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Using your friend’s comments and AI feedback, how has it helped you improve your skill in writing SRQ?

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Using your friend’s comments and AI feedback, how has it helped you improve your skill in writing SRQ?

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the feedback helped me to improve the paragraph by adding specific examples and explain in detail how to do it

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my friend comments provided me with information that i have missed out and the AI provided me with information that my friend missed out to give me therefore this allows me to understand the srq fully and understand how to do the questions properly

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I think The AI feedback helped with understanding where the problem was, because sometimes you do not have an idea on what to improve on. So, using AI's feedback can help with how you can improve on it. Sometimes all you need is to elaborate more and write more detailed explanations.

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the feedback helped me add more detail and explanation to the paragraph and also explain how to do it

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it serves as guiding question to show me how to improve on my paragraph

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The comments provided by AI and by my friend helped me understand that i did not mention important things such as who was going to visit the schools and the health concerns of vaping that i did not mention.

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mrs foo favourite student ( Sherlyn lau )

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mrs foo favourite student ( Sherlyn lau )

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ai feedback has help me to know what i can improve on especially my weakness and i did way better than my first para

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The ai helped me to identify my strengths and weaknesses and helps me by giving me some advice to do certain things such as elaborate on my passage and give more examples on who can start the campaign

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Their feedback helped me elaborate more and give better examples to improve my 1st paragraph

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the feedback help me elaborate on my example and specific explain in detail how it will benefit youth .

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The comment is got were very helpful as it gave me more ideas. It helped me to improve my paragraph and make it better by using better grammar to make my paragraph smoother.

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This has helped me improve my skill in writing srq and has given me feedback on what i should improve on such as providing more details using the 5W1H better

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the feedbacks from ai provides me a clear explanation of wat i can improve on and enables me understand my mistakes