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The Journey Home is the delightful story of friendship and self-discovery that I am examining today. It follows Sarah, the main character, as she sets out on a journey to rediscover her heritage. Each scenario in the novel is vividly described, highlighting the story's exquisite writing. The book's emotional depth is among its greatest features. The characters are likeable, and their development as individuals throughout the narrative is heartwarming and inspirational. The captivating narrative, which holds the reader's interest throughout, is another excellent feature.

A drawback is that some parts, particularly the middle ones where the tempo slows down, have a tendency to drag a little. This might put off readers who would rather read a story that moves more quickly. The Journey Home is a really touching novel that makes an impact even with this small fault.

To everybody who appreciates character-driven novels with deep issues, I would heartily suggest this book. It is definitely worthwhile to read, especially for individuals who value thoughtful and introspective literature, because of its compelling plot and powerful emotional impact.

Score: 13/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well-written review, dear Ace. You can provide a strong sense and theme of the book. You are able to capture the readers' attention. Your choice of words are excellent. There is only one mistake. Please check it in the highlighted area. Overall, good job!

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My favorite TV show is called Queen of Tears, a Korean drama I watch on a Telegram channel that airs on Saturdays and Sundays. Now the drama has been finished for a long time, but it’s still in my heart. It’s a romantic comedy that focuses on the problems between a husband and wife after marriage, along with other storylines. They got married because they loved each other, but their marriage didn’t turn out as they expected. The wife is stubborn, while the husband is cute and handsome.

I’m excited to see what happens next, but I won’t spoil anything! I love this show because the actors' visuals and performances are amazing. Their chemistry is super cute, and I love everything about this drama, the intro, the cinematography, the cast, the storyline, everything is perfect. I highly recommend to watch it. You won’t regret it!

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Great job, dear Hsu Yati. Your review can capture the emotional impact of a K-drama, particularly when the cast and the plot resonate with the audience. It expresses a strong emotional connection to the drama, making it clear why it is your favourite. I have seen your enthusiasm and personal touch in your review. You can mention a basic summary of the whole story which is quite intriguing for the readers. The review perfectly ends with a confident recommendation that encourages the audience/ readers to watch it. However, your review would be more convincing if you added more specific information. Overall, I do appreciate your efforts. Please keep it up!

17/ 20 Marks

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Normally, I don't prefer to watch movie series because it takes long hours to reach the climax or to finish. However, one of my friends recommended me an entertaining series to watch when I felt desperately stressed from my work. It was a comedy sitcom, in which the story of six friends (who) were working and living in New York City to follow their passions and dreams. It was directed for ten years and a season took a year to be released.

There were six main leads Monica, Chandler Bing, Joey, Ross, Rachel, and Phoebe and they all had prominent personalities and abilities in their respective ways. None of the characters were not overacting as they were naturally performing like ordinary working youths. The story baseline was comical and moving and every season maintained a high quality of scenes. Each of the characters was electrifying and they could develop their roles incredibly throughout ten seasons.

One of my complaints is that as a sitcom it took a couple of nights to complete a season consisting of ten episodes. If you enjoy binge-watching, you will definitely try to finish within a few days as it was quite gripping. Next, I don’t genuinely satisfy the ending in which they were separated to begin a new chapter in their careers despite a happy ending.

To sum up, “Friends” achieved remarkable success and was the most eminent sitcom of the century. You will undoubtedly perceive a mix of sentimental emotions in the range of love, life, and friendships.

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

What an intriguing sitcom review, dear Ma Yamin. Your review reflects strong emotions and a genuine connection to the theme of the sitcom. I have noticed your enthusiasm and personal touch in your review. You can mention a basic summary of the plot which is quite fascinating for the readers. Your choice of words for the review is suitable which can enhance the readers' comprehension and see in their minds' eyes vividly. However, there are some mistakes in your review. Please check them in the highlighted areas. Overall, the review demonstrates engagement and connection to the film but needs improvement in grammar, clarity, and detail to be more effective. I do appreciate your efforts and the picture you attached. Please keep it up!

18/ 20 Marks

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My Hero Academia is an anime series about a boy named Izuku Midoriya. Midoriya dreams of becoming a hero in a world where most people have superpowers. Among them, Midoriya does not have any superpowers. One day, All Might, No.1 (the number 1) superhero in Japan, gives him his power, and Midoriya starts training to be a hero at U.A. High School.

One thing that stands out in the series is its use of descriptive language to show emotional intensity. Like, powerful, brave and heartwarming. I noticed that many characters are described with strong adjectives and personalities. I think MHA is an exceptional series that blends action, character development, and exciting scenes. I like the characters’ emotional storytelling and motivational words.

My only complaint is that the quality of the series is a bit poor. Also, I think it should be clearly stated in the action scenes. They should draw backgrounds of the series obviously. Except for these points, I really found in that series.

To sum up, it has received good reviews from most of the viewers. And I noticed that other reviewers focus on the action and battles. I like to learn about teamwork and life lessons and MHA has that kind of thing. You can watch it in your free time and I highly recommend that series.

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Very well done, dear Lwin. You are able to cover the necessary points in your review. You can give a brief summary of the anime: My Hero Academia which provides a solid introduction for those unfamiliar with the series.

You share what you enjoyed, like the emotional storytelling and motivational elements. You can share your personal opinions which can provide an authentic touch to the review.

Your review is balanced. However, there is only one mistake in the highlighted area. Your review would be perfect if you write in clarity and correct choice of words. You could strengthen your conclusion by giving your perspective why you recommend it. Overall, well done. Can you submit before the deadline next time?

Score: 16/20

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"Thu Lo Lu" book is full of fantastic and it deeply and resounding success. I will remember forever about U Chit Mg's life, who is the main character, as though t (as though) he lived honestly and dignified and also gave his life for Burma independent. (Burma's independence)

His wife, Jar Nel Kyaw Ma Ma Lay, wrote this book after U Chit Mg died and she had daily notes all the day since they know (knew) each others (other). In the book, you have to read not only (about) U Chit Mg('s) life but also about (the) early year(s) of Burma. His wife mentioned that U Chit Mg made (a) spy in (the) English Colony moment. U Chit Mg is my idol since he said that " he always wants to make politics behind and he don't want to be popular". "Thu Lo Luu" makes me change my thought(s) and I got (gained) many (much) knowledge about early Burma. It let me know the calling of road or market in Yangon are not the same now such as Now "General Market" is used to call "Scott Market, General Road is used to call "Mar Go MarYi Street and etc...U Chit Mg is very shame and he never go(es) to toilet if anyone is near toilet. I have never seem that kind of person who is very shy before I read this book.

My only complaint about the book is that it book includes almost 600 pages and that is absolutely short for reader who really interested (in) the book. It is also extremely dire that it includes ancient Bagan and most people can think that it is a biopic book or history book.

All the same, you should read this book because most authors give marvelous fully recommend about it. And I am willing to give 9 out of 10. It is worth (it) as you have to learn lots of U Chit Mg's experience. He had fully (full) responsibility for not only his family but also for (his) country.(P) I am sure that you won't regret it!

Score: 14/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Good job, dear Scott. Your review is quite interesting. You can portray the brief description of the story. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint. You can capture the readers' attention. There are some mistakes. Please check them in the highlighted area. Overall, excellent work. Keep it up, dear!

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The Grave of the filefiles (SP) is a Japanese animated historical movie. This movie depicts the story of two siblings, Seita and his little sister Setsuko, has (who) survived during the World War II. They have been separated from their parents when the American Bomber started firebombing in Kobe.

The screenwriter shares his realities (and) experiences about how the Civilian survives (survive) for their leaving (living) and bare of (bear) safety during the War. Besides of this, the main character, Seita brings his sister to (a/the) distant aunt and gives all the things, like his mother’s silk kimonos and money. But they need to move into (an) abandoned bomb shelter because his aunt forces them to go out before the food run out. The food is mainly targets (T) for her own family.

I am kind of upset that this movie didn’t get many awards as it should. Seeing a movie like this really changes attitudes about war- about who really suffer (suffers). I felt very painful and it reminded me of after (the) Civil War has started in Myanmar.

All the same, watch this movie and you will understand what is war and how lucky you are to have a family and a place to live in.

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

A great movie review, Ma Mar Lar. Your review reflects strong emotions and a genuine connection to the film's themes. Your personal reaction adds depth, especially as you relate it to the civil war in Myanmar. I have seen your enthusiasm and personal touch in your review. You’ve highlighted how the movie changes attitudes about war and suffering, which shows thoughtful engagement with the film’s themes. You can mention a basic summary of the whole story which is quite intriguing for the readers. However, there are some mistakes in your review. Please check them in the highlighted areas. Overall, the review demonstrates engagement and connection to the film but needs improvement in grammar, clarity, and detail to be more effective. With these changes, your passion for the film and its message will come through more powerfully. I do appreciate your efforts. Please keep it up!

17/ 20 Marks

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If u enjoy a film that (is) based on a true story, you will definitely enjoy "Hope ".This is my absolute favorite korean movie, which I watched last 2years.(P)Hope was written by Jo Joong Hong and Kim Ji Hye in 2013 and one of the things I love about it is one of the most emotional and inspirational film that I have ever seen in a while.(P)The actors were exceptional, especially Na-young as the little girl.

This movie is based on the real events of the "Na Young case " that took place in December 2008.(P)An eight years old girl(Na young) was on her way to school when she was kidnapped by 57 years old man who was drunk at the time. The little girl was seriously rapped and beaten almost to death. But fortunately, the little girl survived and she was sent to (a/the) hospital. After happening that case, the police searched the suspect immediately and after searching for 3 days(P) ,they found the suspect in his apartment. It was clearly that he commited, (and) the judge sentenced the defendant to 13 years in prison.(P)This movie shows the unhumanity (inhumanity) of the people and also it

gives the knowledge s to parents. The other thing I loved about this movie is that the characters are all very clearly described and especially, Na-Young character is more painful and realistic.

However, there is the part I do not like about this movie.(P) It focuses more on the family, especially the father(P) ,rather than deeply exploring the victim(P) 's emotional journey. The film suggests a smoother justice process than what many victims face in reality.

In conclusion, hope is a hugely entertaining movie and I really recommend it if u want to watch a true story. This movie is completely different from other movies and every parent with a young child should see.(P)l could not put it down and it made (me) emotional thought out the movie.

Score: 12/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Such a good movie review, dear Suu Myat. You can portray a brief summary of the story. Your review is quite fascinating. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint. The structure is well-organised. You can capture the readers' attention to a certain extent. There are some mistakes. Please check them in the highlighted area. Can you please check the punctuation rules? Overall, great job. Keep it up, dear!

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It Ends With Us by Colleen Hoover is full of emotions and is an impactful novel that describes love, abuse and chasing dreams. This book is all about the point of view of a main female character, Lily Bloom, a young woman who moves to Boston to start opening a flower shop which is her dream. At that time, she encounters Ryle, who will become her husband, a neurosurgeon, and Atlas who is her first love in her past. The book unfolds in a way that explores how relationships, both past and present, shape her journey.

The main reason I love this book is that the author obviously points out Lily's feelings. Lily has faced a lot of hard things in her life because her father abused her mother physically when they were in fights. She is the witness ever and her mother didn't escape these situations until her father died. Then, when she marries Ryle, Ryle’s darker side is revealed.

Despite both being in love with each other, Ryle's anger issues towards the physical abuse and violence to Lily. Colleen Hoover writes him in a way that forces readers to struggle with the complexity of loving someone who is both caring and harmful. Fortunately, Atlas helps Lily a lot to escape from toxic relationships. Atlas represents safety, kindness and comfort assistance to Lily. One of the strongest aspects of the book is how Hoover sensitively handles Lily’s internal conflict as she navigates the pain of her past and the difficult choices she must make in her present life.

On the other hand, Lily hardly did well on her career which is her dream. She has loved flowers, and gardening since she was a teenager. Her dream comes true when she starts moving to Boston and after a while, her shop is one of the best 10 shops in Boston. So, you can feel the motivations and the success of my favorite character, Lily.

Overall, this book is more than a novel; which is about self-worth and courage. Additionally, it is about trauma and resilience. You can learn how to make a choice by making a priority yourself first. Many readers find it both inspiring and heart-wrenching, as it makes them reflect on the complexity of relationships and personal choices. I will absolutely give 10 out of 10 on this book because of the above mentioned (word order).

Score: 18/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

What a great review, Su Wai. Your book review is well-structured and interesting. It beautifully highlights the emotional depth and complexity of the book but it is crystal clear that you can connect to Lily's journey. You can portray a brief summary of the story. You’ve captured how Colleen Hoover balances themes of love, trauma, and resilience, which gives readers insight into the difficult choices Lily faces. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint. The structure is well-organised. You can capture the readers' attention to a certain extent. There are a few mistakes. Please check them in the highlighted area. Overall, great job. Keep it up, dear!

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Girls like to watch k-drama series, (P) also they tend to have a boyfriend like in this drama.In the other words,Korea (Korean) actors are catching girls’ heart(s) day by day. It is (a) pleasure to watch them by feeling about (the) plot.

First of all, this movie highlights about relationships between marriage (married) couple(s) and how they through the rough time , (P) how they protect each other and how they ignore all of their difficulties.(P) Actor is Kim So-Hyn and (the) actress is Kim Ji-won.The reason of their drama so popular because of it doesn’t feel overacting and storyline with comedic moments. (Word order) Moreover,(P) girl’s standard are (C) being Baeek Htun-Woo after watching this drama,(P) including me.(P) Similarly,(P) this show make (makes) me cry alots (a lot) and it is so quite difficult to wait for new episodes.

My complaint about is (WM) they just should get to know each other and even though they have a rough time.(P) Eventually,(P) actor try (C) to confess his feelings (P).(P)On the other hand,(P)if the character doesn’t grow or much over it would be boring (P).

It has receive (G) good reviews from viewers as well as the whole word.(P) In fact,(P) if you like to watch romance drama,(P) I totally recommend to watch (watching) this. you won’t get regret (WM)!!

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well done, dear Ei Phyu. Your review can capture the emotional impact of a K-drama, particularly when the cast and the plot resonate with the audience. I have seen your enthusiasm and personal touch in your review. You can mention a basic summary of the whole story which is quite intriguing for the readers, especially like me. However, there are many grammatical, punctuation and vocabulary mistakes in your view. Please check them in the highlighted areas. To avoid making unnecessary mistakes, please make sure you double-check according to my instructions before you submit your assignment since proofreading is crucial in writing. Can you read your review one more time and improve it? Overall, I do appreciate your efforts. Please keep it up!

10/ 20 Marks

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Full of motivation tips and life sufferers, this book is a resounding success. Not only famous in original English book, but also popular in translating in Burmese. DAVE TROTT who wrote this book is phenomenal and excellent. Even though we have not touched the book yet, the title of the book is persuading (persuades) the audiences' attentions (audience's attention) superbly.

On the other hand, CHAN MYAE WIN who translated this book in (into) Burmese way is marvelous. He was able to translate the key points of the book in a splendid and easy-to-understand way that makes it interesting to read. Including uncountable motivation tips, writing how to suffer (pursue/ achieve) the goal you want to patiently, and describing about the successful people and things could catch everyone's attention.

My only complaint is some of the parts used footballs or militaries' examples. In this case, as a girl who does not know much about those things is strenuous to realize. Although, most are based on true stories.

All the same, you will never regret (it) if you choose this book, and binge-read (it). I believe everyone should have at least one of these kind of psychology books. These books definitely help you a lot. Wish that everyone who has read this book will be able to learn good practices, and diligently and effectively try to behave well.

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Such a well-written review, dear Hsu Pyae.

Your review can clearly state your enthusiasm and interest in the book by praising both the author and the translator. I have seen your personal opinions which can provide a personal touch like the belief that readers will get from the book such as motivation and inspiration. Your review is balanced which includes both strengths and a minor complaint which adds a certain level of critical thinking. Last but not least, you can add useful expressions that are related to the content like phenomenal, excellent, splendid, easy-to-understand, strenuous, etc. However, there are some areas to improve in your writing. A few grammatical issues are found. For instance, "famous in original English book" and "suffer the goal you want" (Please use suitable word.) To improve this, please proofread and double-check your writing. You avoid overgeneralizing your essay by giving specific details on how the readers can get advantages from it so your review can be more convincing.

Overall, I do appreciate your efforts. Please keep it up!

16/ 20 Marks

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The movie "Tom and Jerry in New York" (2021) follows the iconic cat-and-mouse duo as they cause chaos in the city streets and landmarks of the city. By staying true to the original concepts, Tom is always chasing Jerry, with both characters employing wild and inventive strategies to trick each other. Each episode is filled with humor and non-verbal comedy, recall of the classic shorts, but now set against the vibrant backdrop of New York City.

What's good about the series is how its ability to retain the timeless charm of tom and Jerry while adding a modern twist. The animation is sharp, vibrant, and smooth, maintaining the classic look of the characters while placing them in new, dynamic settings. The fast-paced and comedic action making it entertaining for both children and teenagers who grew up with the characters. The New York setting introduces a fun layer of new scenarios and environments to their antics.

However, the series relies heavily on (a) very predictable formula, which may feel repetitive to some viewers. While the movie tries to update the humor and setting, there's little innovation in terms of character development.

Overall, Tom and Jerry in New York is an enjoyable, lighthearted watch for kids and longtime fans. If you are looking for classic humor in a modern setting, I would recommend you to check this out. It is worth watching.

Score: 17/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Perfectly written review, dear Win Thant. You can write a well-structured and interesting review. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint. You can capture the readers' attention to a certain extent. There are some mistakes in the highlighted areas. Overall, great job. Keep it up, dear!

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I've never cried by reading the books before I found this novel. It's so interesting and I read within a day. I still remember that how the male character, Mg Lay Hlaing, loved his lover.

When I initially read this book, it looks like a boring book with some knowledge of Buddhism. But the boring things ended when the female character, Wai Wai, got back from the University. They loved each other very much and had a relationship although they are of different status. It might make you forget that it is a sad story. It also includes many astonishing twists. The ending of the novel is so miserable and you won't never expect that kind of ending.

My only complaint about the book is that why the writer makes the characters to face these kinds of terrible stuff and why he makes (them) so sweet in the middle of the story.

If you are sensitive to the love, it will take your teardrops. Even though I got depression after reading this novel, it is one of my favourite novels. Nevertheless, it is worth (+Ving) to give your time to read if you love to read sad ending story (stories).

Score: 16/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well-written review, dear Steven. Your review is quite interesting. You can portray the brief summary of the story. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint about it. You can provide a strong sense and theme of the book. You are able to capture the readers' attention. Your choice of words is excellent. There are some mistakes. Please check them in the highlighted area. Overall, excellent work. Keep it up, dear!

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"3 Idiots" is a popular Indian movie that focuses on the lives of three engineering students. The film is both entertaining and inspiring, delivering important messages about education and life. The main subject is about following your passion instead of just focusing on marks and grades.

The performances in the movie are excellent, especially Aamir Khan, who plays the character of Rancho. His character is funny, smart, and a good role model. The movie is also filled with memorable songs and emotional moments that make it enjoyable.

However, some people may find certain scenes unrealistic. For example, the pranks and dramatic situations in college seem exaggerated and not typical of real student life. Also, the movie focuses heavily on criticizing the education system but doesn’t provide many solutions.

In conclusion, "3 Idiots" is a fun and meaningful movie that offers a fresh perspective on education, though it may not be perfect for everyone. It’s definitely worth watching for its entertainment and inspiring message.

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Firstly, I want to request if you are male you can skip this because this book is a bit resemble and the author describes the story line consisting a hint of brain wash (brainwashing) the readers. So most of the readers are women though.

The title is “a mhat ta ya” and the author name is “Juu”. This novel was published in 1987. There are total two main characters named “ Su Su Htwe and mg” and the entire plot is telling about main female character is thinking and missing both of their love lives of (the) past and telling like a story teller about their present situation. The two main characters are medical students and they became enemies to lovers. In (this) case, mg’s cheated on Su Su Htwe and got married and she got trapped on (in) the previous love relationship. Even though he got married she still love(s) him. The storyline is so simple and can feel extensive.

In my point of view, when I read the first time I don’t like Su Su Htwe’s assumption I thought If I were Her, I would find another one better than him. For next time, I thought it’s not (as) easy as I think (thought). I can feel it from her place. Love can makes people become a foolish. In one of the adage(s), “love is not a toy we should not play with that”. If we get attached on (to) someone or something it’s really dangerous.

Most of the people say this book is really feminist. The author wrote with one sided obstruction. If you read with both side(s) (of) (the) (views) view you it’s (a) really good book to read. Whatever I recommend you to read this book.

Score: 16/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment for Assignment 4:

What a well-written assignment, dear Lauren. Your review can grab the readers' attention by describing the characters' growth and a brief summary of the storyline. There are some mistakes in the highlighted areas. Can you please check them and improve your writing? Please proofread your work before you submit your assignment, dear. Your review would be perfect if your sentence structures are clearer and more convincing. You also need to add a complaint about this story so that it would be a balanced one. Overall, good job!

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“What did I just even watch??" would be your first thought by the time the movie ended. Parasite (2019), directed by Bong Joon-ho, is a dark comedy-thriller that masterfully explores class divides and social inequality. It tells the story of the impoverished Kim family, who slowly infiltrate the lives of the wealthy Park family by taking over various household jobs. What starts as a clever scheme soon unravels into chaos, revealing the two families' deep class divides and social tensions.

What makes Parasite exceptional is its unpredictable plot and capability to seamlessly shift between genres, as it moves from dark comedy to intense thriller. The acting is top-notch and the director’s clever use of visual metaphors, such as vertical spaces, flood, stairs and the smell as a symbol of class distinction adds depth to its social commentary. Due to Director Bong Joon-ho’s direction and attention to detail, the story is elevated with every shot adding to layered meanings. In addition, the film continuously surprises the audience with twists and turns, keeping us engaged throughout.

Nevertheless, as the story goes from lighthearted moments to shocking violence, some viewers might find sudden changes in tone, which is a bit jarring. Additionally, it is not appealing to most of the audience since the ending leaves several questions unanswered.

All in all, Parasite is a film that should be at the top of your must-watch movie list. I promise that this movie is an unforgettable watch. I highly recommend it due to its brilliant storytelling and social commentary, plus it guided the viewers the way to change their perspective of the world on the complexities of modern society.

Score: 19/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Such a good movie review, dear Stella. It is well-structured and interesting. You can portray a brief summary of the story. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint. You can capture the readers' attention. Overall, outstanding work. Keep it up, dear!

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Are you a fan of wild animals and their hilarious behaviors? If yes, this animated film is a must watch. The movie's name is " Horton Hears a Who! " which was directed by Jimmy Hayward and Steve Martino in 2008 and it's the fourth screen adaptation of the 1954 book of the same name by Dr. Seuss. It's not just an ordinary animated movies because the main character, an elephant named 'Horton' had an extraordinary power in hearing and in this way, he was becoming the pioneer discoverer of parallel existing two different-sized worlds.

Another favorable thing is that (by) relying only (on) voices, they could communicate with each other and the stronger 'Horton' took responsibility to protect the tiny world-a speck sacrificing his life. This makes deviation from Horton's former personalities (personality) because before his discovery, Horton was a playful elephant and wanted to pass his life easily by playing, dancing and eating. Accidental and unexpected finding of different creatures' tiny world changed his life and it's also the main reason to watch this film without stopping and makes me to re-watch again and again.

My only complaint about the film is that it's not complete enough to describe the origin of the speck - how and why did it reach the elephant's world. Even more confusing is that there was no specific reason to destroy that speck by villain, Kangaroo.

But, all in all, despite 'Horton' being a kind of animated film, it can give many take home messages like unity is the key of (to) success and sometimes it can be the reason of (for) living. Having mutual trust is also an essential role of this film. I am sure that you will have a good quality time by watching this adventure comedy animated film. You won't regret for watching it but will get regrets for why don't know earlier it.

Score: 16/ 20 Marks

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

Well done. It was such a good animation review, Ma Swe Swe. It is well-structured and interesting. You can provide a balanced review by giving your personal touch and complaint. The structure is well-organized. You can capture the readers' attention to a certain extent. There are a few mistakes in the highlighted areas. Overall, great job. Keep it up, dear!

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I am the person who rarely watches films. But if I watched, I remembered the film for a long time. I watched this film when I was a kid. It is lovely, and I watched it again and again. This film, "Spirited Away," is about a young girl who is locked in the spiritual world. She and her family moved to another place, and on their way, they found an old cave, which they entered.

Unfortunately, that is the gate to the spiritual world. They've been locked there; she is trying to escape and rescue her family from there.

The story line is really good, and it can make me watch it again and again. It is an anime, and the colour templates are fantastic. That makes the audience's eyes not want to be too far away from the film.

As a person who used to like close endings, my only complaint is about the ending. It is an open ending, so there are so many ways to end. But everything is inside the audience's minds. There is no exact ending for the film.

Overall, I rated this film 9 out of 10. Even though I do not like the ending, it is worth watching. It is a relaxing and comfortable film that you should watch in your free time.

Teacher Mar Lar's feedback and comment:

A well-written reivew, Ingyin. You share a personal perspective by mentioning that you rarely watch films and why this one stood out. This adds authenticity and engages the reader by giving context. You can mention the appealing colors and visuals of the film, which gives readers a sense of its beauty and artistic appeal. However, it would be better if you make your ideas clearer. For example:

- “If I watched, I remembered the film for a long time”

- "They've been locked there"

Please also refine your sentence structure: “It is lovely, and I watched it again and again. This film, Spirited Away,” Moreover, please try to give more details so that your review would be more convincing. Overall, you are able to communicate well in your review by giving your personal touch and describing a brief summary of the plot but it could be more interesting from added more detail, smoother structure and more polished phrasing. Very well done.

Score: 19/20

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Exodus! You should not miss it. It was written by Leon Uris, translated into Burmese by Mg Moe Thu.

I read this book without stopping and found it deeply inspiring and thought-provoking. This book is about the history of Jew and how becoming Israel country and why Israel and Palestine conflicts are still happening so far.

In the book, the author wrote about the history of Jews and Palestine first. He also wrote about the love story of American girl and Jewish man, the struggle of Jewish people who were trying to survive in other countries, why they were there. The Jews and Arabs lived happily together in Palestine land before Ottoman Empire occupied. Then, the jews were driven off to other countries by the Empire and a lot of Jews left their land. The Jews believed that their god already gave a land known as Palestine and they would come back one day. It is all about the struggle of returning home and building a nation. The author wrote the historical facts clearly and interestingly. I am sure the book will take you to Israel and make you like a Jew while reading.

My only complaint is about this book was written by Jewish writer. We shouldn't believe all the historical facts are definitely correct.

But, all in all, after reading this, I believe you would like to visit to Jerusalem and meet some Jewish and Arabs people.