all, there is a lot of trash on the streets and it has disturbed a lot of people. The trashes did not make our neighbourhood a very welcoming place and many rude people still throw trash out and are not in the bin. Well, we have an excellent solution to save this problem. Basically, we are thinking of creating a charity around our neighbourhood and every week on Friday, the charity workers and helpers can pick up trash on the floor and we can help spread awareness about this issue.

We are also very concerned about losing the silence among us. For others, that isn’t much of a big deal but for us, we lived here for years, and that is really concerning. Loud parties, loads of cars, and cigarettes are left all over the roads and pathways which annoys pedestrians. Children and older people are affected by those shown by children's cries and scream and we don’t want our neighbourhood turning into an unhappy place for partying purposes.

We would like to hold a meeting to discuss this problem with the newcomers and hope we all could bring back peace to this area. Please arrange a convenient time for us and the newcomers. We suggest holding the meeting in the centre block where everyone has access but you could change the address if there’s a more suitable place.

We are looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Tai Khanh

Le gia hung

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14th of November, 2022

Dear Mr Hải,

I am Phạm Mạnh Đức, a seventh-grade student of Vinschool the Harmony and for our ESL class, I have been given a task to think of some ways to improve our neighbourhood; so today, I am writing this letter to inform you of some of the most prominent problems that our neighbourhood is currently facing, and also to suggest some ways that we can counter them, in my personal opinion.

As a resident of the Gia Thuỵ neighbourhood, I can confidently say that our neighbourhood is a wonderful place to live in, it is well known to be quite lively with lots of fun and exciting activities, thriving businesses, and a large and proud local population; nonetheless, we are prone to having some very prominent issues in our neighbourhood.

Our neighbourhood is a small place, but since it provides so many great living opportunities, it attracts many residents, making it quite crowded; this causes us to lack any meaningful amount of public space. The lack of public space significantly limits the number of public activities that residents may participate in while making many people resort to participating in activities at unfit and dangerous locations. One thing that we could do is to get rid of street vendors, street vendors are one of the significant reasons why we have very limited public spaces, they often take up large portions of the free space. Another way is to build more public spaces. There was once a large project in our area but it was halted due to lack of funds, so one of my suggestions is to make it a public project, with help and funding from both the government and the people of the neighbourhood.

We also have a big problem with security, alcoholics, drug addicts and criminals often roam our area; which causes the rate of theft, burglary, abuse and harassment to be astonishingly high. The root cause for this is the current law enforcement in the area, they often take bribes, engage in misconduct and generally are uninterested in carrying out their duties.  However, these issues could be easily fixed by reforming and increasing law enforcement, through stricter rules and regulations these matters could be fixed in matters of months. Otherwise, public support programs could also be a great way to address these problems, offering help and support to these individuals especially works great in conjunction with new, increased and reformed law enforcement.

Last but not least, we would also like to suggest some public activities to furthermore increase the unity of our neighbourhood with even larger and more frequent activities. For example, some of these activities might just be small and simple activities like cleaning up the streets and planting trees or larger events like concerts, sports events, fairs, etc…

That is all of my recommendations, for now.  I hope that some of these suggestions will be implemented; I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Phạm Mạnh Đức.

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14th of November, 2022

Dear Sir / Madam,

We are grade 7 students from Vinschool The Harmony, and in our English class, we've been requested to write a letter to our community manager to suggest ways to improve our neighbourhood - therefore, we are writing this letter in order to suggest different ways to improve the neighbourhood we live in. In total, we have three concerns we would like to address, in order of the most major issue to the smaller inconvenience.

Currently, we believe that this place is already a wonderful place, with all the needed necessities such as cafes, restaurants, a mall along with entertainments, like parks and an artificial beach, even.

Due to the place being simply marvelous, many people have came to reside in this place, which is a problem in it's own.
With many people comes many vehicles, yet this place does not provide enough space for parking; this is the single most prominent concerns we have with this place. When this happens, people would have to resort to parking in the wrong areas, causing major inconveniences, such as the roads being congested or a marked crosswalk being un-crossable due to cars and vehicles covering it, or resulting in the car being locked; therefore, we think that adding more parking spaces or building another parking garage is a good idea.

The next concern that we have is the midnight market near Vincom Mega Mall. We believe that the new market there does not provide quality food, in addition to the fact that it is also overpriced for what it is, therefore not serving it's original purpose. It is also blocking the roads, including the local bus: making it very inefficient. So we believe that a solution to that is either to replace the food there to something of higher quality or to move it to another place where it does not block the road - a more drastic solution, if it is rendered too much of an inconvenience, is to remove the whole market itself.

Those are our only two major complaint, and we only have a minor complaint left.

As you know, the doors in the place here have an advanced lock using password instead of the traditional lock, and the problem stems from that.
After the password is entered, sometimes a glitch would occur where the enter button does not work; the only way to solve this problem is to either wait it out, usually taking about a few minutes or to intensely click the buttons until a beeping noise appears. Then, wait for a few seconds then you can use it normally. Both of these options are time-consuming and inconvenient, therefore we think that taking a look at it and fixing the error would be nice. If not, then handing out to every resident a leaflet or an instruction book on how to use the lock (for example, changing the password,...) would be a great idea too.

That is all of our recommendations in hopes of improving this lovely neighbourhood. We hope that these changes can be of help or be implemented and we look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Grade 7 students

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From: Vinhome Symphony/Northern Diamond
To: Where do you live.

November 14, 2022

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are grade 7 students at Vinschool. We live in Vinhomes and Northern Diamond. And we are doing an English project on the local community. We are being asked to come up with ideas to improve our neighbourhood.

First of all, the neighbourhood is always full of people and very lively. The traffic is no need to be worried about, security is amazingly organized, and there are a lot of playgrounds around the area. The streets are always establishing new shops, restaurants, events, and cafes. But there are still problems littering around our area.

People in our area value nature a lot. They have been growing more trees and creating new eco-events, and I haven't seen any trash leaping around the streets in a while. Even though the number of water pollutions released by restaurants is still thriving, and new restaurants are moving in. We would like to create a new event, not just collecting litter, but also making sure that the amount of pollution is going down.

Our next concern is pets being released in the area freely. We have received complaints about pets running free in the area and damaging their properties. To solve this problem and avoid being offensive to animal lovers, we will not hang posters and automatically make their pets look like a danger. We'll put up a sign saying that leashing your pets will be a win/win since your pets can attack other people, scare them and damage things. On the other hand, they can be kidnapped too. So I think that's the best reason to leash them.

After all, the area we are living in is still great perfection. But please, consider taking a while to think about our request. We're looking forward to hear from you.

Sincerely

Thu Anh and Chau Anh

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Date: November 14th, 2022

From: Nhat Linh and Bao Nam

To: Mr Vuong

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are students from grade 7 at Vinschool the Harmony and we are currently in an English class,  we would like to recommend some changes that could help the community out, it would be great if you could apply this, thank you.

We moved to Vinhomes Ocean Park quite a while now and we noticed something that we do not like is the fact that you can not go into the inside area like some buildings are covering that place. You have to take the path in, so the point we are making is there are markets in there, mini markets and if we want to go there to buy drinks and snacks, some minor stuff that doesn’t take much time, and if we went there by vehicles, we have to go down the garage, park there, go up again, buy the things that are supposed to take 1 minute, when done, we have to go down again, take our vehicle, and then go up and go back to our home. The change we would like to make is we can go in without parking our vehicles in the garage because it is inconvenient and takes so much time. We think that if the change was done then people will not waste their time like before.

The second thing is some buildings are currently being built and there are very annoying construction noises so can you add more workers so that the building can be built faster and less noise that will affect the people living there. Every day, I went out of my house and three buildings are currently being built, the noise is so loud I can still hear it from my house. I can hear many complaints about the noise, that is why I think the people there do not like it much. But we are not concerned about it much now because it has been a long time since the building was built and all of them are nearly done now which means less noise. The situation is better now so we don’t need to worry about that.

The last thing I want to mention is that people are parking on the road. There are so many cars that are on the road which leads to some vehicles being hard to go through the areas. We think that the reason is that those people are lazy and don’t want to park in the garage, cars are different than motorbikes because you don’t go shopping in cars or just go to a local store so near to your house that you can walk. So we want to improve that situation by banning any cars to park up there except emergency vehicles. I recently noticed that some cars are locked so that means that you have been working on it.

That is it, we are very thankful for your time reading this, better if you respond to us.

Yours sincerely,

Nhat Linh and Bao Nam

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14/11/2022
From: Nguyệt Quế 22, Vinhomes Harmony
To: Vinhomes Harmony Manager
Nguyệt Quế 20, 36B

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Nhat Quang, a student of Vinschool Harmony's high school. In our ESL class, we are given the task to make an idea to improve your neighbourhood by sendding a letter to the neighourhood council. That's why today I'm writing this letter to request my idea for the neighbourhood to be better.

The first idea is that I want our neighbourhood to use the community activities building as the main holder of the loacal area's events. Currently, when I am writing this letter, the building is still being used as a storage place for waste construction materials, which is a pity because building this community building cost a lot of money and time but we don’t use this gorgeous building for anything. Instead, we use it for storing waste construction materials which is a waste of resources because this building use could be really good for holding big community events, ceremony and announcements. Last but not least , we could use this building as a symbol of the area and unite people in the community together in the area's events.

The other idea that I want to talk about is that we should clean the area border’s river because there are many construction sites are near the river and they discharge a lot of toxic chemicals into the river which make it unclean and sometimes in some places, it smells really bad. That’s why I think we should mobilize publics workers to clean the river . Finally, I think we should remind the construction site owners to not discharge wastes into the river to keep the river more clean.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you

Yours sincerely

Nhat Quang

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November 14th 2022

Dear Sir/Madam

We are Anh Tâm and Vân Anh, we live in Vinhomes. We have some problems in Vinhomes that we want to share with you, maybe you could fix some of the issues below.

Firstly, there is too much light on the road. Next, the road is way too small and people keep parking randomly. Third, kids in the neighborhood are making too much noise. And the last thing is so many guys' car throttle near the house.

We also have some ideas about what you should do to solve these problems because they really annoyed us and the other people too. When people park randomly, you should make rules for people to park in front of their house instead of the other's house. You should also make the road bigger. If children make noise, you guys can create a new rule to not let children shout in the street, and don’t make way too much noise to not interrupt the other's work. You should build less light on the road to save energy and electricity too.

We hope you guys can see this and maybe fix some of the problems, we know it's not easy to just change it immediately but I hope you guys would try to solve the problems to make Vinhomes a better place.

We are waiting for your reply, have a nice day sir/madam.

Yours Sincerely,

Vân Anh and Anh Tâm

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From: 29a Dang Thai Mai
To: 38 Dang Thai Mai

11th of November, 2022

Dear Mr. Dung,

I am a seven grader at Vinschool. I am doing a project about the local community in my English class. I came up with ideas to improve the neighborhood.

For me, our neighborhood is a busy, lively neighborhood with many businesses, restaurants, and other places you can buy food. However, this has many side effects.

First, I want to mention that there are too few parking spaces. It can lead to unwanted things such as cars parking on the side of the street. An example could be me having to ride ten blocks from my house to park it. This situation keeps getting worsen so that is why we should increase the parking space available.

The next concern is stray animals just roaming around freely. Straying animals can cause severe consequences like spreading sickness; stealing people's belongings. We should encourage people to adopt them. We can also tell people not to give them food so they will leave.

Lastly, we should make the street wider so people can move around effortlessly and faster. People won't complain about being late to work because of bad traffic.

I hope these problems will change soon so we will have an even better neighborhood.

Your Sincerely,
Nguyen Duy Tuan

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From: 333 Vinhomes Riverside, Long Bien, Ha Noi.
To:  4444 st. Columbus, Ohio.

Monday, 14th of November 2022.

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are seventh-year Vinschool Harmony students. We are here to share with you our proposals for boosting the area surrounding Vinhomes Riverside since our ESL instructor asked us to complete a project and provide recommendations for improving our neighbourhood.

Living at Vinhomes Riverside has several benefits, including an abundance of trees, flowers, parks, and rivers, as well as excellent weather and pure air, which are ideal for exercising outdoors. But there are certain issues that we need to talk about with you in order to improve our neighbourhood.

In the first place, let's talk about the environment. The environment has gone quite bad. Most people throw garbage and inedible food into the river, which will cause great harm like environmental pollution. Disposal of garbage in the right place also needs to be asked to do so immediately. According to our observations after walking around the Vinhomes area, we noticed that there are still people who are not conscious, throwing garbage illegally, into the lake, grass, and near trees, some people also open the car window and then throw the litter away right out into the street. That is why I suggest that the management will make laws such as paying fines if they break the rules, and putting up billboards and propaganda to the people so that no one is missed the laws, regulations and the new determination. If these are not managed and taken immediately measures, the base condition will be drastically reduced resulting in not many people wanting to buy houses here anymore.

Second, the children also spend a lot of time playing around the neighbourhood, plucking almost all of the plants and flowers. It is not a very big problem but if we all keep ignoring it, it maybe will become a big problem. So on, we think you should add some laws about plucking or cutting plants and flowers.

Last but not least, folks should avoid letting their dogs out unattended when they are not at home since they might get into trouble by biting people. There is also a great likelihood that a dog may be struck by a car, motorcycle, etc. Therefore, keeping the dog indoors while no one is watching is the easiest method to keep it safe from both dogs and people.

All that needs to be said is written above and we are looking forward to hearing from you. If there is anything that was dissatisfying or needs to discuss more, please reply to us soon so we can have a conversation together.

Yours faithfully,

Le Phuong Nghi

Duong Thanh Huyen

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Dear Sir/Madam,

We are students from grade 7 at Vinschool the Harmony and we are currently in an English class we would like to recommend some changes that could help the community out, it would be great if you could apply this, thank you.

We moved to Vinhomes Ocean Park quite a while now and we noticed something that we do not like is the fact that you can not go into the inside area like some buildings are covering that place. You have to take the path in, so the point we are making is there are markets in there, mini markets and if we want to go there to buy drinks and snacks, some minor stuff that doesn’t take much time, and if we went there by vehicles, we have to go down the garage, park there, go up again, buy the things that are supposed to take 1 minute, when done, we have to go down again, take our vehicle, and then go up and go back to our home. The change we would like to make is we can go in without parking our vehicles in the garage because it is inconvenient and takes so much time.

The second thing is some buildings are currently being built and there are very annoying construction noises so can you add more workers so that the building can be built faster and less noise that will affect the people living there. Every day, I went out of my house and three buildings are currently being built, the noise is so loud I can still hear it from my house. I can hear many complaints about the noise, that is why I think the people there do not like it much. But we are not concerned about it much now because it has been a long time since the building was built and all of them are nearly done now which means less noise.

The last thing I want to mention is that people are parking on the road. There are so many cars that are on the road which leads to some vehicles being hard to go through the areas. We think that the reason is that those people are lazy and don’t want to park in the garage, cars are different than motorbikes because you don’t go shopping in cars or just go to a local store so near to your house that you can walk. So we want to improve that situation by banning any cars to park up there except emergency vehicles.

That is it, we are very thankful for your time reading this, better if you respond to us.

Sincerely,

Nhat Linh, Bao Nam

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14/11/2022
From: Nguyen Vu, a 7th-grade student
To: Mr Pham Nhat Vuong, CEO of Vingroup

Dear Sir,

I am a 7th-grade student and our class is doing an ESL project on how to improve our area of living, which is Vinhomes. I am writing this letter to you, to show you our ideas to help this place become better than before.

Overall, Vinhomes is a great neighbourhood, with lots of useful spaces such as restaurants, shops and entertainment areas. It is near Aeon, which is a big shopping mall. While being far away from the centre of Hanoi, there are lots of bridges connecting Long Bien, which is where Vinhomes is in, to the centre of Hanoi. Because it is far away from the urban areas, it is quiet here, with few loud noises from vehicles and construction, with meowing and barking noises of animals. But sometimes, that is not so good.

The first problem I encounter while living here is being too quiet. I once lived in Times City, which is also a living area built by your company, instead of focusing on high-priced mansions, focus on medium-priced apartments instead, which were more purchasable. Because of that reason, there are much more people living in Times City compared to Vinhomes and there are more community events, which makes the city more lively. To counter this, I would suggest hosting more events or making the events bigger, so it would pull in more people from different places of Vinhomes such as Harmony and Symphony.

Travelling through the different parts of Vinhomes is fine, but for newcomers, it may be confusing because of so many areas of the city there are. I liked the idea of Vinbus, the idea of an eco-friendly electricity-based system of buses was creative, but those only travelled through urban areas. I highly recommend making another system like that, but with smaller vehicles and only travel in different areas of the cities that you made.

Most of the people living in Vinhomes have cars, but most of them also change their garage into another part of the living room. Because of this, they put their cars onto the sidewalk, or even the roads, so people have a hard time walking or biking around areas. My idea for a solution is to make a public garage.

These are only my opinions, and you should take them with a grain of salt. But I will heavily thank you if you consider or use these ideas. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Nguyen Vu

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FINAL LETTER

From: Canh Kien and Gia Hien
Date: 14 November 2022
Subject: Neighbourhood improvement
To: Vinhome council

Dear Sir/Madam

We are students from Grade 7 at Vinschool the Harmony and we are writing to you with a request to improve our neighbourhood.

Firstly, we would like to talk to you about the school speed limits because recently we have had some complaints about students almost getting injured by a vehicle. So we are here to talk about the new speed limit which is 15 miles per hour, I think it is a perfect limit because it is slow enough for students to see the car incoming so they can move out of the way.

Secondly, we are thinking that our neighbourhood looks very drab so we are trying to paint many murals on many different kinds of buildings and personally I think it can improve citizens' friendliness and interactions by a lot because different colours can make you feel many different things. The mural can also be painted with luminescent paint so people can see at night if they are lost and the paint can create a beautiful image at night which I think many people will enjoy.

Finally, we would like to plant more trees and flowers if possible because the neighbour has lots of extra fertilizer which I think is good for planting lots of flowers and trees but the only problem is we need a large group of people to water every plant every day so our suggestion is to recruit many people with a little funding from the council to create a beautiful neighbourhood that people can enjoy.

We hope that you can consider all our suggestions fairly and if you have any extra budget for people who can help us plant flowers and trees.

Sincerely

Canh Kien & Gia Hien

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From: 333 st. Tè tè tè
To: 666 st. Bermuda

November 14th 2022

Dear Sir/Madam

I am Hoàng Phương Nhi, my family have lived in Vinhome since 2012 now and it is fantastic here but I have some problems that I would like you to improve so Vinhomes Riverside will be a better community for every citizen here.

I only have a few issues and the first is that when I walk my dog around, I keep seeing dogs from other houses running and playing around without muzzles and owners looking after them. Second, I don't like the way a lot of racing boys appear here to race illegally at night. These are both severe problems for us and it has been annoying to everyone living here.

My dog is quite small and weak so he can easily get bitten by another dog. We have met a lot of dogs walking around the park with no owner watching makes our walking feel unsafe so I would like you guys to think more carefully about this problem and completely get rid of this so there will be no dog bite incident ever again.

Some teenagers race illegally, they always go in a group and they are noisy and they can cause car accidents, no one should race here until they have permission so please talk to the police about this, it is dangerous for us and also the teenagers themselves.

I hope you respond to me as soon as possible, thank you very much and have a good day.

Yours Sincerely,

Phương Nhi